广东省2012届高三英语二轮复习专题训练：写作（38）
第一节 基础写作
上周末我校在2600名学生中进行了有关“幸福感”的相关问题调查。数据如下： 比例 50% 30% 10% 10% “幸福感”的来源 从父母或亲友的爱、从温暖的家庭生活中感受到幸福 从助人、捐赠、义卖中感受到幸福 从友情中感受到幸福 异于上述情况，从不同角度讲述自己的幸福感 够开阔。 【写作内容】
根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容： 1. 调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象； 2. 数据的解读 3. 总体评价 [写作要求]
1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
第二节 读写任务
I have a friend Monty Roberts who owns a horse ranch (牧马场) in San Ysidro.
评价：调查情况体现了学生们是热爱生活的，但同时也反映了他们生活面较窄、视野不When he was a senior, he was asked to write a paper about what he wanted to be and do when he grew up.
The next day he handed it in to the teacher. On the front was a large red F. The boy with the dream asked, “Why did I receive an F?”
The teacher said, “This is an unrealistic dream for a young boy like you. You
have no money.
You come from an itinerant（四处奔波的）family. You have no resources. Owning a horse ranch requires a lot of money. You have to buy the land. You have to pay for the original breeding stock and later you’ll have to pay large stud fees. There’s no way you could ever do it.”
He stated, “You can keep the F and I’ll keep my dream.”
The best part of the story is that two summers ago that same schoolteacher
brought 30 kids to camp out on his ranch for a week. When the teacher was leaving, he said, “Look, Monty, I can tell you this now. When I was your teacher, I was something of a dream stealer. During those years I stole a lot of kids’ dreams. Fortunately you had enough belief not to give up on yours.”
[写作内容]
学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“坚守信念”的讨论。
读完Monty Roberts 的故事之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是 “Belief can change one’s fate” ，内容要点包括：
1. 以约30个词概括Monty Roberts的成长故事； 2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你对信念的看法，内容包括： (1) 坚守信念对一个人成长的重要性；
(2) 举一两个例子去论证“坚守信念能改变人的命运”； (3) 你的感想。
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
第一节 基础写作
Last weekend, a survey about “The feeling of happiness” was carried out
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
(conducted) among 2600 students in our school. It shows that 50% of the students gain happiness from the love of their parents or relatives and from the warmth of families. About 30% of them experience (taste) happiness by assisting others, donating and taking part in a voluntary selling while other 10% of the students feel delighted from friendship. In addition, the rest of the students describe their happiness from different angles different from the above. From the figures, we can draw a conclusion that students have passion for life, but they lack life experience and broad horizons.
第二节 读写任务 One possible version
Belief can change one’s fate
This passage tells us that Monty Roberts, who had such strong belief that he
didn’t give up his dream all the time, eventually succeeded in owning a horse ranch.
For a person, belief always plays an important role in his/her life. As a saying
goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Anyone who has strong belief can enjoy a colorful life. Otherwise, he will lose himself in his way of life.
Belief is so important that it can change one’s fate. As a deaf man, Beethoven
went on working with his strong belief in the last year of his life, though he was not able to hear his own fine music. Marie Curie, a famous scientist, also has set a good example. In 1898, Marie found a new element in the pitchblende. In order to improve her discovery, Marie and her husband worked hard. At last they saw the dim blue light of new element — radium. Her dream had come true.
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is likely to get successful and master his own life.
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