2015年江苏淮安中考满分作文赏析：回味 真题再现
阅读下面文字，完成作文。
回味的过程是再次感受的过程，是深入理解的过程，也是重新认识的过程。
在生活和学习中，许多时候，一盘菜、一句话、一首诗，乃至一片云、一件事、一份情??都会令你回味无穷。
请以“回味”为题，写一篇不少于600字的文章。
要求：①除诗歌、戏剧外，文体不限；②文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；③书写工整，卷面整洁。
【篇二：2015中考作文整理(一)】
28中2015中考英语作文整理(一) 一.典例剖析
a. a happy time
b. let me tell you _______ 要求：
1. 请从所给的a，b两个题目中任选其一作答，分值相同。如选b题，请把题目补充完整再作答，例如：你可以写“let me tell you my dream”, “let me tell you how to learn english”, “let me tell you i love you, mom”等
2. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用mike, gina等英文名字，校名统一用guangming middle school。 4. 词数不少于60。 【审题指导】
细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：1. 把题目补充完整，let me tell you how to learn english； 2. 可以为说明文，也可以用具体事例来写成记叙文； 3. 注意写作时的前后顺序，使文章连贯； 4. 词数不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。 【高分范文】
let me tell you how to learn english
in our life, english is getting more and more important. but many people don’t know how to learn it. now let me tell you some ideas to learn it.
if you want to use english well, first you should remember english words. then youcan listen to english songs to improve
your listening skills, and you can also talk with your
classmates in english in order to improve your spoken english. if you do like this, maybe you’ll find your english is getting better.
if you have good ideas to learn english well, please tell me. 二.典例剖析
i am not a child any more
提示：在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮！但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是??成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以“i am not a child any more”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已不再是一个小孩了。
要求: 1. 请根据所给的题目，用英语写一篇短文。词数不少于60； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 【审题指导】
1. 对自己的现在和过去做比较，以此说明自己已经长大；
2. 写出自己在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事情，通过事例来证明自己的观点；
3. 作总结，再次突出主题；
4. 词数不少于60；文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
【高分范文】
i am not a child any more
i am a 16-year-old girl now. i have changed a lot. i used to be weak and short. but now, i am stronger and as tall as my mother. the most important thing is that i have learned to
understand and care about others. it was a wednesday evening. when i went back home, no one was in. so i cooked the meal. i didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. they both said the meal was very delicious, though it tasted salty. after supper, i found they were too tired. i got hot water for them. when my mother put herfeet into the water, with tears in her eyes she said, “dear, you have grown up.”
it was the first time that i cared about my parents. i realized i was not a child any more. 三.典例剖析
假设你叫王磊，目前，我市正在开展创建“文明卫生城市”，学校也提出了“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的口号，为了积极响应学校号召，上周你和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动，贡献自己的一份力量。请把你所做的事写一封电子邮件告诉你的好朋友bob。 place: train station;
time: from 8:00 to 12:00 on saturday morning; people: you and some classmates;
activities: clean the benches, pick up the rubbish, sweep the ground; feelings: a little tired but happy.
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1. 文章为电子邮件，要求向朋友讲述在响应“文明卫生城市”“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的活动中，我和同学们一起到火车站进行志愿者活动（包括时间、地点、人物、 活动、感受）。2. 本文描述自己的经历，写作时用第一人称，其他人用第三人称。3. 回忆事件通常用一般过去 时，抒发个人情感及感悟用一般现在时。语句通顺，书写规范，卷面整洁，语法正确。4.词数应不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。
【高分范文】 bob,
i’m writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week. we got the train station at 8 o’clock on saturday morning. my classmates and i decided to do something to make it cleaner and tidier. first, we cleaned the benches, andthen we picked up the rubbish and advised others not to throw rubbish here and there. at noon, we swept the ground together and then we left. we were a little tired after long hours of hard work, but we were still very happy. ihope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city. hope to write soon. best wishes! yours, wang lei 四.典例剖析
a talk to myself
提示：在初中三年的学习和生活中，你有许多快乐，也有许多遗憾。在即将毕业之际，你想对自己说点什么呢？请根据所给题目用英语写一篇短文。
要求： 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数 不少于60个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
【审题指导】
1. 写作的对象是“我自己”,行文用第一人称。2. 从①三年中的快乐；②三年中的遗憾；③对自己说的话及对未来生活的希望三个方面陈述。
【高分范文】 a talk to myself
how time flies! i’m leaving school soon. i really have a lot to talk to myself.
luckily, my teachers are very friendly. they not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a man. and my
classmates are helpful. we share happiness andsadness in our school life.
however, i’m also upset sometimes. i don’t take part in outdoor activities quite often because of too much homework. i know it’s not good for me. i’ll try my best to join in more.
i believe that my life in the future will be more and more beautiful. 五.典例分析
许多孩子都热衷于上网，但上网对学生而言有利有弊。请你根据下表提供的信息用英语写一篇小短文，描述上网的优点和缺点，谈谈 1．词数：80左右。
2．参考词汇：disadvantage n. 缺点 cheat v. 欺骗 go online上网
today many students are interested in going online. but it has advantages and disadvantages. the advantages are：
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题思路】
1．谋篇布局：通过对表格的分析可知文章可以分两部分来作。一部分写上网的优点和缺点，另一部分写自己的看法和做法； 2．时态：一般现在时；
3．人称：第一人称(表达自己的观点)。
today many students are interested in going online. but it has advantages and disadvantages. the advantages are: getting a lot of information quickly, a useful learning tool and making friends (结合要点：
具体说明网络的优点). the disadvantages are: playing games and chatting can waste time and money, so it isnt good for our study (结合要点：具体说明网络的缺点). you may be cheated when you go online (when引导的时间状语从句).
i think (过渡自然，行文流畅) going online (动名词短语作主语) is good for me. i plan to go online for an hour every day (结合要点：写自己的做法). if you make a plan (if引导的条件状语从句), you can find it very useful. we use it to open the field of vision, to study knowledge, but(转折词的使用，使行文跌宕起伏) must certainly grasp the discretion(自行决定权)． 六.典例分析
为了增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。 注意：
1．内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； 2．表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3．词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： be careful, on line, danger, call?for, go bad how to keep safe?
as teenagers，we should always keep safety in mind. but how can we keep safe? here are some of my suggestions. first，__________________________________________________________
【审题思路】
1．明确主题：本文根据图片内容就“如何保持安全”这一话题进行阐述；2．写作要点：(1) 慎重交友；(2)遇险报警；(3) 安全饮食；(4)34
【篇三：中考阅卷老师最喜欢的高分作文开头】
中考的高分作文开头，无外乎下面10种。 1题记式开头
题记式开头指在开头部分先写一小段文字作为题记，形式为“xxxxx-题记”。这些文字可以是对文章的总结，也可以是引用，感触等形式，最后加上“-题记”突出形式感，使得文章整体将更有吸引力。这是现在非常流行的中考作文开头方式，上海中考满分作文里经常出现题记式开头。