2016高考英语-短文改错集训（二）
【专项突破】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?）,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Passage 1
Last month, the 18 Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school. Luckily, the Students’ Union organize an English Speech Competition. At first I didn’t show some interest and wasn’t very much confident. Then my English teacher Mr. Smith encouraged me. Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it. Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn. Glancing at my teacher’s smiling face, I built up my confidence. Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner. But my teacher’s encouragement, I couldn’t have won the first prize. I’m proud of Mr. Smith or the wonderful experience.
Passage 2
As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited. Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night. A car hit a motorbike. The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital. After a while, the traffic police came. Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth. The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control. At last he was taken to the police station. All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.
Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously. It
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often causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu. It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.
Passage 3
Dear Sir/Madam,
I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service. A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency. I found a little differences between your advertisement and action. As you say, you will provide a large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner. Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand. We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower. In fact, we only bathe in cold water. As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time. As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen. We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.
Passage 4
As we all know, playing is one of man's itself characteristics. Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games. One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily. In other words, they help to keep people strong and health. If people are playing games, they move a lot of. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports by watch others play. So that is why sports are good activities for people’s health.
Passage 5
Last Sunday I went shopping with my father. We have a lot of things to buy. We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop. An hour late, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door. So we asked the policeman for help. It was glad to help us. A few minute later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angrily. ‘How are you doing with my car?’ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car. What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.
Passage 6
Yesterday, it was just on the point of big shopping this season. Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据）.When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn’t take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to
search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.
Passage 7
Changes create happiness. Fortunately, great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil．Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing．
2016高考英语-短文改错集训（二）答案与解析
Passage 1
