9大模板“让你套”
应用文是每年高考考查频率最高的体裁之一,近几年全国卷高考主要考查书信写作,体裁涵盖求助信、建议信、感谢信、邀请信、投诉信、申请信、推荐信、道歉信、普通书信/电子邮件等。从阅卷情况来看,有一部分考生因信件书写不规范而失分。为让考生少丢“冤枉分”,我们先从书信的书写规范讲起。
求助信 [题型特点]
求助信是指写信人就某一个问题向收信人寻求帮助,希望收信人就写信人提出的问题提供帮助或给出针对性的解决方法。其结构为:
①点明写信目的,清楚表明要寻求什么样的帮助??②具体讲述自己的困难,再提出请求求助信?③诚恳地提出希望,表达需要得到帮助的迫切心
?? 情并表示感谢[常用句式] 1.开头常用语
①My name is ...; I’m writing to you for some help. 我的名字是??我写信向你求助。
②I’m writing a letter to you to get some help about ... 我给你写信是想得到??方面的一些帮助。
③I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. I have some difficulty in doing ..., which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我写信向你求助。我在做??方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。 2.主体部分常用语
①I have met much difficulty in ... 我在??方面遇到了很多困难。
②In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to ...so that ... 同时,我请求你??这样??
③I’m eager to get your timely help./I’m eager for your timely help. 我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
④Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help. 面对如此多的困难,我不得不向你求助。 3.结尾常用语
①I will be very grateful if you could help me .../I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and ...
如果你能帮助我??我会非常感激。 ②We do hope you can give us some advice. 我们非常希望你能给我们一些建议。
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③Looking forward to your reply.And I’d be really thankful. 期待你的回复。我非常感激。 [黄金模板] Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m________________.(自我介绍) I’m writing to get some help about _______.(说明写信目的) I have met many difficulties in ...(遇到的困难) First, ...Besides, ...What’s more, ...(分层次说明自己的困难)
Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ...so that ...?(请求一) In the meanwhile, I beg you to ...(请求二) Also, I would like you to ...(请求三) I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and ...(表示感激)
Looking forward to your reply.(表达期望) Yours truly, Li Hua
[范文鉴赏] (2016·全国卷Ⅰ) Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.(写信目的)
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don’t know if there is something to pay attention to. (讲述困难) So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.(提出请求)
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful. (表达期望)
Yours, Li Hua
建议信 [题型特点]
建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人,也可能是写给某个组织或机构,信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least 等依次陈述建议,具体结构为:
?①表明写作意图建议信?②具体的建议及理由
?③指出采纳建议的好处
[常用句式] 1.开头常用语
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①I know you have trouble in ... after reading your letter. I am writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand.
在读了你的信后,我知道你在??上有困难。我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。 ②You’ve asked me for advice with regard to/regarding ...and I’ll try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于??你向我征求建议,在此,我将尽力提出一些有用的建议。 ③I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble with/in doing ... at the moment. 得知此刻你遇到??麻烦我深感遗憾。
④I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how ... 非常高兴收到你的来信,在信中,关于如何??你向我征求意见。 2.主体部分常用语
①When it comes to/As for ... I would like to suggest/recommend ... 涉及/关于??我想建议??
②The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows. 我的建议如下。
③In my opinion/Personally/As far as I’m concerned, it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。 ④You may/might as well do ... 你不妨做??
⑤I would like to suggest that ... 我想建议??
⑥If I were you, I would ... 如果我是你,我会?? ⑦It seems to me that you could ... 我认为你可以??
⑧I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... 我想如果你能??可能会更有利。 3.结尾常用语
①I hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. 我希望你认为这些建议有帮助。/我希望我的建议对你有益。
②I hope you will take my advice into consideration. If you have any questions or requirements, please do not hesitate to tell me./If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.
我希望你会考虑我的建议。如果你有任何问题或要求,请毫不犹豫地告诉我。/如果你有任何问题,请随时问我。
③I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
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[黄金模板]
Dear ________,(建议对象)
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to____________.(引出对方需要建议的主题)
Here are a few suggestions.(引出作者建议) First, it is important to________.Then, it also helps to_______________. Besides, it should be a good idea to__________________.You can also________.
可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下:
As to________, I suggest ________.(需要具体到某一方面) In addition,__________.(其他的建议) I’m sure _______________.(预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心)
I hope __________.(表达愿望) Yours sincerely, Li Hua [范文鉴赏] Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. (引出建议主题) Here are a few suggestions. (引出个人建议) First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV, and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.(具体建议)
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
感谢信 [题型特点]
感谢信是重要的礼仪文书,是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。其结构为:
①点明写信目的??
感谢信?②描述事件经过
??③再次表示感谢,表达回报心情[常用句式] 1.开头常用语
①I am writing to extend my thanks/convey my gratitude to you for ... 我写这封信是因为??表达我对你的感激。
②I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for ... 在信中我要为??向您表达我诚挚的谢意。
③Thank you so much for the gift you sent me. It’s one of the most wonderful gifts I ever got.
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非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物,这是我收到的最好的礼物之一。
④I’d like to take this opportunity to express my appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我谨借此机会表达对您给予我们及时的帮助和支持的感激。
⑤On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for ... 我谨代表我全家对??表示真诚的感激之情。
⑥I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by ... 如果我有机会通过??报答你的好意,我会非常高兴。 ⑦Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to ... 非常感谢你为帮助我们??所做的一切。 2.结尾常用语
①Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, we will remember them forever. 没有什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆,我们会永远牢记在心。
②Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you!/Thanks again for your kind help. 我再次对你表示衷心的感谢。/对你的热心帮助再次表示感谢。 ③Please accept my sincere thanks and best wishes. 请接受我诚挚的感谢和最美好的祝愿。
[黄金模板]
Dear ______,(感谢对象)
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude to you for____________.(感谢的原因) If it had not been for your assistance in ________________,(对方给你的具体帮助) I fear that I would have been ________________.(没有对方帮助的结果)
Everyone agrees that it was you who____________.(给出细节)
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely, Li Hua [范文鉴赏] Dear Li Ping,
How about your life? I’m writing to thank you for your warm reception during my visit to Beijing this summer holiday.(感谢的原因)
During the visit, I stayed at your home, and you cooked three delicious meals for me. And you showed me around quite a few places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. Besides, you took many beautiful photos of me. What’s more, you went shopping with me. I really had a wonderful time. Another thing that I should mention is that your parents were so kind to drive us. (具体帮助的细节)
Thank you for your kindness again and give my best regards to your parents. (再次感谢)
Yours sincerely,
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