This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”. I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents.
I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill. I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city. I hope I can become a filial piety youth like them.
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【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:set an example for为??树立榜样；used to do sth过去常常做某事；take care of照顾；try one’s best to do sth尽力做某事；强调句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。 考点：考查提纲类作文。
[2015年题组]
1. 【2015年江苏省苏州市中考英语试题】书面表达（共1题；满分20分）
为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。
历史悠久，深受喜爱 常 识 世界杯4年举行一次 男生女生皆可参加 好 处 利于培养团队精神 考生自拟(至少1点) 偶 像 梦 想
梅西，有足球天赋 考生自拟(至少1点) 6
注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇：梅西 Messi Dear classmates,
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.
Thank you for your attention. 【答案】 Dear classmates,
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020. Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. Playing football has lots of advantages. First, both boys and girls can take part in it. Second, it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health.
I’m a football fan. Messi is my hero. He has a gift for playing football. My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi. I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.
Thank you for your attention.
写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second等使
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得短文层次清楚。
【考点定位】考查提纲类作文写作。
2、【广东省2015年中考英语试题】书面表达（15分） 每年夏天，溺水事故频发。 请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
内容包括：
1.我们应该如何防止此类事故发生？（两点建议） 2.如果看到有人落水，我们应该如何施救？ 3.呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。
作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中提到出现的学校真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡
上。
Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?
【答案】
Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?In my opinion, we shouldn’t go swimming in dangerous places or places we know little abou, such sa reservoies and rivers . Second , we had better not swim when we feel tired or hungry.
If we see someone fall into the water, we shouldsave him in a perpor way . For example , we can shout loudly as we can to get those with good swimming skills to help him.
Life is valuable . We should take it seriously. We must remember that safety should always come first while swimming.
写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。如提建议的句式：
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In my opinion, we shouldn’t go?, we had better not swim?.条件状语从句等。 【考点定位】提纲类作文。
3. 【2015年安徽省初中毕业学业考试英语试题】书面表达（共1小题，满分25分）
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思，请根据下列提示回一封电子邮件。
● 点赞（Dianzan）：赞同、喜爱 ● 任性（Renxing）：随心所欲 ● 秒杀（Miaosha）：快速达到目的 ● 土豪（Tuhao）：很富有 ● 。。。。。。 注意：1. 词数80-100；
2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；
4. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter,
As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples.
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All the best!
Yours, Li Hua
【答案】 Dear Peter,
As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in China. Here are some example.
One of the most popular words is Dianzan,which is often used when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When you say somebody is Renxing,you mean that they will do whatever they like. The phrase Miaosha first came from online shopping, which means you can complete your
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shopping order before others. But now it’s widely used when you achieve your purpose in a very short time. If you descibe somebody sa a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.
You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning , you’ll know more about our language and culture. All the best!
Yours Li Hua
写作亮点：这篇短文语言无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。在具体的写作中句式丰富，如：定语从句which is often used when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing.，宾语从句; you mean that they will do whatever they like,条件状语从句: If you descibe somebody sa a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.等。 【考点定位】话题作文。
4. 【广州市2015年初中毕业生学业考试英语】书面表达（共1题，满分15分） 你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。
Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. ? 注意：1. 参考词汇：模型制作 model making 2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
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