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hometown. 或“build a factory”写成了“build up a factory”。
D）、其它语法错误，像：“richer and richer”有同学写成 “more and more rich”, “better and betterl” 则被写成了 “more and more better”， “the people there”被写成“there people”等等。
3)、关于句法错误。时态、语态、语气、单复数以及人称等诸多方面前后没保持一致。
A)、单复数。误：I hope get more informations about protect environment. 正确：I hope to get more information about protecting the environment.
B)、主谓不一致。误：I’m is going to learn more information about 正确：I’m going to learn more information about
C)、时态不一致.误：You will built factory in my hometown. 正确：You will build a factory in my hometown.
D)、语义不完整。错误：I heard of you will set up a factory in my hometown. 正确：I heard of you and I know that you will set up a factory in my hometown. 错误： The factory will helpful for my hometown’s development. 正确：The factory will be helpful for the development of my hometown.
E)、中国式英语。例如：“I also very worry about it”； “I want to know your factory whether creates the pollution”； “I want to know your company how to deal with the pollution problems.； “mother born us”
三，反思初中英语写作教学中的不足
只强调语言输出的结果，尤其是过分强调语言使用的准确性而忽视了写作过程指导的传统写作教学模式若是不思考改进，是很难适应新《课程标准》重视能力与过程考查的评价体系的。
第三部分，加强指导与训练，提高学生的英语写作水平
首先就要夯实学生英文写作的语言功底。