2014届高三二轮专题强化训练：短文改错（真题+模拟）
(一) (2013·全国Ⅰ)
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
答案：
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old
hold
songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
passed
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard
well/clearly
shoulders
that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself
to/into
him
apart from others in our small town, ∧ he was strong and powerful. In ＼a fact, he even
and
scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However,
when
he was the gentlest man I have never known.
ever
(二) (2013·全国Ⅱ)
The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
答案：
The book I'm reading of＼ talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started
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in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and
Having
dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes
which
became
another meal of ∧ day. Interesting， it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷
the
Interestingly
with
器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea
drunk
got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British
cups
habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
growth
(三) (2013·浙江)
Dear Diary，
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained，“He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.
Good night and remember you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours， Rosemary
答案： Dear Diary，
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far＼ away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained，“He was lucky to
moved
find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate， my school or
another
classmates
and
just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad， now I have to share a
worse
room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is ∧ first day of school. I am awfully
the/my
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tiring， but I know I'll never fall sleep.
tired
asleep
Good night and remember you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and
are
my only friend.
Yours， Rosemary
(四) (2013·辽宁)
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
答案：
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work.
on
With little sleep and hardly any break, so＼he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is
has
health
which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid ∧ visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager
what
a
to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into
his
stepped
the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together.
pictures
I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
much
(五) (2013·陕西)
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole
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and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.
Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious. 答案：
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for
went
our
the lake. As soon as we arrived, so＼ we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting
After
for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my
impatient
but
grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole
was
and ∧ fish was caught. Within the next few minute， my grandfather also caught a fish.
a
minutes
Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
Feeling
(六) (2013·四川)
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?
答案：
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty， but I tried hardly to
difficult
hard
do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to＼ copy my answers. After think
asked
thinking
for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to
both
the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had ∧ same answers in the tests.
the
test
We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset.
or
I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me？
did
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(七)
(2013·宁波市二模)
Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.
答案：
Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother. He has been died for a year. When
brothers
dead
I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before
me
using
dawn. We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in ∧ local restaurant
a
for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn,
travelled
before
he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and
or
a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but＼ I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.
patient
(八)
(2013·许昌平顶山新乡三市三调)
My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to feel young forever. Because I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.
答案：
My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I ∧ had the dream of
have
becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could
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