商务英语写作(第一次作业)

1. Rewrite the following sentences to make them concise and effective. 1) The plant is successful in terms of production. The plant has high production. 2) We wish to acknowledge receipt of your letter of July 5. Please write to me before July 5. 3) We are informed that similar goods of American origin have been sold here at a level about 30% lower than you. Similar American original goods have been sold here at a level about 30% lower than yours. 4) He will fly to Germany next week for the purpose of meeting Mr. Stwartz in person. He will fly to Germany next week to meet Mr. Stwartz in person. 5) This product not only is welcome for its reasonable price, but also for its fine quality. This product is welcome for its reasonable price and fine quality. 2. Rewrite the following sentences according to the principle of correctness. 1) Your demand for a 5% discount off the order of the goods narrows our profit margin and we could not warrant it. Sorry,your demand for 5% discount off the order narrows our margin,and we could not warrant it. 2) If there are some problems with the bikes, you can return it back to us, even though over the warranty, we will change it without charge. If there are some problems with the bikes, you can return it back to us.Even though over the warranty, we will change it without charge. 3) We'll deliver you some trail order because of the satisfication of your price and quality. We'll deliver you some trail order because of the satisfaction of your price and quality. 4) As the market is declining, we recommend your immediate acceptance. As the market is declining, we recommend you immediate acceptance.