You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success.
高二英语书面表达专项训练(三)
———如何介绍建筑物
【方法与建议】
1.审题定调
文体:说明文
时态:以现在时态为主,兼顾过去时态。
内容:包括建筑物的位置、面积、修建的年代及其用途,同时简要介绍其外观,构造及所使用的材料,等等。 2.说明顺序:
以空间实现或修建的时间顺序来写。 3. 写作语言:
科学、客观、严密、简洁明了。常用到被动句。
4.写作格式:
严格按照题目的要求,分清段落,层次清楚。 5.常用句型:
It is located/situated……(它坐落于)
It covers an area of……(占多少面积) It has a history of……(有多少年的历史)
It’s…meters long/high/wide/in length/height/weidth. (有几米长、高、宽)
It’s …times biger than…(比?大几倍)
It was designed for/to do…(被设计用来干?..)
It plays an important role in Olympics Games.(在奥运会中起了非常重要的作用)
【范文1】
请根据下面提示,简单介绍“鸟巢”
地点 建筑面积 北京奥林匹克公元内 25.8万平方米,可容纳9万观众 2003年12月—2008年4月 犹如用树枝搭起的鸟巢 建造时间 外观 Early to bed and early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy, and wise.
You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success.
用途 前任联合国秘书长科奥运会期间用语举办田径、足球比赛 奥运会后可用于大型活动和比赛 菲.安南(kofi annan)“鸟巢”将成为奥运历史上难以置信的的评价 标志性建筑 注意:
1) 词数:100左右;
2) 短文须包括表中所提供的所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3) 参考词汇:田径 the track and field; 观众 spectator
【范文欣赏】
Many people showed a great interest in the 2008 Olympic Stadium----the
Bird’s Nest. Now I’d like to introduce it to you.
The Bird’s Nest is located in Beijing Olympic Park,(位置)and covers an area of 258,000 square meters,(面积)with a seating capacity of over 90 thousand spectators.(坐位)Its construction was started in December,2003 and completed in April,2008.It looks just like a bird’s nest made of tree branches from the top. During the Olympic Games, it was mainly used for hosting the track and field events and soccer matches there. After the Games, it may be used for larged-scale events and matches.(大型活动和比赛)
The Bird’s Nest is thought highly of by official and experts (被官员和专家高度评价)all over the world .The former UN secretary-general (前任联合国秘书
长)Kofi Annan gave the thumbs-up (竖起大拇指)to its design and thought it would be an incredible symbol(难以置信的标志) in the history of the Olympic Games.
【范文2】
.假如你是一名导游,请你根据所给的提示,向来北京观光的外国游客介绍2008年北京奥运会主体育场—“鸟巢”。 场馆名称 国家体育场(鸟巢) 建设地点 奥林匹克公园 建筑面积 258,000m2;长330m;宽220m;高69.2m 座席数 91,000 赛时功能 奥运会开幕式和闭幕布式;田径、足球 赛后功能 体育比赛和文化、娱乐活动中心 开工时间 2003年12月24日 Early to bed and early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy, and wise.
You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success.
完工时间 2007年底 评价 中国十大新建筑奇迹之一 注意:1. 不要逐条翻译; 2.字数:100左右。开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:开幕式和闭幕式 Opening and Closing ceremonies 娱乐活动 entertainment 平方米 square metres
Welcome to Beijing! I’d like to introduce you to the Beijing National Stadium, also known as Bird’s Nest. The stadim is located in Beijing Olympic Park , covering 258,000 square metres. It is 330 metres long, 220 metres wide, and 69.2 metres tall. The construction began on December 24,2003, and was completed at the end of 2007. The splendid Opening and Closing ceremonies are to take place in Bird’s Nest, which will hold the main track and field events as well as football matches during the games. Afterwards the 91,000-seat stadium will serve as the center of sports events, cultural activities and entertainment. It has been honored as one of the latest wonders buildings in China. That’s all! Thank you!
【上期参考范文】
Dear Editor,
The 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in 2008. Recently our class have had a discussion about its effects on Beijing.
Some students believe there are many good effects. They think the Olympics will encourage people in Beijing to learn English harder, help more people find jobs, prosper tourism and make Beijing more beautiful. Besides it will make China better known to the world. The others think the Olympics will also bring some trouble. For example, at that time, the traffic will be heavier and the environment will be destroyed. Furthermore, holding the Olympic Games will also cause more pollution and waste resources.
As a saying goes, a coin has two sides. So I think the Olympics have both
good and bad effects. And it is certain that our government will do something to avoid the bad. What is more, our competitors will do better in the 2008 Olympic Games.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Early to bed and early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy, and wise.
You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success.
【习作训练】(30分) 班级_______ 姓名_____成绩_______
假定你是李华。应你的朋友Bob的要求,写一封短信介绍“国家游泳中心”的基本情况。所写内容须包括下面表格中的相关信息。 场馆名称 国家游泳中心(“水立方\场馆地点 北京市北部,奥林匹克公园内, 与“鸟巢”比邻而居。 建筑面积(m2) 79,532 座位数 17,000 奥运会期间比赛项目 游泳、跳水、花样游泳(synchronised swimming) 赛后用途 作为公众体育锻炼场所 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已给出。 Dear Bob, National Aquatics Center is one of the most advanced stadiums the world has ever seen. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,
Li hua
Early to bed and early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy, and wise.