十、书面表达
分析近几年的云南中考可知，书面表达云南给的是半命题的材料作文，昆明基本上是从一个命题和一个半命题中任选其一，话题多为写人叙事，或者介绍说明某个事物，词数不少于60词，时态多为一般现在时和一般过去时。
一篇高质量的作文，离不开丰富的语言材料，因此，平时要多积累一些与生活密切相关的写作素材，更要掌握一些写作技巧：
1．审题需仔细
中考书面表达题，无论对其给出的图画提示，还是文字材料，都要仔细阅读其内容，并对材料中的信息进行筛选，抓住重点，进行立意，领悟其中心思想，否则，会导致逻辑不清，文不对题，丢分严重。
2．行文要正确
读完提示与要求后，要对提供的信息进行语言上的组织，用英语进行思维，使文章意思连贯、语言流畅、逻辑严谨。
3．语言重严谨
尽量使用自己熟悉的、已经掌握的词汇和句型，长短句子交互使用，正确选择人称和时态。对一时想不起来的单词，可“绕道而行”，由同义词或近义词来代替，也可使用同义句或者正话反说。如，“她语文学得很好”，可以说：She is good at Chinese./She does well in Chinese./She studies Chinese well./Her Chinese isn't poor.
4．书写忌潦草
卷面就像是人的脸面，干干净净最好，一篇好的作文不但内容写得好，而且字迹美观、工整、漂亮，能够得到阅卷者的第一良好印象。相反，字迹潦草，涂涂改改，肯定要被扣分。
5．检查多认真
写完后从头到尾再读一遍，检查一下文意是否通顺，是否有逻辑错误，标点符号、单词拼写和时态运用是否正确，避免笔误，确保提高分数。
(2017绍兴中考)某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life？”的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学(结果见表格) 。请据此用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述你的观点。
同学主要观点 努力学习 尊重父母 服务社会 计划未来 注意：1.短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节； 2．你的观点至少两条； 3．词数：80—100；
4．短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：尊重respect
短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
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你的观点 ??(至少两条) 【范文】
I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
Most students believe it's necessary to study hard.After all，study plays a key role in their life.They also agree they should respect their parents，who look after them every day.Besides，they're ready to serve the society and in their opinion it's really meaningful.What's more，they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.
From my point of view，we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other.Also，we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it's important to a successful life.
A(2017云南中考)
在每个人的生活中，总会有些特别的日子，请根据所给题目“A Special Day”写一篇英语短文，记叙你特别的一天。
要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2．文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名。
A Special Day
I had a very special day when I was a primary school student.
On that day，I went for a picnic with my friends.When we were about to leave after picnic，a farmer stopped us and said，“It's not good to leave so much litter here.You should clean it.”We were ashamed and did it at once.From then on，the farmer's words remind me that I should protect the environment.
I'll
never
forget
such
a
special
day
that
makes
me
grow
up.________________________________________________________________________
B(2017曲靖中考)
生活中不缺乏美，也不缺乏发现美的眼睛。美，无处不在；有人的美，事的美，景的美，物的美??你发现了什么美呢？请以“The Beauty of ________” 为题，写一篇英语短文，如：The Beauty of My Mother/Reading/Qujing/Music?
要求：1.补全并抄写题目，短文词数80左右； 2．语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3．文中不能使用真实姓名和校名。
The Beauty of My__Mother
My mother is a common farmer，she is tall and strong.She is an ordinary-looking woman，but she has a kind heart.She is good at farming and always gets good crops.When she is free，she always helps neighbors.She is patient enough to tell them skills in farming.She always thinks of others more than herself.She is willing to help others at any time and asks for nothing.
I think my mother is the most beautiful woman in the world.I will learn her good deeds from her.________________________________________________________________________
C(2017昆明中考)
A．One day in my childhood B．My________
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要求：
1．请从所给的A、B两个题目中任选其一作答。如选B题，请把题目补充完整再作答，例如：你可以写“My dream”“My hometown”“My pet dog”等；
2．注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范；
3．文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名统一使用Guangming Middle School；
4．词数不少于60个。
My pet__dog
Hi
.He__is__black__and__white
，，
I'm__Chen__Rui.I__have__a__pet__dog__in__my__home.Its__name__is__Beibei.Beibei__is__two__years__oldand__it__looks__cute__and__smart.Beibei__likes__eating__chicken__hamburgers.And__it__likes__watching__TV.Beibei__can__do__lots__of__things.It__can__walk__on__two__legs__and__it__can__dance.I__like__it__very__much.________________________________________________________________________
D(2017随州中考)
上周你班召开了一次“告别陋习，走向文明”的主题班会，会上老师让你们谈谈身边同学的变化，请你根据表格里的内容写一篇有关王明同学的文章。
过去的表现 经常和同学打架 花很多时间玩电脑游戏 经常吃垃圾食品 在课堂上吃东西、睡觉 考试不及格 注意：
1．文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文的意思连贯，语句通顺； 2．80词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3．文章不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名。
Wang Ming is my classmate.He has made great progress this term.In the past，he always fought with others.He used to spend time playing computer games.And he often ate junk food.In class he either ate or slept.He could never pass any exam.
