英语四级优秀作文
the same. There are many ways by which we can reach the summit of success. I believe everybody can succeed only if they set their goals of success correctly and work hard enough towards them. First, the setting of the goals is of vital importance in that when doing so, you have to take into consideration your actual ability, the objective circumstances, the number of competitors and so forth. Only if you weigh these factors carefully can you set your goal of success in a scientific way. Second, you will have to work hard in order to climb up the summit of your success. Hard work is always one of the most essential factors in accomplishing achievements in any sense. If the goal can be accomplished without any trouble, anyone can get to it and it may not be viewed as success any more.
解析：
此作文是一篇涉及成功话题的论述文。考生需要根据提纲来写作；需要举例说明人们对成功的不同认识，阐明自己的观点并指出成功的途径。本文语言规范、地道、结构清晰。作者首先指出不同的人对成功的不同理解，然后在第一段结尾亮出自己的观点：成功的道路对于不同的人来说是不同的。第二段以谚语开头，通过first和second的运用分别指出了设定目标和努力工作的重要性。