本文是一篇励志小故事。讲述了作者(一位中学生)参加了本校一年一度的英语口语演讲比赛。当初，作者由于缺乏兴趣和自信而不敢参加，因受自己的英语老师的开导和激励，便报了名，但经过自己的一番努力后，最终以第一名的好成绩赢得了这场比赛。
1.organize→organized。考查动词时态的用法。句子Last month, the 18 Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school. Luckily, the Students’ Union organize an English Speech Competition中的谓语动词organize，其动作时间应与作者参赛的时间取得一致，故用一般过去时。
2.some→any 。考查同义词辨析。句子At first I didn’t show some interest and wasn’t very ?中的形容词some，通常用于肯定句或表示请求的疑问句之中。但在否定句，疑问句或条件状语从句中常用any来替换。
3. 去掉much。考查副词固定习语的用法。句中?and wasn’t very much confident中的much与very连用，通常修饰动词。但其后紧跟形容词confident，故much多余。
4.Inspiring→Inspired。考查过去分词短语作状语的用法。句中Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition?中的Inspiring，与句子主语I是逻辑上的动宾关系，应用过去分词，且有by短语提示，二者合起来作状语，表示原因，相当于原因状语从句。
5.fully→full。考查副词的误用。句中?and made fully preparations for it中的fully是副词，作
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状语，通常修饰动词。但其后紧跟名词preparations，应为形容词作定语。
6.coming→came。考查句子结构的甄别。根据句子结构分析：本句是由并列连词and连接的并列句，前一分句Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was?中的the time是主语，I had been looking forward to是省略了引导词that的限制性定语从句，修饰先行词the time，该分句中缺少谓语动词。但是，又受and的制约，证明又由其连接了一个使用一般过去时的后一分句，此时句中coming不能单独作谓语，只能改为came时，句子结构才能成立。
7.his→my。考查逻辑关系。文章是以第一人称叙述了作者的所有境况。所以，此处应用my来表示所属关系。
8.winner→winners。考查名词数别的判断。句子I was one of the winner表述中可以看出，one of后跟名词，须用其复数形式。
9.But→Without。考查逻辑关系。文章最后表明了作者对老师的感激之情，便使用了Without?, ? couldn’t have done ?.句式结构。所以，此处的without介词短语表示条件。
10.or→and。考查逻辑关系。最后作者以拥有这样的老师和本次难得的比赛经历而表示自豪。所以，此处的Mr. Smith 和 the wonderful experience without是并列关系。
Passage 2
本文是一篇夹叙夹议文。讲述了作者昨天晚上回家时所看到的一起醉驾行驶的小轿车撞上了一辆电动自行车的交通事故。伤情严重，在好心人的帮助下，伤者很快被送到了医院进行抢救。于是，现场的目击证人强烈谴责醉驾司机，要求其对本次事故负全责。作者又通过发生在杭州和成都的两地多起交通事故来强烈呼吁：抵制醉驾，珍惜生命。
1. 去掉last前面on。考查名词短语的习惯用法。句子?way home on last night中 的介词on 应该用在表示具体的某一日或某一天的早晨、下午或者晚上，但在last night名词习语中， 介词on是多余的。
2.bad→badly。考查形容词的误用。句子?driver was bad hurt中 的形容词bad 应该用在名词前作定语，但是，此处是在动词hurt前，须用副词，作状语，即表示：伤者的被伤害的程度。
3.Under→With。考查固定习语的用法。句子Under the help of the people who?中的固定搭配with one’s help或with the help of somebody，表示 “在某人帮助下”，其介词为with。
4.a→the。考查冠词的基本用法。句子?police found out a truth中的冠词，应表示 “这次交通事故的真实情况”，表示特指，须用定冠词the。
5.drinking→drunk。考查被动语态的用法。句子The driver of the car was drinking中的was drinking
是主动语态，由从句中得知，小轿车司机是喝醉了酒，应用be+v-ed构成的系表结构来表示：The driver
of the car的精神状态。
6.think→thought。考查动词时态的辨别。句子All the people there think the car driver was to blame?主句中的谓语动词think应与从句中的谓语动词保持时间上的一致，须用一般过去时。
7.Which→As。考查定语从句引导词的辨析。句子Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving causes many people?中的Which is reported in the news reports是定语从句中的从句，drunk driving causes many people?是主句，本定语从句中能够代替一个句子内容的引导词，只有as。
8. lose前加to。考查固定搭配的用法。句子? driving causes many people lose their lives?中的固定搭配cause somebody to do something，表示 “导致/引发/引起??”意义时，其后跟带to的动词不定式作宾语补足语。
9.accident→accidents。考查名词数别的判断。句子? such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu表述中的accident须用复数形式,应与that引导的定语从句中出现的in Hangzhou and Chengdu语意相吻合。
10.prevent→prevented或加should。考查虚拟语气的用法。句子It is high time that we prevent drunk driving表述中的that从句里的谓语动词须用“动词过去式或should+动词原形”来构成虚拟语气。句式结构为It is high time that? 刚好（恰好）到了?时候了。
Passage 3
本篇是一封游客对旅行社失信服务的投诉信。信中讲到：作者参报了一个为期三天去峨眉山旅游的旅行社，当游客到了目的地后，竟然发现，旅行社的广告宣传与游览景点和游区服务质量相差悬殊，所有承诺均未兑现，胡乱顶用，最后造成重点景点遗漏，憾事连连。作者强烈要求有关部门采取相应措施，制止类似事件的再次发生。
1.three-days→three-day。考查复合形容词的用法。文中? joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain?里的three-days是复合形容词，其由“基数词+连字符+名词单数”来构成，作定语，修饰名词trip。
2.little→few 。考查同义词的辨析。文中?found a little differences between?里的differences是可数名词的复数形式，故其前few作定语，起限定作用。而little则与不可数名词的单数形式连用。 3.with→without/any→no。考查逻辑关系。文中已经讲明了游客坐的是没有装空调的车子，并且车况很差。所以，此处应用否定意义的词来表述。
4.and→but。考查逻辑关系。作者反映尽管旅行社在午饭时提供了饭菜，但是质量很差，而且还有沙粒。