2) 书写不规范：书写过于潦草，连笔很随意，影响了老师的评卷; 有的考生在更正答案时超出扫描范围, 影响了卷面分;
3) 单词拼写错误 ，甚至连照抄都出差错，有的考生对常用单词没有掌握，比如：第77小题strict写成strist、strect，第78小题suffer写成suffre, from写成form等
4) 基础知识不够扎实，包括单词的不同形式，如过去式、介词的搭配以及各种时态的基本形式，比如：第78小题suffer from----suffer of /suffer for/suffer with/are suffer from, 第77小题was strict with----were strict with/were stricted with 第76小题is located on------is located of /is location in 等 等 九)．基础写作 1、得分情况 1).平均分:11.4 2). 各分数段人数 0分 182 13分 1580 1分 2分 75 119 3分 145 4分 140 5分 239 6分 315 7分 8分 9分 10分 487 612
2、分析
本次写作内容为介绍佛山新年音乐会，是北师大版模块二第五单元的话题之一，与教材同步，写作信息点较多，包括时间、位置、历史 特色影响等等，许多表达都涉及到本学期所学的一些词汇、句型和搭配，能较好地考查学生对本学期所学内容的运用情况。要写的信息点已全部给出，多数学生没有偏题，有话可写，命题较为合理。 优点 从阅卷情况看，部分学生基本功扎实，能有效地利用合适的语言结构表达内容要点，能学以致用，而且根据要点的逻辑关系分段。有一部分学生部分同学的作文词汇较丰富，能使用brilliant attract/attractive, extraordinary，recommend等高级词汇，而且能注重句式的变化,能够正确运用学过的短语,从句、-ing结构。 a. What impress the audience most is that the elegant performers play music elegantly on the stage.. b. That is why there are many fans and you won’t be able to find an empty seat throughout the concert . c. It dates back to the 1990s. 不足 1) 书写和卷面
a. 少部分字母书写不规范。
b. 卷面不够整洁，尤其是涂改不规范，出现小黑团。 c. 没有用黑色笔作答，导致扫描后很不清晰。
804 1209 11分 1386 12分 1817 14分 15分 16分 17分 18分 1548 1103 646 345 151 19分 20分 23 0
2) 词汇方面：
a. 混淆词形和词性相近的词:
attract--attack; seat--sit或site；world--word ; The concert is very well. It has become a way to celebration the New Year. b、多写、漏写字母: popula；atract；
c、字母顺序混淆: performance---preformance；first--frist 3)、句型、语法方面：
a. There be句型误用
There are many people go to enjoy the concert. There has no free seats. There is a music concert hold in Qionghua Theater. b. 无主句：
Foshan, which is the first city to hold the New Year Concert.
Because the well-known orchestra plays the world-famous classical music so well that many people has become fans.
c 谓语的问题
The New Year Concert held/holds every year in Foshan on December 31. Foshan is the first city to held a New Year Concert. Foshan is the first city hold the new year concert. It attract a lot of people. Started in 1990, Foshan was the first city to hold… Foshan New Year Concert start in 1990. d介词误用
in December 31; on the Qionghua Theatre e 中式表达
There is nothing to sit.
There are no empty seats leave. The concert plays many famous classical music.
五．下阶段教学建议
根据本次测试的数据分析及考试情况，提出以下几点建议：
1.创造性地使用教材。北师大版的教材图文并茂，形式多样，但有些内容不切合教学实际，各学校可
根据本校学生的情况,有针对地进行改动删除。
2.优化设计教材内容。2011年高考听力改为听说考试，对说提出了新的要求，要求学生对课文的优美段落进行诵读，同时复述课文。背诵一些精彩段落，整个备课组要做好集体备课，要统一对学生作要求，统一规定背诵内容。
3.重基础。在高一阶段一定要注重学生基础知识的掌握和运用，对核心的单词、搭配和句型有必要在日常的课堂教学中进行翻译练习的训练。记住常见的不规则动词的过去式与过去分词.
