? Living in the era of information and technology, individuals have access to a variety
of recreational activities. It is obvious that recreational activities are relaxing and we can benefit a lot from it. Apart from this, interests can be cultivated and friends also can be made , which makes our life colorful. Moreover, what makes them convinced is that enjoying recreational time is of great significance for them to make friends. 二段:观点阐述(弊) +原因
Beneficial as these activities are, others have an opposite perspective. First, they argue that taking part in them means a great amount of time, money and energy; therefore, their work may be afflicted. In addition, what worries many parents or teachers is that some games (gambling or computer games) may have negative influences on teenagers’ learning
? 尾段:我的看法(观点阐述)+具体说明(理由)
Who is right? I think there is something right in both arguments. However, I am convinced that we should attach more importance to our study or work firstly. Then, we are also expected to get relaxed through positive recreational activities. what kinds of positive aspects do they contribute to it?
? 表弊but on the other hand, sth, also has some unfavorable aspects. ? 首段:问题描述 = 背景+描述+总结
In the present-day world, English has become indispensable. However, it can be noticed that learners pay less attention to spelling than ever before. Therefore, this problem has become a matter of concern for teachers and students. 中间段:原因分析= 主题句+原因1+原因2
Generally speaking, several reasons can account for this phenomenon. To begin with, while writing, students tend to type on computers, which can correct spelling mistakes automatically. In addition, most English tests are based on choosing correct answers, in which spelling is not a necessity.
尾段:建议措施= 主题句+建议1+建议2
To tackle this issue, I am convinced that “Practice makes perfect.” First, all English learners – students from primary schools, middle schools and colleges – are highly hoped to practice word-spelling. Second, it is suggested that English exams should be reformed, in which correct spelling should be a basic requirement ? 表重要:impress upon sb that…
? Sth is crucial in … we should accord priority to sth. ? 表原因:there are a number of reasons for it, but in general, they come down to two major
ones.
? What are the possible reasons giving rise to it/accounting for it? ? Three reasons, in my mind, can be employed to account for it. ? 表措施:it is highly recommended that continuous efforts should be made for sb to do sth. ? China is confronted with a severe problem, many immigrating abroad. Outstanding
people, in increasing numbers go abroad for better opportunities.
? Many reasons can account for the widespread brain drain in China. To begin with, their
potentials, in those people’s opinion, can not be developed to the full. Moreover, some others can not resist the temptation of better living and working conditions. Apart from these, some do so for the sake of their children.
? Obviously, China badly needs these people to help her development. So it is highly
recommended for the government to take measures to protect our human resources so as to enable our country to take of in the future.
? On Volunteering activities. 1. 越来越多的人从事志愿者工作
2. 志愿者工作的社会意义 3. 作为大学生,应该怎么做 首段:现象描述= 引入现象+具体描述+总结现象
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. Actually, an increasing number of people become volunteers every year in China.
? 中间段:意义阐述= 主题句 + 具体意义
Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both volunteers and the society. For volunteers, these activities provide wide opportunities for them enrich their social experience, as well as to cultivate their awareness of responsibility. For the society as a whole, volunteers have been playing an active role in constructing a more harmonious society. It is their contribution that makes our society more livable. ? 尾段:我的看法(观点阐述)= 主题句+具体建议
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? As modern college students, we are well-advised to get actively involved in volunteering
activities. By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, we should take this chance to learn and to grow
? 引出观点recent studies have led the public to realization that../as is shown in the table…
作结论taking all the elements stated above into account, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that it is high time we did..观点分歧性nowdays, a heated debated about sth is under way in china. Some people hold that..while the others contend that..
not only should the local government take some effective measures to…but also ourselves make great efforts to..//to solve the problem, in my humble opinion, the following measures should be taken.同时善于利用疑问句来作主题