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Yours sincerely, Li Ming
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一篇经典的高分范文
2003年《温室花朵经不起风雨》
It goes without saying that the drawings aims at revealing a common and serious problem in China: how to educate and cultivate the young. Let us take a close look at the drawing. In an ideal condition, the flower blooms. But when moved out of greenhouse, it perishes under the rain and storm. It is obvious that the flower in greenhouse can’t withstand wind and rains. (5, 67)
Nowadays the younger generation in China, like the flower in the greenhouse, live under the full protection from their parents. Parents want to show all their love to their children. They give the children all the best thing they can afford and do not let their children do anything at home. Self-centeredness and capriciousness have become traits of the young generation. Once leaving their parents, many young people cannot make a living of their own. They get lost when steping into the complex reality and cannot face any hardships and difficulties. (6, 75)
Child education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by educational experts, but also by people in all walks of life. The failure if child education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to the children themselves. Thus, it’s high time that parents educators and the government made concerted effort to put an end to this education. (3, 67)
本篇文章20分,只是稍微改了几个错误的单词。本文三大段,分别是5、6、3句话,共用了5个套话,由此应该了解大作文的句子应该达到的长度,太多太短的句子使文章显得低级、赘余。本文除了条理结构清楚、词汇丰富,还有一个特点就是词伙关系(多用并列),彰显作者功底。
部分特殊的形容词加-ly构成大副词,表程度“十分”,如:badly, terribly, hopelessly, frighteningly, awfully, surprisingly, amazingly, deliciously, breathtakingly等。 More often than not = often