第一节 大作文常见错误汇总写一篇最拿手的 第二节 大作文五步走策略要点总结和注意问题 第三节 话题之全球化政府 第四节 话题之科技环境 第五节 话题之社会和教育 第六节 小作文常见错误汇总 第七节 图表类类作文 第八节 流程图地图
课外：语法常用句型核心词汇连接词
语法（16个知识点）通过每次作业2个改错题 核心词汇连接词和常用句型练习套用 LR
1. The crime rate will arise continuously.
2. Education is conductive to one’s job prospect.
3. Advertising is a good way to propagandise product.
4. The government should improve citizens’ awareness of protecting the environment.
5. Working at home is useful for employees. They can manage their time flexibly if they are
allowed to work at home. Working at home is particularly important for those who cannot work on a full-time basis. GRA
1. Advertising is important. It allows people to get information about products. They can make
better decisions. This can save money and improve efficiency.
2. Many parents are too busy today, therefore, they do not communicate with children very
often.
3. Many parents have no time communicate with children. CC
1. Children are too young to distinguish right from wrong. They watch television every day and
do not study. They drop out of schools or fight with their peers. It is true that television viewing is not good for children.
2. It is undeniable that the government should spend money on art. This is because the
government has a lot of money. Obviously, art is important to our life. However, other things cannot be as important as art to us. It comes as no surprise that many countries in the world have spent a lot of money on art. TR
1. Many people have chosen to move from rural areas to cities. Why has this happened? Do you
think it is a positive or negative development?
2. Some people argue that it is important to ban advertisements aimed at children. Some
people think that advertising gives parents useful information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
语法改错
1. Raising standards of literacy are the government’s priority. 2. To rear a child alone are challenging to any parent.
3. The adequacy of financial resources are crucial to the operation of a not-for-profit organization.
4. Overworking, coupled with poor diet, lead to physical degeneration. 5. Even if somebody fall sick, everything go on as usual.
6. There is a number of countries which perform poorly in containing pollution.
7. How we copy with massive technological change in the 21st century are an interesting issue.
8. The accident was similar to the one that was happened last year. 9. The curriculum is consisted of core courses and optional courses.
10. Most children are seemed to be better at remembering bad habits, instead of good ones.
11. In many countries, salaries remain unchanged and even reduce.
12. Education can let young people to find jobs easily after they finish their education.
13. Private sponsorship has allowed the academic community survive.
14. Computer is a machine for collecting, processing and presenting information. 15. Government should provide students from low-income families with more support.
16. Tourism has become the top earner of foreign currency for many countries since late twentieth century.
17. Smoking cessation is one of the likely factor that contribute to the development of obesity.
18. Many teenagers begin smoking habits due to peer pressure but not for any other reasons.
19. There are evidences that rules can lead to children’s anti-social behavior.
20. Anybody who does not save money for their retirement will have to accept a lower standard of living in later years.
Task 2 作文第1步审题和确定文章结构 Task 2 作文第2步思考观点 Task 2 作文第3步写开头段 Task 2 作文第4步写中间段 Task 2 作文第5步写总结段 观点类文章 论述类文章 主体部分可以一边倒也可以两边讨论 开头段（可以说出自己的看法也可以只说讨论什么） 主体部分分三段 1. 优点1（或缺点1） 2. 优点2（或缺点2） 3. 缺点1（或优点1） 结尾段（给出个人立场） 主体部分必须两边讨论 开头段（可以说出自己的看法也可以只说讨论什么） 主体部分分三段 1. 支持正方的观点 2. 支持反方的观点 3. 自己的观点 结尾段（给出个人立场） 报告类文章 主体部分不需要说优缺点和个人立场 开头段（说一下主体部分会说什么内容） 主体部分分三段 1. 原因1 2. 原因2 3. 解决方法两个写1段 写开头段
Sentence1: background (general statement) Sentence2: rephrase the topic(thesis statement)
Sentence3: personal opinion or brief description of the main body 背景句3种方法
1. 强调某个话题一直是争论的焦点或者强调某个长期存在的现象
2. 讨论类题目之所以热门往往因为最近某个事情的发生，可以就此事情进行描述 3. 定义某个具体的对象或者人，包括特点和功能 如何改写题目 1. 替换词
2. 改变句子结构
3. 加入并列结构或者从句 如何写第三句话 1. 表明立场
2. 简单介绍主体部分讨论的内容并不表明立场
写中间段（逻辑清楚内容拓展）
以题目为例：We are surrounded by all kinds of advertising, which is having an increasing influence on our lives. Do the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects?
Advertising can affect consumers’ shopping habits. It will boost consumers’ confidence in products, and consumers will have a sense that these products satisfy their needs.
Advertising can affect consumers’ shopping habits and product preferences. It will boost consumers’ confidence in products, and consumers who are exposed to advertisements will have a sense that these advertised products satisfy their needs and perform importantfunctions. Sometimes, they may be persuaded to buy some products that they do not actually need. 写总结段（两到三句话包含两个任务） 1. 重新阐述你的立场和观点
2. 重新总结主体部分讨论过的要点
核心词汇——全球化 Assimilate/integrate into
Country of origin/native country
Culturally and linguistically diverse backgrounds Cross-cultural communication/interaction
Cultural assimilation/clash/diversity/heritage/identity/impact/sustainability Minority culture/ethnic group/language Global integration/village Globalized world Historic places/sites Host community/society
Impoverished/underdeveloped country Industrialized/developed country Language barrier/difference/gap
Multi-cultural society/setting/environment Multiracial/multi-ethnic Nationals/citizens Native language Mother tongue On a global scale
Tourism industry/travel industry Tourist attractions/destinations Transition countries Western culture Westernization
核心词汇——政府 Authorities
Budget constraint
Deprived/disadvantaged people For-profit corporation Financial aid/assistance
Government agencies/officials Government funding/spending
Income disparity/inequality Wealth imbalance Misspending/misallocation/misuse
People from low-income low socio-economic backgrounds Policymaker decision maker
Private sector private enterprises
Public funds/money/expenditure/spending/service Regulator/lawmaker/legislator Social problems/issues
State-owned/stated-run/stated-funded/government-sponsored State sector/public sector Subsidy/taxpayer/utility
语法改错
1. Many smokers are unwilling to cease smoking despite they have knowledge of ill health effects.
2. Traditional buildings are desired sometimes, for the simple reason that they are of commercial and cultural values.
3. Children’s confidence should be shaken if they are not given adequate support. 4. One of the many benefits of travelling overseas learning how to cope with the unexpected.
5. This incident reflected the decline of team sports in today’s universities.
6. During the last decade, there was much discussion and controversy over the impact of global economic integration
7. Obesity has a problem to many Americans for decades.
8. Students are more likely to do homework on the computer in today. 9. People can travel to and from duty in every day on foot or by bike. 10. There are not easy answers to the problems facing this country. 11. A balanced diet is an integral part of a healthily lifestyle.
12. Young drivers are more possibly to have accidents than old drivers.
13. The importance of education for one’s success has been long recognized in society.
14. Although the crime rate is falling in many parts of the world, but violent crimes are constantly rampant.
15. Education has been made available to more people nowadays, however, many adults have some problems with literacy and numeracy.
16. People like to think that being on a diet is healthy, however, there is considerable evidence to the contrary.
17. Smoking, drinking are banned in many places of work.
18. Many children have little knowledge of what their need and whether products meet theirs needs.
19. Consulting your family for advice is better than overcoming a problem yourself. 20. Employers permit employees to work at home, so they are able to finish their tasks more effectively.