正文:事情发生的经过,经过:玛丽从我身边走过,撞了我的胳膊,结 我 手上的杯子掉在地上摔成了碎片(hit ...on the 果 结尾:我的感受 arm, break...into pieces) 结果:几天后,玛丽来向我道歉。我知道她不 是故意。(apologize to, on purpose) 感受学会理解和原谅是加强友谊的好方法(a good way to)
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I still remember what happened between my deskmate Mary and me. One day, I was drinking water with my favourite cup. It was at that time that Mary passed me and hit me on the arm. So I dropped my cup onto the floor, breaking it into pieces. I was so angry that I yelled at her. And then, we didn’t speak to each other. After several days, Mary came over to apologize to me. I realized she didn’t do it on purpose. So I thought I was supposed to forgive her. We hugged each other and smiled. From thenon, we became best friends.
In my opinion, learning to understand and forgive is a good way to strengthenour friendship.
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幸福无处不在。幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福
是来自老师赞许的目光,幸福是……每个人都有自己的幸福。 某英语网站正在征集英文稿件,请以“My Happiness”为题,写一篇 100 词左右短文。
要求:1.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 词数 100 词左右,文中不得出现真实人名、校名或
地名,否则不予评分。
My Happiness
【审题指导】细读所给的文字及表格提示,提取以下信息:
1. 本文为一篇网站征文,故文体为应用文。根据提示信息,可知可以用三段式来成文:第一段引出幸福的话题;第二段讲述这个使你幸福的故事;第三段指出你对幸福的看法;
2. 文章介绍过去的事情,用一般过去时;讲述自己对于幸福的看法,用一般现在时;人称主要用第一人称;
3. 词数 100 词左右。
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