子是并列的没有表示转折。
第九处：考查形容词，根据and的并列作用，前面的energetic 是形容词作表语，所以这里要使用active。
第十处：根据句意，后面所接的是原因而不是结果，所以使用because。 第二节：书面表达(满分25分)
(2016·江西赣州十三县市高三期中联考)导学号 02281095
假如你是高三学生李华，毕业后想去康奈尔大学(Cornell University)深造。请结合以下要点给康奈尔大学的负责人写一封电子邮件，希望获得奖学金。
1．自我介绍，包括英语水平、独立生活的能力以及与人沟通的能力； 2．希望获得奖学金； 3．希望得到答复。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua.______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
答案：
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua.I'm writing in the hope of obtaining a scholarship in Cornell University for the bachelor's degree.
As a straight A student, I have a good command of both science and arts, especially English.I've passed TOEFL with an excellent score.Apart from my outstanding academic achievements, I take part in various after-class activities to improve my social skills and broaden my horizons, thus preparing me for an
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independent life.Furthermore, child as I am, I'm willing to help others.All in all, I believe I have the appropriate qualifications and experience for my further study.
Thanks for your time and consideration.I'd appreciate it if my application could be approved of.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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