But now，he has changed a lot.He can get on well with the other students.He takes an active part in all kinds of activities.He has healthy living habits.He always listens to teachers carefully in class and finishes his homework on time.And he does well in all subjects.We all like him now.________________________________________________________________________
E(2017江西中考)
某英文杂志中学生专栏正在征集“二孩政策”放开后孩子们的意见。你们班就“Do you agree that your parents have a second child？”这一话题，展开了一次讨论。请你根据下表提示写一篇短文，向该杂志社投稿，介绍讨论的情况。
观点 理由
现在的表现 与同学相处融洽 积极参加各项活动 健康的生活习惯 认真听讲、按时完成作业 各门学科学得很好 赞成 1.不会感到孤独； 2．可轮流照顾父母。 反对 1.担心父母更爱弟弟或妹妹； 3
你的看法?? 注意：1.词数：80词左右； 2.应覆盖所有要点；
2．害怕与弟弟或妹妹相处不好。 3．开头已给出，不计入总词数；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Do you agree that your parents have a second child? Different students have different opinions about it.
Some students agree with the idea.They think，if so，they won't feel lonely and there will be always some one to play with.Besides，if their parents get old or ill，they can take turns to look after.
However，some students disagree.They worry that they will get less love from their parents，what's worse，they may not get on well，or even fight against each other.
As for me，I'd like to have a brother or sister as company，we can share our happiness and sorrow any time.________________________________________________________________________
F(2017聊城中考)
假定你是张华，你在外地学习的好朋友王伟发电子邮件向你请教如何学好英语，请你根据以下要点用英语给他回封电子邮件。
1．看英语电影、听英语歌曲、猜测生词意思； 2．与外教交谈；
3．把单词写在纸条上，利用纸条记忆单词。
注意：80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Wang Wei，
I received your e-mail yesterday.In the e-mail，you asked me how to improve your English.Now I'd like to give you some advice about it.
Watching English movies and listening to English songs are good ways to learn English！Watch and listen several times，and guess the meaning of the new words.
Having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way.You'd better start it with greeting or a question.
Write four or five words a day on piece of paper and place them in your room.Read the words when
you
see
them
，
and
try
to
use
them.________________________________________________________________________
These are my suggestions.I hope they are useful to you. Yours， Zhang Hua
G(2017孝感中考)
假如你是某校九年级(1) 班的学生，你校正在举行“Young Star Award”的评选活动，请你用英文写一篇短文，介绍你的同学李明，以供参评。内容要点如下：
1．个子高，性格外向，为人友善； 2．学习认真，成绩优秀； 3．爱好广泛，擅长踢足球； 4．乐于助人??；
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5．得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣。
写作要求：1.短文必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．第4要点的省略号部分，需做适当发挥(2－3句话即可)。 3．词数在90个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I'm glad to hear the news that “Young Star Award”is going on in our school.I think Li Ming is the hot favorite for the award.
Li Ming is a tall boy of wide interests，especially good at playing football.He is outgoing and always friendly to others.That's why he has many friends.
He studies hard and is one of the top students at school.Besides，he takes on active part in different kinds of activities.He is good at soccer ball.
Li Ming is helpful.He always gives his seat to someone on the bus.His actions have won high praise from our school.He sets a good example to us all and we are proud of him.________________________________________________________________________
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由于父母的溺爱，现在许多孩子基本不做学习以外的事情，导致独立生活能力不强。请你根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，谈谈作为中学生，我们应该如何培养自己的独立性。
Ways begin with our own things help with housework learn actively think about things by ourselves 要求：
1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并做适当发挥； 3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4．词数 70 左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
As middle school students，it's very important for us to be independent.What should we do to make beds.Second
ork__teaches__us__how__to__look__after__ourselves.Thirdlearn__acti
us
independent?
First
，，，
__let's__begin__with__our__own__things.It's__our__job__to__clean__our__own__rooms__and__make__our__help__with__housework.We__can__help__cook__or__clean__the__house__in__our__free__time.Doing__housew
vely.We__should__learn__by__ourselves__and__finish__our__homework__on__time.Finally，
Things we can do clean our own rooms，? cook，? learn by ourselves，? ? think__about__things__by__ourselves.We__sometimes__need__to__make__plans__or__decisions__alone.Don't__always__depend__on__others.________________________________________________________________________
I think if we keep on doing these，we'll become more and more independent.
I(2017宿迁中考)
“创文明城市，争做文明人”，自创建文明城市、文明乡村以来，宿迁人民万众一心，众志成城，让人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生，我们也作出了自己的努力，请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1．种植花草树木；
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2．遵守交通规则； 3．公共场合不大声喧哗；
4．公交车上主动给有需要的人让座??(自主发挥，至少两点)。 注意事项：
1．词数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Since creating the civilized city and countryside，all the people in Suqian have made great efforts.Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.
As a junior student，we also make some contributions to the activity.
For example，we can protect our environment by planting flowers and trees.We should obey the traffic rules and never runs lights.We no longer talk or laugh loudly in public，what's more，when on a bus，we should give our seats to the people in need.
Besides we can formed a good habit.Such as throwing rubbish into dustbin，no throwing litter anywhere，queuing us for tickets and so on.
All in all，we will try our best to do what we can to make Suqian city more civilized.________________________________________________________________________
J．(2017荆门中考)
难忘的初中生活即将结束，你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。要点如下：
1．时间：6月26日下午3：00； 2．地点： 301教室；
3．活动内容：(1) 对老师用话语表达谢意； (2) 与同学交流暑假计划； (3) 师生合影，互赠留言。
参考词汇：look back at，say goodbye to，express thanks to，talk about，take photos? 注意：100 词左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总词数。 Boys and girls，
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end.So we are going to have a class meeting at 3：00 on June，26th in the Classroom 301.
The theme of the class meeting is to say goodbye to our middle school.We plan to express thanks to our teacher first，then we can talk about our summer holiday which is coming.At last，all the teachers and students will take photos together and give your wishes each other.
Please prepare for it carefully and be there on time.
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