18、【答案】
Last Friday I saw the worst weather in years. In the morning, the sun was completely blocked so that I
could see something clearly. I stayed at home, look outside. That came into sight was a flash of lightning.
nothing looking What
Seconds later, the noise of thunder broke the silent. Then a strong wind starts to blow into my room. Pieces
silence started
of paper on my desk was blown high into the air and some flew out? the open window. Then I closed the
were of window when it rained hard and near broke my window. nearly
What a bad weather! I hate it so I can’t go out to play. because
【解析】1. 考查代词。根据句意可知我什么也看不清。故将something改为nothing。 2. 考查非谓语动词。这里的look outside作stay的伴随状语，故look用现在分词形式。句意：我呆在家里，看着外面。故将look改为looking。
3．考查名词性从句。分析句子可知，从句缺少主语，故用关系词what。句意：一眼就看见了一道闪电。故将That改为What。
4．考查名词。定冠词the后用名词。句意：雷声打破了沉默。故将silent改为silence。 5．考查时态。根据全文可知，这里用一般过去时。句意：然后，一阵强风开始吹进了我的房间。故将start改为started。
6.考查主谓一致。因为主语是Pieces of paper，谓语故用复数形式。句意：桌上的一些纸被吹得很高。故将was改为were。
7．考查介词。fly out后接名词the open window需加of。句意：一些纸飞出了窗外。故在out后加of。
8．考查副词。动词前用副词修饰。句意：几乎把我窗户打破。故将near改为nearly。 9．考查冠词。名词weather是不可数名词，故不用冠词。句意：天气多么坏啊！故将a去掉。
10． 考查连词。根据句意可知后句是原因。句意：因为我不能出去玩。故将so改为because。
19、【答案】 Dear Editor,
Recently our school has set up a rule that no student ?allowed to take their mobiles into class, which
is
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us
Many of the students feel strong against the rule, arguing that the mobile had become a necessary part
strongly has
of our life. They also consider that a must for us to get relaxing from our busy studies. it relaxed
When it comes to me, like some other student I hold a different opinion. While a mobile phone can help
students
us get some relief, with it we can be more devoted to our studies,but spare more time to communicate
without and
with those around us. Therefore, I believe in this school rule is beneficial to every student. Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
1. 考查被动语态。句意：最近我们学校制定了纪律，学生不允许带手机到课堂上……。allow做谓语动词与主语no student是被动关系，结合语境可知，文章讲述现在的事情，故用一般现在时的被动语态，且主语是第三人称单数。故填allowed前加is。
2. 考查代词。among是介词，作宾语用人称代词宾格，故将we改为us。
strongly作状语修饰动词feel，3. 考查副词。作状语用副词形式。故将strong改为strongly。
4. 考查动词。文章描述现在的事情，用现在完成时态，主语the mobile是第三人称单数。故将had改为has。
5. 考查代词。句意：他们也认为我们从繁忙的学习中放松也是一种需要。it作形式宾语，真正的宾语是不定式复合结构for us to get…。故将that改为it。
6. 考查过去分词。relaxed做形容词，表示“感动放松的”；relaxing“令人放松的”；此次指我们感动放松的。故将relaxing改为relaxed。
7. 考查名词。student是可数名词，由some修饰用复数。故将student改为students。 8. 考查介词。句意：尽管手机可以让我们得到一些放松，但是没有它，我们可以更加致力于学习。根据语境，故将with改为without。
9. 考查连词。句意：……没有手机我们更加致力于学习，并且可以抽出更多的时间与我们周围的人交流。前后文是并列关系，不是转折关系。故将but改为and。
10. 考查介词。句意：因此，我相信这个学校规定对每一个学生都是有益的。believe后接宾语从句，believe in表示“信任”不符合句意。故去掉believe后的介词in。
20、【答案】
I am the shared bike. I’d like to be on the street to serve for people. They can ride me just via a mobile
a
app. But horrible things happen a few days ago. Several people stole some of us with paying their bills on the
happened without
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angry for and
which those bad guys had done. Thanks to some kindly people, we received careful “treatment”. Now, you
what kind your
help as well as the whole society’s attention is what we need most. We are designed to help people who are
stuck? the heavy traffic. We are neither toy nor private vehicles. Please obey the basic rules. in或者by toys
【解析】本文是共享单车的自述，解释了共享单车受到的不公平待遇，希望人们善待共享单车。
1.第一句：the 改为a.考查冠词。bike是可数名词单数，此处表示一辆共享单车，故the 改为a。
2.第二句：去掉for.考查动词。句中动词serve是及物动词，后面直接加宾语，不用加介词。故去掉for。
3.第四句：happen 改为happened.考查动词时态。根据时间状语a few days ago可知用一般过去时，故happen 改为happened。
4.第五句：with改为without.考查介词。此处指有的人不在应用上付款偷走了一些单车，表示没有付款，故with改为without。
