大作文
形式：①图标 ②文字
内容：①数字变化类 ②优缺点类 ③问题解决类 ④A/B选择类
高分作文必须具备的
1、结构模式化
①三段化 ②大于180词 ③三段三句总领句
第一段开题句
[数字变化 图表]
As is illustrated in the table/chart/curve, the number of 主题 is 数字in 年份, 数字 in 年份, and 数字 in 年份.
从表格/柱形图/曲线图/中表示，(主题)的数字在(哪一年)是(多少)，在(哪一年)是(多少)，和在(哪一年)是(多少)。
[数字变化 文字]
The past few years witnessed a dramatic rise of the number of ………..。 几年来见证了(主题)的数字戏剧化的增长。
[优缺点类]
There is no doubt that 主题 is getting increasingly prevalent over the past few years. 毫无疑问的，近年来(主题)变得日益普及。
[问题解决类]
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned with [the problems…arising from…]. 近期越来越多的人对[……的问题]感到忧虑。
第二段第一句
[数变---原因] [优缺点---优点或缺点] [问题---方法]
[原因]
What accounts for the rise? In my view, at least [three] factors contribute to the change. 增长的原因是什么？我认为至少有三种原因促成了这种变化。
[优缺点]
As is known to all, every medal has two sides, and the unfavorable aspects of……can’t be ignored. 众所周知，任何事情都有两面性，……的缺点不能忘。
As is known to all, every medal has two sides, …… have favorable and unfavorable aspects. 众所周知，任何事情都有两面性，……有优点和缺点。
[问题解决类 方法]
As a matter of fact, there are various approaches which can contribute to the resolution of the trouble. 事实上有各种方法都可以解决该问题。
Various approaches have been tried to resolve the problem, but in my view, the followings will work better. 人们已经尝试了各种各样的方法，但我认为以下方法会起到更好的作用。
第三段(结论) [数字变化]
With the development of society, the rising trend is bound to continue for a few years in the future. 随着社会的发展，这种增加的趋势还要继续。As far as I’m concerned, it’s a positive(negative) sign and should be promoted(reversed), for it is beneficial(a threat) not only to individuals but to the society.. 在我看来，这种趋势应当(鼓励/逆转)，因为它不仅有(利/害)于个人，也有(利/害)于社会。
[问题解决类]
Undoubtedly, the resolution of the problem calls for governments’ measures coupled with the public’s effort. 无疑该问题的解决，需要政府的措施和公众的努力。With governments’ effective measures and the public’s considerable efforts, the problem is bound to be resolved in the near future. 有了政府的措施和公众的努力在不久的将来这个问题一定能解决。
[优缺点类]
We’re all aware that……itself is neither blessing nor hell and its effect on people depends, to a large extent, on people’s attitude toward it. 我们大家都意识到……本身既不是福也不是祸，其影响取决于人们对它的态度。Provided that people have an appropriate attitude toward it and make good use of it, ……is beneficial to users. 只要人们对它有正确的态度和正确的使用，就会有利于使用者。
2、论证条理化
在第二段里写（原因、优点、缺点、方法、意义） [正增原因]
① the rising income 日益增加的收入
② the turning of people’s attitude toward and outlook on life 人生态度及人生观的转变
③ the bettering facilities/policies 日益完善的设施/政策 [负增原因]
① the rising number / pressure / demand 日益增加的数量/压力/需求 ② the ill behaviors/habit / attitude 不好的行为/习惯/态度 ③ lack of supervision / guide 缺乏监督/引导 [问题解决 方法]
① educate people to became aware of…… 教育人们认识到…… ② lay down and enforce relevant laws and regulations 立法并强制执行 ③ timely guide / find a substitute 及时引导/找一个替代品 ④ improve facilities [优缺点 优点]
① keep users more informed of the outside 让使用者及时了解世界 ② extend social circles 扩展社交圈 ③ seek (for) help 从中得到帮助 ④ bring about joys 带来娱乐 [优缺点 缺点]
① waste of time 浪费时间 ② add to expense 增加开支
③ plunge users into unexpected troubles 让使用者陷入意想不到的麻烦
3、语言个性化
(1)关于 concerning…… when it comes to……. (2)不同 vary
When it comes to this topic, people’s views vary from individual to individual 关于这个话题，不同的人有不同的看法 (3)认为 hold / argue
Some people hold that……, while others argue that…… 有人认为…….而另一些人认为……. (4)支持 be in favor of……
As for as I’m concerned, I’m in favor of the former/latter view 就我而言，我支持前者/后者观点
(5)首先 To begin with, …… To start with,…… First of all,…… 其次 In addition,…... What’s more,…… More importantly,…… 最后 Finally,…… ……also…… (6)显而易见 显然 Apparently,…….
(7)在增长 be on the rise
Apparently, the number of …… has been on the dramatic rise over the past few years. 显然，近年来……的数量在戏剧化的增长
(8)为什么？ What accounts for ……. ?
(9)引起/导致 contribute to …… be responsible for …….. (负增长) (10)因为 …… be related to …… …… have much to do with ……
To begin with, the change is closely related to the rising income of [Chinese people]. 首先，这种变化是因为中国人的收入增加了
In addition, the change has much to do with the turning of people’s attitude toward and outlook on life. 其次，这种变化还因为人们的人生观和态度的转变
(11)改变 transform v.
The coming of …… has transformed the society, economy, as wall as our daily life. ……的到来，改变了我们的社会、经济和日常生活
(12)强调 重视 place emphasis on …… / give importance to ……
To start with, government and the public should place more emphasis on [the conservation of energy]. 首先，政府和公众应该重视环境保护
(13)认识到 be aware of / that ……
What’s more, people should be educated to become aware of the terrible consequences arising from [over-consumption].
其次，应该教育人们逐渐认识到(过度消费)的危害 (14)必定 肯定 be bound to do ……
(15)越来越…… increasing (adj.) increasingly (adv.)
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned with the problem