高二英语作文教学案
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读写任务解题方法
一、 确定标题
不管好坏，一定要有标题，标题是文章的点睛之处。根据所给材料和所规定的论题或要点确立自己论述的内容或观点后进行命题。命题要体现真篇文章议论的中心。如：Opinions towards Fast Food/ Is Failure a Bad Thing?/Learn from Mistakes等。 二、 进行概括
概括文章要点，语言要精炼，概括要全面，行文要连贯，表达要准确。议论文则用自己的话表达论点、论据和结论。
概括常用的句式有：
1. This article deals with/discusses/analyzes/strongly emphasizes… 2. This article not only describes …but also suggests… 3. This article compares…and summarizes key findings…
4. This articles gives an account of/provides an analysis of/provides a method of… 5. The article reports the last information on… 6. The problem of sth. Is discussed… 7. This articles shows/tells us that… 8. The author finds it necessary to…
9. The author holds the idea that…giving it an example of sb. who… 10. The author strongly emphasizes the benefits of getting up early such as… 三、 自然过渡
写完概括后，用句恰当的过渡语引出自己的观点（反对或赞成）。过渡语起承上启下的作用，使文章显得自然、连贯。
常用的过渡句式有： 1. I do agree with the author… 2. In some way, I agree with…but… 3. This point sounds right, but… 4. However, I think… 5. I definitely believe… 6. In my opinion… 7. Personally, I feel that… 8. As far as I am concerned…
9. I can’t agree more with…Such cases are often seen in our life. 10. Attitudes towards …are various.
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列举例证
提出自己的观点后就要用具体的事例来论证自己的观点。常用的句式见下表： 常用英文句式 First,…Second,…Last… On the one hand,…on the other hand… For one thing…and for another… Furthermore/Besides/In addition,… Some think…,while others may… 四、 总结点题
总结句约30词，进一步总结作者的观点，提出具体做法或号召，升华文章的主题。常用的句式见下表：
常用英文句式 In conclusion… In short… In a word… In general… All in all,… All these things considered,… To sum up,… Therefore,… 五、 常用写作谚语：
1. As is known to all, “No pains, no gains.” 众所周知，一份耕耘，一份收获。 2. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
3. Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜于空言/ 事实胜于雄辩。 4. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。 5. Better late than never. 迟做总比不做好。
6. Every man is his own worst enemy. 最大的敌人就是自己。
7. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难之交才是真正的朋友/ 患难见真情。 8. Haste makes waste. 欲速则不达。
9. He who makes no mistakes makes nothing. 不犯错的人必将一事无成。 10. Health is better than wealth. 健康胜于财富。
11. Take time while time is, for time will be away. 机不可失，时不再来。
12. As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”. 常言道，事物总是一分为二的。 13. As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. 正如谚语所云，事物都是一分为二的。 14. Just as a proverb says, “Opportunities are only for the prepared minds. 正如谚语所说，“机会只会青睐那些有准备的人。”
15. It has often been remarked that time and tide wait for no man. 人们常说: 时光如流水，岁月不待人。
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相对应的汉语 首先……，其次……，最后…… 一方面……,另一方面…… 一方面……,另一方面…… 再者…… 一些人认为……,另一些人认为…… 相对应的汉语 总之 长话短说 总之 总之 总之 综述所有观点 概括地 因此
满分作文鉴赏：
第二节读写任务(共1小题，满分25分) (2010年广东高考) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
In junior high school, one of my classmates, Ethan, was addicted to TV. This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Who’s the Boss?
Then one day Ethan’s mother made brim an offer in order to draw him back to his school subjects. She promised that she would give him $200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV. None of us thought Ethan could do it, but he did quite well. His mom paid him $200. He went out and bought a TV, the biggest he could find.
In recent years, hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with each for showing up or getting good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will. Psychologists warn that money can actually make kids perform worse by making the act of learning cheap. The debate has become a typical battle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should he despite decades of reforms and budget increases. [写作内容]
1以约30词概括上文的主要内容。
2以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括： (1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：
(2)你的父母(或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的； (3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。 [写作要求]
1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事．也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
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2010年满分作文1：
With the development of our modern society, people’s living conditions become much more comfortable. I think that using money to encourage children to study hard is a good choice. This teaches children that hard work is rewarded, and there are consequences for their actions. I would say it was worth it. Education becomes more and more important. Many parents will spend a large sum of money educating their children. When I was young, my parents paid me for excellent grades. I often spend money on my interest, such as music, sport, study and so on. I can also save the money and put it in the bank, which is also a good way to teach me some money management. It was an extra motivator for me to do my best. And it worked. In other words, if I get the scholarship when I do go to college, I could save some money for my family. In the long run, paying your children for good grades is a small investment with the opportunity for huge gains. To sump up, I think occasional awards are okay. Rewarding students for good grades is like a double-edged sword. We should make the best use of one edge and try not to be hurt by the other. 点评：
主题明确，内容丰富，用词得当。但作者的观点却标新立异，赞同使用恰当的金钱来作为物质奖励。作者认为，金钱本身没有任何意义，都是奖励或者助人的载体，现在的小孩聪明，其实早早就有了金钱的观念了。直接奖励金钱，不仅可以培养小孩的理财能力而且还是家庭一项投资。这篇议论文论点明确，论据有力。分词短语做伴随状语，do强调谓语动词等语法结构的准确运用，提升了文章的档次。另外也多次有意识地使用目前英语中较流行的句式来引起阅读者的注意，如 to sum up…等，足以证明本文是考生超强英语实力的绝对表现， 使得该篇文章亮点纷呈，值得学生模仿和学习。
2010年满分作文2：
From the passage, I know that Ethan’s mother paid money to him to keep away from TV and go back school, but she failed, which indicates that paying cash is not a proper method to encourage children to study well. When I was young, I was not a smart girl. Sometimes my parents felt disappointed because I got poor grades. Fortunately, unlike other parents, they seldom blamed me with hash words or beat me. They always helped me analyze the problems and told me that they believe that I could do better next time. A warm word may make a much better effect on children than￥100.I got constant praise and encouragement for my efforts. Thanks to that, I enjoyed a happy childhood and made progress step by step. I agree with the non-money for good grades. The reasons are as follows: first, I think it may mislead children to think that money is powerful. Second, it may make student lose their direction in studying. Last but not the least, this education may lead children to build up a
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wrong attitude towards their life. In my opinion, I think parents should pay more attention to spiritual encouragement than material one. 点评：
作者观点明确，反对用金钱奖励学生。现在，很多富裕家庭大把的钱花在孩子身上，但孩子并不能体验快乐，感受幸福。一味追求金钱，贪图享乐只能消磨孩子的意志，使他们成为社会的弱者。作者用简洁明快的语言以及自己的亲身经历叙述考题中的全部要点，内容充实，贴近生活。First,then,thirdly等过渡词的使用，增添文章的条理性。能在恰当表达所以内容要点的同事安排了许多较地道的连接词，如 first, second, last but not the least 等来使全文结构清晰，层次分明。最后，最值得一提的是，文中多次正确运用的高档词汇和复杂语法句式结构，更给文章增添了不少风采。综上所述，这是一篇不可多得的佳作，值得向学生们推荐。
第二节 读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)(2009年广东高考)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉)at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia．All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining．You would be too if you wereused to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off．That’S right--sleep it off．The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy．
The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience．Whatever department in
the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable．How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you? *考拉即树袋熊 [写作内容]
1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；
2．然后以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括： (1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照； (2)假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应； (3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。 [写作要求]
1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不
得直接引用原文中的句子；
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