十天突破新托福essay(2)

2019-08-03 13:59

Hazardous/chaotic metropolitan Overpass/underpass Stream/petrol/hydrogen driven 过街天桥 Linkers 因果关系

For the sake of our health, we should aim for a healthy diet and a healthy weight. She succeeded by virtue of her tenacity

Given the mounting pressure at work, he would sacrifice his high-paying job in exchange for more leisure time./in light of As 加从句 Due to 加n. 举例关系 For instance Such as

A classic example of this was the purchase of Alaska which so many people thought was a huge mistake but later turned out to be a really good deal when gold was discovered there in 1897. 类比与对比关系 Similarly,...

While...(句内对比)

In contrast,...(句间对比)(前后皆正确)canadian society .... In contrast ,american society... On the contrary(后句否定前句)

Rather than 看并列的前面是什么形式 Rather, 句子 让步

Despite+n./pron

Even though+sentence(已经存在的状况) Even if+sentence(没发生的状况)

No matter how tough things get,we will deal with them effectively with a positive approach. Sometimes we just have to rely on ourselves,regardless of all the intelligent friends we have.

Granted,these problems are minor at this point. But they do have the potential to develop into major headaches. 假设 If 如果

Otherwise 否则 限定

In terms of

When it comes to 下定义

High-caliber journalists are best characterized by their discipline,determination and dignity. Happiness is, essentially,satisfaction of specific human desire

A language represents the culture and the experience that are unique to the people who speak it.

暧昧

In other words,... --i.e., 那就是说 By that i mean...

加颜色

A状语前置 或非谓语从句 Adv/prep/doing/to do 放句首 Historically, Typically, In reality,

Without doubt,

Ideally, .... But in reality, ..... Not surprisingly,

To alleviate traffic congestion, Living i sheer poverty, B句中小短语

..., arguably,...有道理的,站得住脚的 ...,if any,... Cadv+adj/v Increasingly markedly Slightly

D倒装

Not only should sb ...,sb should also... Only in this way can ...

Under no circumstances should sb E强调句 It is ...that... F虚拟语气

The recent crisis could not have occurred without the participation of the biggest players on wall street.

Had i lived in a small town,my life could have been confined too very few possibilities G

Be of no interest to

Be of great importance to H

Gracefully,energetically and powerfully Intellectually and emotionally Physically and mentally I : --- G

It is not unrealistic to

It is not uncommon that

综合写作模板 第一段

1The reading passage claims that从句.

2,Yet the professor argues that +听力段子总论点,which contradicts what the reading states. 第二段

1,First,whereas the reading passage suggested that +转述阅读段子第一个分论点+一句支持句,the professor maintains in the lecture that +听力段子第一个反驳分论点。

2,this is because+转述听力段子第一个反驳分论点的支持句,-i.e.+深入支持句,没听到的话就把前半句再转述一下。 第三段

1,Moreover,contrary to the statement in the reading that+转述阅读第二个分论点,再来一两句引申最好,the professor contends that+转述教授第二个反驳分论点。

2,Then he/she supports this point with the fact that +教授第二个分论点支持句。 3,In other words,继续转述 第四段

1,Finally,the professor asserts that 转述第三个反驳分论点whereas the author of the reading claims that 阅读第三个分论点。

2,the professor proves that the claim is indefensible by pointing out that 听力论点三支持句—— i.e.,引申12句 (结尾段)

In conclusion, the professor clearly identifies the weakness in the reading passage and convincingly show that the central argument in the reading,that is,转述阅读中总论点 is incorrect.

The reading passage explores the topic of the vessels which was 2200 years old were uesd as electric batteries in ancient times.The professor's lecture focuses on same topic.Even so he argue that the vessels were possible used as electric batteries,which contradicts what the reading states and in the lecture he uses three specific points to strengthen his idea.

First,whereas the reading passage suggested that it is necessary for batteries to have been attached to some electricity conductors,the professor maintains in the lecture that the vessels were made by local people and local people chose materials just because interests or something else.

Moreover,contrary to the statement in the reading that there was no scrolls inside the jars,the professor contends that the design of vessels is original.That is because the ancient people can use it to produce electricity or other purpose.

Finally,the professor asserts that the vessels can be used in many purpose such as medicine and presenting ivisible power,whereas the author of the reading claims that the electricity was useless for ancient people.The professor proves that the claim is indefensible by point out that magic power is important for ancient people and healing patients is also important.

The reading passage explores the topic of scientists can explore ancient animals' inside to reveal materials so that they can study the actual animal tissues.The professor' lecture focus on same topic.Even so , he argues that it is impossible to get right tissues of those animal.

First,whereas the reading passage suggested that branching channels that are in the fossilized leg can find blood vessels.The professor maintains in the lecture that the stuff inside the fossilized leg might be something else instead of blood vessel,such as bacteria.

Moreover,contrary to the statement in the reading that revealing the fossil also can find red blood cells,the professor contends that the fossil may be not have blood vessels at the beginning,so it is impossible to find that.

Finally,the professor asserts that the fossil is too old to be lasting,whereas the the author of the reading claims that the dinosaur leg bone contained collage which is a fibrous protein.The professor proves that the claim is indefensible by pointing out that that collage might be taken from scientist' skin instead of animals.

In conclusion,the professor clearly identifies the weakness in the reading passage and convincingly show that the central argument in the reading, that is, scientists can reveal animals' tissues by cutting fossil is incorrect

The reading passage explores the topic that the reason why the population of the yellow cedar have been steadily declining for more than a century now.The professor's lecture focuses on the same topic.Even so ,he argue that the three reasons are unbelievable.

First,whereas the reading passage suggested that the decline may be caused by insect parasites,especially the cedar bark beetle.The professor maintains that the yellow cedar is more resistant than other trees.This is because the yellow cedar has a kind of ability to prevent itself from being poisonous.

Moreover, contrary to the statement in the reading that bears claw the cedars so that the cedars die fast,the professor contends that there are just cedars in some special areas live with bears.Then he support this point with the fact that the cedars living in Ireland declined without bears.

Finally,the professor asserts that there is no relationship between climate and decline,whereas the author of the reading claims that gradual changes of climate may cause the decline.The professor supports his claim by pointing out that the cedars living in warmer areas obviously decline as the same as which living in the cooler s.

In conclusion,the professor clearly identifies the weakness in the reading passage and convincingly show that the central argument of the reading ,that is,insect,bears and climate caused the decline,is incorrect,


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