2019届高考英语作文名师指路 模板18 议论文 Word版含解析(2)

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3. 不必写标题。 【评分标准】

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。 【思路点拨】

此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以30词左右概述短文内容。接下来要分析票房收入变化的原因并给出自己的看法,并谈谈自己对票房走向的看法。作文以第三人称和一般现在时为主。 要点:

1. 概述:中国电影票房在2012—2016年间呈现不断增长的趋势,但是2016年的增长相比于前几年很缓慢。 2. 分析原因:票房增长与人们生活水平的不断提高息息相关,人们有了多余的钱,才可能消费、娱乐;另一方面,电影的制作技术日臻成熟,许多优质的电影不断上映;再者,互联网的普及无疑起到了很大的宣传作用。

3. 看法和理由:票房增速将会小幅上涨或有所回落。只要给出恰当的理由,对票房看涨或是看落皆可。 写30词的概述时,语言要简练、不拖沓。遣词造句要符合英语的表达习惯,尽量用上定语从句、状语从句和非谓语动词与倒装句等语法和句型。同时注意语句的连贯性。 【参考范文】

Possible version ne:

The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion

yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.

The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.

China’s economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase. (150 words) Possible version two:

As is indicated in the graph, the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2016.

The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors. The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment. Besides, filming technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer. Moreover, the Internet plays an important part. On the Internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well, which is both time-saving and economical.

However, the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is on the increase. Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers. (150 words) 典例02

孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题,现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。 内容要求:

1.描述漫画内容; 2.分析漫画所揭示的问题; 3.提出你的看法。 注意:

1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数, 2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯, 3.词数120左右,

4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇:铺路pave the way

From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.______________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】

漫画反映了当今家庭"以孩子为中心,父母是臣仆"这一社会现象,发人深省。作文内容要求考生"描述漫画

内容,分析漫画所揭示的社会问题并提出看法"。由此审题得知:文章分为三段,首段直观描述漫画内容,第二段联系本文题干从"孩子的成长和教育""父母包办""孩子过分依赖父母"等角度分析产生这一问题的原因,第三段提出自己的看法并提出合理化建议。写作时注意时态,描写漫画时应用一般现在时。另外注意用高级词汇和复杂句式提升文章档次。 【范文赏析】

【亮点点击】

本文覆盖全部写作要点,语言规范,论证有力,是难得的佳作。写作亮点:一是段落清晰,首段描述漫画内

容,第二段深入分析其社会、家庭原因,第三段提出针对性很强的建议。二是高级词汇和短语俯拾皆是,如proudly, sweating, nowadays, shouldering, independent, overprotection, extremely, reliant on, spare no effort以及of great concern等。三是复杂句式应用得当,如第一段中的sweating和第二段中

的shouldering the hope的非谓语作伴随状语,so reliant on their parents that..引导结果状语从句,Only in this way...构成的倒装句式等。四是衔接自然:第一段while表示前后对比,第二段的as a consequence, 第三段的in my opinion, instead of都为本文增色不少。

Writing 1

最近,在你们班英语课上,老师组织了一次主题为"Does beauty really make much sense?"的讨论。请根据下面同学们的讨论结果用英语写一篇100词左右的短文并谈谈自己的观点。

1.一些学生的观点:一副好面孔就是一张通行证,在社交、求职、竞争中起着重要作用; 2.另一些学生的观点:漂亮不等于能胜任工作,只有内在的美才是真正的美; 3.你的观点:……

参考词汇:通行证pass 社交social communication 内在美spiritual beauty 注意:

短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Does beauty really make much sense?

Last week in our English class, we had a very heated discussion on the topic—does beauty really make much sense?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Does beauty really make much sense? Last week in our English class, we had a very heated discussion on the topic—does beauty really make much sense? Some students think that a good face is a pass. Good appearance often makes a big difference in social communication, social competition, job hunting and so on. Not only can it make you become more confident but also it makes you impressive in the job interview. Other students hold different opinions. Good appearance doesn’t make any difference. Spiritual beauty is more important. A beautiful person is not necessarily one with good looking, but one with a kind heart and great talent. As far as I am concerned, both physical beauty and spiritual beauty are very important. What I want to say is that we should never ignore our spiritual beauty training while simply pursuing good appearance.

Writing 2

每逢假期,清华、北大等多所国内知名高校都会迎来大批游客。不少高校为了限制客流不得不采取收费、规定开放日等各种措施,但这些闭门措施却引来不少争议。

请你以"Should universities limit the number of visitors?"为话题,写一篇英语短文,陈述你的观点,并给出合理的解释。 注意:词数100左右。

Should universities limit the number of visitor?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Should universities limit the number of visitor? Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly popular for tourists to visit famous universities such as Peking University and Tsinghua University during the holidays. However, some universities decide to limit the number of visitors, which has caused heated argument in China. I think the number of tourists should be limited. Here are my reasons: first of all, there are too many tourists wandering through the school yard, teaching buildings, or even the library, which has a negative effect on the students who are absorbed in learning. Second, with so many


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