hard.
I will be free this summer. How I wish you could come to China! I?m looking forward to your visit to my hometown. (112 words)
Give my best regards to your family.
Yours,
Li Hua 改错阅题注意事项
按照题目要求进行批阅，注意学生答题的规范性。尤其改错多者，从第十一处起不计分。 书面表达评分细则
1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3、词数少于90和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点（题中三点，可扩充）、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性，根据表达内容的层次适当分段及语言的得体性。
5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 各档次的给分范围和要求 0分：信息未能传达给读者。 第一档：（1—5分）：未完成试题规定的任务。 第二档：（6—10分）：能表达观点，但不够充分，很少句子可读，未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 第三档：（11—15分）：能表达观点，但欠充分，语言错误较多，基本完成了试题规定的任务。 第四档：（16—20分）：观点正确，陈述合理，有部分语言错误，较好地完成了试题规定的任务。 第五档：（21—25分）：观点正确，陈述合理，极少语言错误，很好地完成了试题规定的任务。
附：听力材料 Text 1
M: I rushed here to buy a drink. Why is the bar still closed? W: They are having a brief staff meeting. Be patient. Text 2
W: Your apartment looks great. By the way, where is your family?
M: My parents are at my elder sister?s. My brother lives in the school dormitory. W: That means we will have a quiet evening studying together. Text 3
W: Are you going to take the job, George? M: I don?t know. The salary is OK. W: What about the hours?
M: They are long but I don?t mind that. I?m just a bit worried about the amount of paid leave. Text 4
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W: Wow, the colour and the style look superb. When did you get it? M: I bought it last month. It?s very comfortable to sit in it. W: Is it nice to drive? M: Yeah. And it?s fast. Text 5
W: You look like you?re in a hurry!
M: I am. I?ve to get 50 colour copies made, then get them all air expressed.
W: I won?t keep you then. Actually, I?m in a bit of hurry myself. I need to have the tailor shorten this jacket. Text 6
M: Now, about the travel documents for the Australian group, we?ve had everything mailed to them, right?
W: Mr Evans, we gave you the package of travel documents to give to Mr Wells the other night at dinner.
M: A white envelope about this big? W: Yes.
M: I gave it to Mr Rashid before he left for Lebanon.
W: Oh, Mr Wells needs those documents the day after tomorrow! His group is flying to Australia on Thursday.
M: Oh, what a mistake I made! Text 7
W: What can I do for you, sir?
M: I?d like to return this watch. I bought it here five days ago. It stopped working after I went swimming with it two days after I bought it.
W: This shouldn?t happen to this watch. It?s for diving professionals. M: I know. That was the reason I bought it. W: Do you have your receipt? M: Yes. Here it is.
W: I?m afraid you can?t return it. What we can do is fix it for you. It could take as long as four weeks. Is that OK? Service is really slow with this watch manufacturer. M: What about replacing it?
W: I?m not sure whether we have this watch in stock. How about ordering one from one of our other stores in Ox Valley? That will only take two days. M: That?ll do. Text 8
W: So how did the conference go, Jodie?
M: Oh it was good. All the sessions were interesting and the speakers were really good. The organisation was a lot better this year, as well. I think having a smaller number of people there made a big difference. You know, you can make decisions a lot more quickly. W: And how was the hotel?
M: Fine. The conference rooms were a good size and the hotel rooms were clean and very comfortable. I really liked the hotel a lot. W: And how was dinner on Saturday?
M: Ah, that was probably the only thing that people really complained about. The food in the
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restaurant wasn?t very good and the service was slow. If we go back to the same hotel again, we?ll have to find another restaurant. Text 9
M: Janet, it?s Oscar. Did I wake you up? W: No, but I?m going to bed soon.
M: Sorry. Listen, I?ll arrive in Florida on the 15th, Orlando Airport. Do you want to meet then? W: Yeah, sure. And how are you getting around Florida? M: I?m hiring a car at the airport.
W: And I suppose you?ll be driving straight to Disney World. M: Of course. How about meeting there?
W: Sorry, I can?t. I?m working that week. But why don?t we meet at the Kennedy Space Centre at the weekend? It?s not that far from my company.
M: OK. And then I?m meeting John Hamilton. Do you remember him from college? W: Yeah, I remember him.
M: We?re going scuba-diving. Then we?re driving straight up to the Panhandle. You know, we want to spend some time relaxing on the beach. W: Right, call me when you arrive in Florida. Text 10
Are you interested in Tokyo? It is one of the most confusing cities in the world. Over 20 million people live and work there, and many world famous companies have their offices there. But most streets don?t have names. So how can you find your way in Tokyo? Most people in Tokyo are very good at giving directions. They often use maps when they give directions. Advertisements in newspapers or magazines, for example, usually have a small map to help you find the company. If you?re going to visit someone?s house, it?s a good idea to ask the person to draw a map of the local area. If you get lost, the best idea is to go to a police station. In Japan, each neighhourhood has a small police station and the police officers there have a map of all the buildings there. Giving directions is an important part of their job.
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