2012届高考英语专题总复习精选荟萃书面表达系列（二）
1. 假如你叫Joy，来自英国，现在在北大附中学习。你的妈妈想来中国旅游。获悉妈妈的假日计划后，你向中国国际旅行社咨询并获得了一些信息。你选择了“山东四日游”。 请你写一封电子邮件告诉妈妈你的选择及行程安排。 注意：
(1)邮件内容应体现你的选择尽可能结合了妈妈的假日计划； (2)适当增添细节以使文章连贯；
(3)参考词汇：趵突泉：Baotu Spring，南天门：South Heaven Gate，太庙：Dai Temple，孔子：Confucius；
(4)词数：120左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mum，
I've checked your holiday plan and looked at several possible places where we can go in May Day holidays.I think________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Bye for now， Love， Joy
【思路点拨】本文要求写一篇应用文，写作时要认真审题，并注意以下几点：1.写作要点不能有遗漏，但又并非按照“提示”逐句翻译，而是要求学生在充分领会“提示”的前提下，用自己的语言组织成一篇内容充实、语言正确、句子连贯、用词贴切的作文。2.根据字数多少，扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。3.时态
以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 【范文选登】 Dear Mum，
I've checked your holiday plan and looked at several possible places where we can go in May Day holidays.I think we should go to Shandong Province on a four-day trip.It starts off Ji'nan，where we'll visit the famous Baotu Spring.Then we'll take a bus to the Yellow River.We can go on a river cruise to visit the mother river of the Chinese people.On the second day, we'll have an active time climbing Mount Taishan.We'll spend the night at the South Heaven Gate，which is close to the top of the mountain so as to watch the beautiful sunrise early next morning.After that we'll go down to the foot and visit the Dai Temple.Then we'll relax a bit before moving on to Qufu by bus the next day.Qufu is the birthplace of Confucius，the greatest ancient Chinese educator.The trip costs only 1200 yuan per person during May Day holidays.Why not take this great offer? Bye for now， Love， Joy
【精彩再现】高考书面表达高分档的要求是：层次清晰，覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较多的语法结构；使用了较高级词汇；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。本文层次分明，结构紧凑、流畅；通过where，which引导的非限定性定语从句，交错使用了长句和短句，使文章既简洁明快，生动有力，又严密周详，细腻委婉；连接词then，after that的运用也十分恰当，从而使文章有整体性、连贯性；最后以why not句型漂亮结尾。
2．假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期两个月的活动。现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一篇英语发言稿，主要内容如下： (1)简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动； (2)谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。 注意：
(1)不少于120词；
(2)不能使用真实姓名和学校名。
【思路点拨】(1)应该用第一人称的形式来写发言稿，同时注意语气是面对他人人来介绍一类事物。
(2)时态方面：从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点1和2时应用过去时或者现在(完成)时，基本用不到别的时态。
(3)内容上：首先，简要介绍自己参与组织的英语俱乐部的基本信息。其次，介绍组织过的和英语相关的一项重要活动。最后，阐述此次活动成功组织之后的收获感言。 【范文选登】 Boys and girls，
Our English Club has held a variety of activities in the past two months，which has drawn much attention of the students and teachers.
Recently our club held an English speech contest，the theme of which is “Challenge Myself and Strengthen Self-confidence”．A large number of students attended the contest and showed their wonderful presence and a great many teachers crowded into the hall to see their performance.At the stage，no matter what pressure the speakers faced，they bravely overcame it and challenged themselves to achieve great
success.What's more，they impressed us，the host，deeply with their unusual confidence and performance.
Through such an activity，we know a lot more about our students and our school.And we have gained much，such as self-confidence，honor，and so on.Besides，our club is growing stronger and more mature. That's all.Thank you.
【精彩再现】 短文言简意赅，如首段中的which引导的定语从句，第二段中的the theme of which引导的定语从句，no matter what引导的让步状语从句，同位语及并列结构的使用等，使短文简洁、流畅中不失厚实；过渡词语what's more，through such an activity，besides等的使用，使短文衔接自然。
3. 假定你是李华，正在英国一所学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心 (Learning Center) 的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： (1)本人简介； (2)求助内容： (3)约定时间；
(4)你的联系方式 (E-mail: lihua@1236.com；Phone: 12345678)。 注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)结束语已为你写好，不计入你所写的总词数。 Dear Sir / Madam,
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Look forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua
【思路点拨】本文是一封书信，时态为一般现在时，根据题目要求将用到第一、二人称。在作本人简介时，应该介绍姓名和身份。描述求助内容时，不要拖泥带水，尽量简洁。约定时间时不能“一言堂”，要给对方选择的空间，这点要特别注意。 【范文选登】
Dear Sir / Madam，
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I'm writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I've no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center that provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may e-mail or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@1236.com; 12345678. Look forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua
4. 假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the
top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong? 写作要点：
(1)表明自己的看法； (2)陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)； (3)提出至少两条建议。 要求：
(1)短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
(2)短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。 (3)内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 (4)书写需清晰、工整。
【思路点拨】本文为议论文，基本时态为一般现在时，文中表达的观点和提出的建议要合理，论据要充分。 【范文选登】 Hi，Tiger Mom，
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and their future university admission development in wisdom, emotion, health and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. What's more, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.
【精彩再现】本文很贴近生活，实用性强。用到了不少较高级的词汇，如：evaluate, future university admission, ignore, turn out to be, by no means以及一些很好的句型，如：although引导的让步状语从句，The reason is that...表语从句，suggest引导宾语从句用虚拟语气；还有最后一段由三个排比句组成，极具说服力。
5. In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture in about 100 words and explain to the judges how you understand it.
【思路点拨】这幅图讲述了一个“尺有所短，寸有所长”的道理，是很有教育意义的一幅画。首先应该简单描述圆规和铅笔各自的动作和神态，然后揭示出图片蕴含的道理。 【范文选登】
From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great effort.
I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses, even pictures.
So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show due respect for them.
【精彩再现】From the picture I can see...是图画作文常见的开头语，要记住这个表达。The compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great effort. 该句话中间用到了while引导的并列句，表示对比关系。两个分句中都用到了非谓语动词作伴随状语，描述生动。最后一段中，while再次出现，这里表示转折含义，相当于though，引导让步状语从句。show respect for sb.向某人表示尊重。 6．假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： (1)说明你是该报的忠实读者； (2)赞赏该报优点： ①兼顾国内外新闻； ②介绍名人成功故事。
(3)提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章。 注意：
(1)词数100左右，开头语己为你写好，不计入你所写的总词数； (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Editor-in-Chief，
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours， Li Hua
【思路点拨】本文是一封征询读者意见的书信，重点介绍Global Mirror周报的优点。时态用一般现在时为主，人称用第一人称。书信应该提到以下内容：说明自己是该报的忠实读者；介绍周报的特点并提出改进建议。 【范文选登】
Dear Editor-in-Chief，
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
I'm a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular. Sincerely yours, Li Hua
【精彩再现】I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.这个句子起到了承上启下的作用。Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. 这个句子既有倒装又有非限制性定语从句，体现了作者很强的写作基本功。As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning.这个句子用到了虚拟语气。
一般来说，高考作文讲究要点齐全的基础上过渡自然、词汇优美、句式多变、书写漂亮，尽可能地取悦阅卷老师。