4抓词汇。掌握好课标词汇,对常用的单词可进行分类,帮助学生记忆与巩固，并适时督查，重视词性转换练习, 引导学生在语境中运用词汇； 同时养成积累词汇的习惯.指导学生从做过阅读理解和完形填空中收集出现率高的词,老师可根据情况定期选出部分重点单词进行听写或设计练习。 5 抓积累。从高一开始强调学生对课内外句型的收集、朗读和操练，在写作训练中鼓励学生尝试使用新学的知识，达到学以致用和知识的迁移训练。让学生慢慢摆脱一味只会初中所学知识的不良习惯。 6.抓写作。可以从写句子开始，养成正确的写英语句子的习惯即先写句子的主干（主语和谓语）然后补充完整。老师也可以根据每个单元的话题和已学过的课文来自编一些写作题目。让学生能够运用到所学的知识到写作中来，这样有利于知识的积累。强调学生熟练地掌握并准确记忆课本中每个模块的所规定及涉及到的重点单词、短语和句型，鼓励学生摘抄和模仿英语的好句式。
7．抓阅读。2011年高考听力改为听说考试，而且只占10%，只有15分。高考的阅读量必然要加大，所以从高一开始要进行有针对性的阅读训练。建议每个星期开设一节阅读课。
8．抓书写。书写的好坏、卷面的整洁与否会在很大程度上影响老师的给分。书写不好的可分为两类：字差和书写潦草。字差的同学建议购买英文字帖练字；书写潦草的同学建议拿单行本限时抄文段，速度与质量并重。
9.抓方法。各校都要有三年备考的意识,培养学生良好的学习习惯与慎密的心思。加强各题型解题技巧的指导，如信息匹配怎么能做到又快又准确，使学生做题时心里更有“谱”。方法指导不能“一股脑”，必须有步骤慢慢融入、慢慢渗透。
附：作文
1 (14分)
Foshan is the first city to hold the New Year Concert which was started in 1990. The concert holds on December 31st every year in Qionghua Theater in Foshan.
During the concert , many world classical musics are performed by famous orchestra. There have any empty site to sit because of the large fans every year. Holding concert has become a popular way to welcome the New Year.
You can buy the tickets at the ticket office. Or , you can book tickets by Internet and phone.
2 （16 分）
New Year music concert was began in 1990. Foshan is the first city to hold the New Year music concert in China. It is always held in December 31 every year and it is held in Qionghua Theatre . In the music concert, you will hear many classical songs which is famous all over the world. They will be played by some famous orchestras. There are many fans of classical music. Every year, many people go to buy tickets to listen to music concert and there is no seat which is left in the theatre. Going to the music concert has been a popular way for the people in Foshan to celebrate the New Year. If you want to buy some tickets, you can buy from the ticket office. And you also can book the tickets by telephone or Internet.
3 （17分）
Every year on December 31, Foshan, which is the first city in China to hold a New Year concert in Foshan Qionghua Theatre, attract many people to visit it before the New Year comes. The history of holding a New Year concert dates back to 1990. Many world famous classical music are performed in the concert by the well-known orchestras. That’s why the concert is extraordinary and attractive. Every year there is no seat left because of too many fans. Given a warm welcome, it has been a style for Foshan People to celebrate the New Year. Even more, some foreigners are surprisingly seen in the theatre during the concert. It is easy ti imagine that how excited the atmosphere inside the theatre is!
If you want to go to the concert, you can buy tickets at the ticket office of the theatre, or book a ticket by telephone or on the internet. However, please book tickets as soon as possible or you will miss it.
4 （18 分）
Every year on December 31, a new year concert is held in the Qionghua Thertre in Foshan. As a matter of fact, Foshan is the first city to hold a concert for celebrating the new year, with the history dating back to 21 years ago.
During the concert , many famous pieces of classical music all over the world will be played by well-known orchestras. Therefore, the theatre is always filled with fans every year and the concert has become a popular way for people in Foshan to celebrate the new year. You can buy a ticket in the ticket office or just book one through the phone and the Internet.
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It’s such a good concert that you shouldn’t miss it.