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Question: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how

they challenge the specific theories presented in the reading passage.

Question:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their

communities.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I believe serving the communities is one of the basic responsibilities which

people should carry. But, when it comes to the issue whether present young

people devote less time on helping their communities, opinions carry strong

individualistc and cultural distinctions. As far as I\\?ˉm concerned, scarcely at

all can I contend a similar stand with the statement that young people don\\?ˉt

spend enough time helping their communities.

The first and foremost reason I\\?ˉd like to elaborate upon is that serving the

communities has already become a compulsory activity in shcool. Students have to

voluntarily work for their communities at least some time in order to get

certifications. To exemplify what I mean, students in my school are required to

help their communities at least twenty hours every semester. Those who fulfill

this assignment can get a certification which will help them to apply for their

ideal college in the future. While, the people who are reluctant to do that work

will not only get punishments from shcool, but also will not get any

recommendations wrote by their teachers when they apply for universities.

Moreover, young people nowadyas are gradually aware of the significance of

the communities and are more active in voluntary community service. With the

students becoming more and more informative and mature, they continually attach

more inportance to their communities. For instance, every winter, a large numer

of students in my college, though they are very busy with their tremendous

workloads, will go to the rural area to teach the students there. My college

classmates are not compelled by our college. But they still actively participate

into this activity because of their growing concern toward their communities and

country.

Admittedly, young people nowadays have a lot of tasks to deal with. It means

they have to spend their most part of time studying and reflecting. In the

meantime, they carry a lot of pressures, which make them hard to consider about

other things. However, young people prefer to spend their precious free time

helping their communities. Because, from their perspectives, the experience of

serving the communities can release their adverse emotions and make their more

energetic and positive, which largely strengthens their efficiency of study.

In summary, although present students have to spend a lot of time tackling

with tremendous workloads, they still give enough time to participate into the

community service because of the schools\\?ˉ requirements, the student\\?ˉs

awareness and the helpful effects of the voluntary community service.

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Question:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their

communities.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I believe serving the communities is one of the basic responsibilities which

people should carry??shoulder£?í?ò?ì?oo??. But, when it comes to the issue whether

present young people devote less time on??to?? helping their communities, opinions

carry strong individualistc and cultural distinctions. As far as I\\?ˉm concerned,

scarcely at all can I contend a similar stand with the statement that young

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The first and foremost reason I\\?ˉd like to elaborate upon is that serving the

communities has already become a compulsory activity in shcool. Students have to

voluntarily work for their communities at least some time in order to get

certifications. To exemplify what I mean, students in my school are required to

help their communities at least twenty hours every semester. Those who fulfill

this assignment can get a certification which will help them to apply for their

ideal college in the future. While, the people who are reluctant to do that work

will not only get punishments from shcool, but also will not get any

recommendations wrote ??written??by their teachers when they apply for

universities.

Moreover, young people nowadyas are gradually aware of the significance of

the communities and are more active in voluntary community service. With the

students becoming more and more informative and mature, they continually attach

more inportance to their communities. For instance, every winter, a large numer of students in my college, though they are very busy with their tremendous

workloads, will go to the rural area to teach the students there. My college

classmates are not compelled by our college. But they still actively participate

into this activity because of their growing concern toward their communities and

country.

Admittedly, young people nowadays have a lot of tasks to deal with. It means

they have to spend their most part of time studying and reflecting. In the

meantime, they carry a lot of pressures, which make them hard to consider about

other things??it hard for them to consider other things??. However, young people

prefer to spend their precious free time helping their communities. Because,

from their perspectives, the experience of serving the communities can release

their adverse emotions and make their??them?? more energetic and positive, which

largely strengthens their efficiency of study.

In summary, although present students have to spend a lot of time tackling

with tremendous workloads, they still give enough time to participate into the

community service because of the schools\\?ˉ requirements, the student\\?ˉs

awareness and the helpful effects of the voluntary community service.

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