2018届高三英语备课组 高考英语好句朗诵+满分佳作赏析
十六启事
〖好句朗诵〗
1. Our school is looking for a native speaker of English to ? 我们学校正在找一位英语母语者来
2. If you are interested in the job information, please reply to me as soon as possible
如果你对工作信息感兴趣，请尽快回复我。
3. You can also write to ccc20091201@sina.com to inform me. 你也可以发邮件到 CCC20091201 @sina.com 来通知我。 4. The main responsibilities of the advisor include ... 顾问的主要职责包括...
5. If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview. 如果您感兴趣，请致电13011223344 找李华安排面试。 〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖 2010 全国 Il 卷：招聘信息〗
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友 Peter 表示希望来中国教书。你校现在需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1. 教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等； 2. 授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）；
3. 工作量：每周 12 学时，任选三门课，担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问 (advisor)。 满分佳作（一 ) Dear Peter,
1 Now, here is I remember you told me you were interested teaching in china.○
some good news that I hope will appeal to you. You see, our school is looking for a native speak of English to teach some courses to the senior high school students,
2The courses include who have at least three years of English learning experiences. ○
speaking, writing, Britain Today and America Today, from which you are expected to choose three to teach. Once you are employed, you are expected to work 12 hours a week. Besides teaching you also have to work as an advisor to our Students' English Club or our school's English newspaper.
3If you are interested in the job information, please reply to me as soon as possible. ○
Meanwhile, I'm always ready to help you with questions you might come up with. Yours, Li Hua
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十七倡议
〖好句朗诵〗
1. As high school students, it's our duty to tell everyone around us to save water. 作为高中生，告诉身边的每一个人节约用水是我们的责任。
2. Let's start right now and spare no effort to do a little every day, every hour and every minute.
让我们从现在开始每天努力一点点，抓紧每一天、每一小时、每一分钟。 〖模拟真题：提倡无偿献血〗 作文原题
假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华，针对目前一些地方血库纷纷告急的情况，请参照以下提示，用英文写一份倡议书，提倡无偿献血 (donate blood for free) 要点提示：
1. 社会上对献血的错误认识； 2. 指出献血的意义； 3. 开展相关活动。
〖模拟真题：提倡献血〗 Boys and girls,
Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be in short supply of blood.
Some people hold the wrong idea that donating blood does harm to the donor's health. But the truth is that when a small amount of blood is taken out, the body will make a quick adjustment to work normally.
As we know, donating blood is of great importance. Blood is important to patients, without which many can't survive. Among young people like us, donating blood is a social responsibility.
We senior high school students, who have a better understanding of medical knowledge, should set a good example for other people. From now on, our school will hold a series of activities to explain the benefits of donating blood. Donate now and save a life!
The Students' Union
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2018届高三英语备课组 高考英语好句朗诵+满分佳作赏析
十八留言/请假条
〖好句朗诵〗
1. Since you were out,I have to leave this note to you. 既然你出去了，我只好给你张便条了。
2. I am sorry that I can't attend the party to be held this Friday at your apartment. 很抱歉我不能参加星期五在你公寓举办的派对。 3. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded. 我想是否有可能把讲座录音。 〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖 09 全国II卷：外出留言〗
假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs.Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson写一留言条，内容包括： 1, 外出购物 2, 替房东还书
3, Tracy 来电话留言:1 ）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消
2 ）此事己告知 Susan 3 ）尽快回电
满分佳作 Mrs. Wilson
1 I have taken I'm going out shopping and won't be back until about 5:00 pm.○
2 At about 1 with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.○
o'clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton
3 She felt Coffee tomorrow morning as she had something important to attend to. ○
very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
注意事项
1.字迹工整、书写规范（这一点很重要，会为你赢得印象分，六月份改卷时期老师改卷任务重，天气炎热，字迹清晰工整会让阅卷老师心情好）最好。衡水体火了之后，很多学校都开始重视英文规范书写，可参考电子科大出版的《学习型字帖英语规范书写教程》里的写法指导和高考优秀范文格式。
2.字数写够。（老师看到字迹工整，字数够的作文，心里会马上把分数定位在18分，也就是及格分数，然后再读一遍作文，即使读的过程中发现有错误，最后的
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分数也不会比18分低很多）
3.作文题目中若给出了作文主要内容并用1.2.3.点或者用表格写了出来。写出的作文中一定要包括这题目中提到的所有的要点，因为在制定评分规则的时候会把总分平均分给这几个要点，如果文中没有提到某个要点，那么相应的这个要点的分就不能得，最后的得分自然也就低一些。
4.关于作文的具体内容。尽量使用有把握的单词和句子，稳中求胜。如遇到不会说的单词会句子，想办法换个说法把意思表达出来，切忌自己造新词或者乱搭配，这样会闹笑话，弄巧成拙。
5.学会分段，平时写作文大多数同学一段到底，作文最好分三段，这样会显得作文有条理，错落有致，并且看上去作文的字数要多一些。
6.要有时态和语态的意识。不能通篇全都是一个时态，或者根本没有时态，时态是英语最基本的语法，也是高考作文的一个重要评分标准。英语是一个惯用被动语态的语言，不妨在文中加入几个被动语态的句子，为作文增加光彩。
7.避免低级错误：每句话的首字母大写，人名、地名首字母大写；每段开头空出4个字符的位置；主谓一致（切忌出现I is, he are, they was等类似错误）；动词跟时态一致（如He like teaching us等）；名词单复数（名词数量大于1时，一定要用复数形式）；不定冠词（可数名词单数前一定要用a或者an）。
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8.多背范文，多记一些名言警句，并想办法合适得用到作文中去。记一些万能的开头结尾的公式。
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