5. 第五句：but改为and.考查连词。此处指有些人不付款偷走单车，还对我们不好。前后句是并列关系，不是转折。故but改为and。
6.第七句：which改为what.考查宾语从句。此处指对那些坏家伙所做的事感到生气，表示做的事用what引导宾语从句，故which改为what。
7.第八句：kindly改为kind.考查形容词。此处修饰名词people用形容词，故kindly改为kind。
8.第九句：you 改为your.考查物主代词。此处修饰名词help用形容词性物主代词，指你的帮助，故you 改为your。
9.第十句：stuck后加in或by.考查介词。此处指被交通堵住，或是在交通阻塞中堵住，故stuck后加in或by。
10.第十一句：toy改为toys.考查名词。和句中主语和动词We are一致，名词也用复数。故toy改为toys。
21、【答案】
Last Friday, the evening fell, but my parents hadn’t come back home yet. I stopped doing my homework didn’t
butdecided to make a meal for my family instead of just wait. It was my the first cooking. I went online to
and waiting
find information on how ?cook home-style dishes. With the step-by-step direction, I managed to make a todirections
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dish. Then I tried to cook other. When my Parents got home, they were amazing to see the tasty dishes I
another amazed
made. Immediately my mum took pictures for them and my dad gave me a big hug. I real enjoyed the meal
of really
that evening. 【解析】
1.考查动词。本句有时间状语Last Friday，说的是过去的事情，所以要用一般过去时态。故将hadn’t改为didn’t。
2.考查连词。句意：我停止做我的家庭作业，并且决定为家人做一顿饭，而不只是等待。前后两句应该用and（并且）连接，故将but改为and。
3.考查动词。介词of后要加名词或动名词，故将wait改为waiting。
4.考查冠词。句意：这是我第一次做饭。名词cooking前面已有物主代词my修饰，不再用定冠词the，故将the去掉。
5.考查不定式。此处要用疑问词how加不定式to cook home-style dishes作介词on的宾语，不能用动词原形作介词的宾语，故加to。
6.考查名词。名词direction（用法说明）是可数名词，此处指“一步一步的方法说明”，所以要用复数形式，故将direction改为directions。
7.考查代词。形容词other（其它的）不能单独作宾语，要用代词another（另一个）作宾语，故将other改为another。
8.考查形容词。形容词amazing（令人吃惊的）修饰物，与物有关；而形容词amazed（吃惊的）修饰人，与人有关，故将amazing改为amazed。
9.考查介词。固定短语take pictures of（给……照相片），故将for改为of。
10.考查副词。此处要用副词really（真正地）作状语，修饰动词enjoyed，故将real改为really。
22、【答案】
1. inspired改为 inspiring
2. 删除was或在was前面加which/that 3. his 改为 their
4. had改为 have 5. life改为lives 6. without 改为 with 7. can改为must 8. can后加to
9. adequate改为adequately 10. that改为 what
【解析】本文记叙了我们班级进行的“我的中国梦”的讨论，我的梦想是进入医科大学，未来治病救人。
1. inspired改为inspiring 考查形容词。现在分词转换而来的形容词“inspiring鼓舞人心的”通常修饰事物。所以本句中该词做定语修饰名词短语Chinese Dream。
2. 删除was或在was前面加which/that 考查句子结构。删除was后，过去分词短语put forward by President Xi作为定语修饰Chinese Dream；在was后加that/which，就变成定语从
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句that/which was put forward by President Xi修饰先行词“Chinese Dream”。
3. his改为their 考查代词。本句主语“others其他人”是复数名词，所以本句中使用their指代others。
4. had改为have 考查时态。原句中过去完成时表示过去某个动作之前就已经完成的动作，而本句并没有说明是在过去的过去发生的事情，使用现在完成时“have wanted....”表示我一直都想.....。
5. life改为lives 考查名词单复数。本句中名词“life生命”是可数名词，前面的名词people是复数形式，所以也应该使用复数形式“lives”。
6. without改为with 考查介词。句意：医生可以使用他们的专业知识帮助人们过更好的生活。根据句意可知使用肯定句。所以原句否定意义的介词without要改为with。
7. can改为must 考查上下文串联。本句中must与后句中must形成对应；句意：为了实现我的梦想，从现在开始我必须努力学习。
8. can后加to 考查不定式。本句中不定式to get into a good medical college做目的状语。句意：为了进入一所好的医科大学，我必须学习我能够学到的尽可能多的知识。
9. adequate改为adequately 考查副词。副词在句中通常做状语修饰形容词、副词或动词，形容词通常做定语修饰名词或代词。本句中副词adequately做状语修饰谓语动词prepare myself for the job of a doctor。
10. that改为what 考查表语从句。本句中what引导表语从句，并在句中作为动词take的宾语。
23、【答案】
Last week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. There
in Seeing
the doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for ?long time. Jack nodded his head
immediate.
if/whether a immediately
The doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. When Jack tasted
instructions
the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine for health tastes
brought
bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recovered three days later,
it he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine. amazed 【解析】本文主要讲了外国学生Jack看中医的一次经历，深刻体验了中药的神奇疗效。
1.考查介词。表示“在我们的数学课上”，应该用in。
See与其逻辑主语I之间是主动关系，see改成seeing。 2.考查非谓语动词。所以用现在分词，
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