两个定语从句的使用都比较牵强。最后一个句子也有汉语式英语的嫌疑。 但总体上这些错误没有影响理解。文章中也能应用像convenient, take the bus. 不定式复合结构等词汇和结构。趣闻结构尚连贯。
高考书面表达经典句式
是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的以下基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1－2个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。 1、表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this. 2）The reasons for this are as follows. 3）The reason for this is obvious. 4）The reason for this is not far to seek. 5）The reason for this is that...
6）We have good reason to believe that...
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved. Secondly，most people are well paid，and they can afford what they need or like. Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life. 注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。 2.表示好处
1）It has the following advantages. 2）It does us a lot of good. 3）It benefits us quite a lot. 4）It is beneficial to us. 5）It is of great benefit to us.
例如：
Books are like friends. They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons. Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us. 3.表示坏处
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2）It does us much harm. 3）It is harmful to us. 例如： However，everything divides into two. Television can also be harmful to us. It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television. 4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb.to do sth. 2）We think it necessary to do sth.
3）It plays an important role in our life. 例如：
Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business. Soon, computers will be found in every home，too. We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age. 5.表示措施
1）We should take some effective measures.
2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties. 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with.
例如：
The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious. Therefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it. 6.表示变化
1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years.
2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications. 3）The computer has brought about many changes in education.
例如：
Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years. The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek. Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins. 7.表示事实、现状
1）We cannot ignore the fact that... 2）No one can deny the fact that... 3）There is no denying the fact that...
4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in. 5）However，that’s not the case. 例如：
We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution. To solve these problems， we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution. The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment. 8.表示比较
1）Compared with A，B...
2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV. 3）There is a striking contrast between them.
例如：
Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable. Firstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleum. Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem. Last but not least，they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise. 9.表示数量
1）It has increased（decreased）from...to...
2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，000.
3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15％ compared with that of January. 例如：
With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased. 再如：
From the graph listed above，it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000. 10.表示看法
1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth. 2）People have different opinions on this problem. 3）People take different views of（on）the question. 4）Some people believe that...Others argue that... 例如：
People have different attitudes towards failure. Some believe that failure leads to success. Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor. However，others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers. 再如：
Do “lucky numbers really bring good luck？Different people have different views on it.
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高考英语写作常用句型
一、表示比较和对照关系的句型：
1) A is to B what/ as C is to D(A之于B犹如C之于D). 2) Just as..., so...
3) A and B have sth in common.
4) A is similar to B.
5) The same is true of，The same can be said of(……也是如此). 6) The advantages of A are much greater than B.
7) compared with B, A has many advantages.
8) The advantages outweigh the disadvantages(利大于弊).
9) Wonderful as A is, however, it has its own disadvantages too.
10) Although A enjoys considerable advantage over..., it can not compete with B in... 11) Contrary to widely accepted views, I believe that... 12) What people fail to consider is that...
13) It is one thing to insist that..., it is quite another to show that... 14) A is superior(inferior) to B.
15) ...varies from person to person(……是因人而异的) 16) A is just the opposite (to B)
17) A differs from B in that…(A不同于B在于……) 18) …is not the same (as)
二、过渡性句型： 1) this is true that... 2) ...also...
3) It is one thing to...; it is another to... 三、描写图表和数据的句型
1) .. . rank first (both) in...
2) The number is ...times as much as that of ...
3) The figure has nearly doubled, as against that of last year. 4) It accounts for 35% of...
5) By comparison with ..., it decreased/increased/fell from...to... 6) ...rise rapidly(slowly) 7) ...remain level...
8) ...reach ...
四、图表作文中的过渡、概括句型： 1) As can be indicated in the table, ... 2) As we could find out later， ... 3) As is revealed in the table，... 4) As the survey results show，...
5) This table provides several important points of comparison between，... 6) The two graphs depict the same thing in ...
7) The key findings taken from the surveys are as follows: 8) According to the figures given in the table, ... 9) This chart shows that ...
10) As is shown by the graph, ...
11) It can be seen from the statistics that ...
12) It is generally believed /accepted/thought/held ... 五、说明原因的句型:
1) There are some/two/many good reasons for.../to do... 2) We have two good reasons for... 3) The reason for ... is that + 从句
4) Among the most convincing reasons given by people for..., one should be mentioned... 5) One may think of the trend as a result of...
6) The change in... largely results from the fact that...
7) There are several causes for this significant growth in... First... 8) A number of factors could account for the .... 9) It is no simple task to give the reason for ...
10) The cause of /reason for higher prices was an increase in demand.
11) Because/As/Now that/Since the demand has increased, the prices are higher. 12) An increase in demand causes/results in/leads to/produces higher prices.
13) The demand has increased.
14) Therefore,/As a result,/For this reason,/Because of this,/Consequently, the prices are higher.
15) If there is an increase in demand, then prices rise./go up. /boost./are higher. 16) Different people look at...in different ways... 六、表示不同看法的句型:
1) Different people have/hold different opinions/views on the question/problem/matter. Some believe that ...; Others argue that ... :Still others maintain that ... 2) They are quite different from each other in their opinions. 3) Some people hold the opinion that it is good to .... 4) They think quite differently on this question.
5) Opinions vary from individual to individual, from culture to culture. 七、表示必须,紧急,有困难做某事的句型:
1) It is important (necessary, urgent, difficult, easy, convenient, comfortable, expensive, desirable, advisable) for sb. to do sth.
2) ...have trouble/difficulty/a hard time/a difficult time (in) doing sth. (有困难做某事) 八、用于文章开头的句型：
1) Faced with...; quite a few people argue that...; But other people conceive differently.
2) There is a general discussion today about the issue of....; Those who object to... argue that ...;They believe that...; But people who favor ..., on the other hand, argue that ... 3) Currently there is a widespread concern that...
4) Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...
5) Now it is commonly held that ...; they think ...; But I doubt whether...
6) Recently the issue of... has been brought to public attention.
7) One of the great men once said that... Now more and more people share this belief. 8) Until recently, ... has been regarded as.... But people are taking a fresh look at it. 9) Sb. argues/maintains /holds/insists/believes that...
10) More and more people are realizing /have come to realize... 11) There is no denying/doubt that ... 九、用于文章结尾的句型：
1) From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that ...
2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on ...
3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of ..., if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in...
4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.
5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.
6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ..., but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way. 7) There is little doubt/denying that ...
8) It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of...require immediate attention. 9) As far as ... be concerned, I believe/think that ... 10) In conclusion,...