GRE作文我是如何拿到5的(2)

2019-04-21 13:10

2.People feel the emotions, although they interpret it differently in mixture with their emotions.

3.Sometimes the merits of a work can only be judged by select group of people.

1.Shakespeare's works.

2.There are very few people who understand Shakespeare’s plays in its original form. Yet it is truly known work of merit. This is because people need a level of literary skills to be able to comprehend it. This brings it to a higher than the ordinary literary works and sets it apart. The very fact that most people cannot understand some literary works grants it merit, as it needs skill to understand it.

还有法律方面的提纲,一个小分类叫“不公平的法律”。

Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.

Introduction: I fundamentally agree that we should obey just laws and stand against unjust laws, though the definitions of 'just' and 'unjust' should not clearly stated.

Just: agreed by the majority of rational adults and has an intended purpose to maintain stability and prosperity of the society.

Unjust: disagreed by majority and are meant to harm the society as a whole.

People need to strictly abide by the just laws to ensure orderliness of the society, and consequently benefit each of us.

speed limit in highways. Anyone violating it must be fined or jailed.

Need to obey to ensure safety and well being of all road users.

2. Some laws are based on racial or gender discrimination and are inherently unfair.

Women in Islamic countries

According to no. 308 in Jordanian criminal laws, rapist can be exonerated if he wants to marry with the victim. Otherwise, killed by her brother or father to protect the reputation of the family.

The women are not treated equally as men. They have very little freedom and those women who breach the laws are inflicted various punishments. If they submissively accept these baseless restrictions then their life would become even more miserable. The women there need to open there eyes and protest against these biased rules.

laws never consider the well-being of women.

3. Some Laws are meant to protect the interests of the authority, instead of the people.

China prohibit public to protest, even if it is peaceful.Disallow people to voice out their own opinions on governments.

This is to force people to accept whatever the government has done and citizens have no right to complain or protest when they think it is wrong.

Conclusion. Most people would naturally respond with outrage to unjust laws which violate the common moral standards.

3)以上讲了怎么去搜集材料,怎么去根据文章分类来brainstorm和列提纲。不过最重要的,是你要有几次练笔的机会。很多人因为对写作文本身就有一种恐惧感,总觉得“不知道怎么写啊”,于是迟迟不去动笔。这是错误的。从来不去尝试,根本找不到感觉,就算你列再多的提纲,看再多的范文,也很难有那种考场上笔很顺的感觉。另外一个极端的情况是,不停的写,不停的写,却从来不去问自己有哪些地方需要improve,这也是错误的。对于语法错误,当然找个朋友帮忙看一下是没问题。但是有一些逻辑上的错误,其实平时不一定要直接把作文给朋友

看(朋友可能很忙),而是跟朋友讨论一下,这样一个题目,我这样一个思路,逻辑对不对,好不好,会不会很幼稚,会不会很怪,有没有更让人耳目一新的表达手法,等等。关于开写,最需要把握的是自己的时间。

有两种写作时间的掌控方法。

3.1)一种是按部就班。先花五分钟涉及全文思路,然后开始introduction, paragraph 1, paragraph 2那样写个梗概。例子先不写。论证先不写。但是有个文章的枝干在那里。直到所有的points都列出来了,开始填进去例子和论证。

3.2)有些人容易在introduction那里卡半天。这种情况我建议直接开始写paragraph 1,然后文章轴心部分写完了,回头填一个introduction。可以避免浪费时间在introduction上,导致文章主干部分没时间写。

我个人是属于3.2比较适用的。大家可以根据自己的情况酌情进行处理。

关于上篇中的一些注解以及FAQ

1.上篇中的3.1) 3.2)的写作方法就是在Magoosh里面video讲解看到的,觉得对自己用处特别大,写出来让那些没机会看到的同学们看。

2.拯救我的新GRE Issue里面说的比较宽泛,所以要我们读者自己去学会取其中对我们有用的部分。就像字典一样,我们没时间和精力整个读完。但可以挑里面你个人觉得比较容易记的部分去看。

Q1:每一类写了多少篇?

每一个大分类的文章其实写一篇就够了,找到那个类别的文章的感觉就成,小分类要是各写一篇会写死的。我是说大分类,即历史,教育,科学,政治。如此这般。

Q2:我写GRE的硬伤就是打字太慢,基本只能写别人的三分之二。

慢慢来,多练习打英文字,可以培养速度。建议上一些英文论坛跟人argue。如果实在太慢了,就不要写三个points。宁愿花多点时间好好illustrate two points,

会让人觉得你每个idea都论证得很饱满,而不是有很多idea但每个都是走马观花。

Q3:能不能介绍下句式语言和词汇怎么提高,我目前在看新4然后练笔的时候尽量模仿做过的阅读的句子用法。

如果是verbal的句式语言和词汇,那当然是越千奇百怪越好。但是在写analytical writing,我比较推荐用简单直接的语言,表达复杂的思想。平时看一些英文的新闻。仔细看作者表达的方式。然后用自己的语言表达出来。看看自己写的东西是不是看起来很直接很好懂,同时又能表达出原文的意思。Verbal里面很多倒装句,有时候ETS会故意把原文搞复杂来考你。如果你的英文造诣很高,当然可以用到writing去。不过如果不行,就会弄巧成拙。所以我建议用简单句子、简单词汇,加以适当的、可以控制的复杂度,去写analytical writing。


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