2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯
2009年满分作文1：
The short passage describes a phenomenon that koalas at the Featherdale Wildlife Park are repeatedly awoken up from deep sleep, because tourists want to hug them and be photographed with them. What’s your reaction to the practice?
With the development of the modern world, more and more peolpes tend to visit zoo. In the eyes of the tourists, animals are lovely. They even treat them like children, so that they can’t help hugging them and being taken photos with these cute creatures. But these practice does do harm to animals. Take those koalas for example. They are waken up now and then, so that they can’t have a good rest and they feel sleepy and bored easily. How poor they are! Try to inmagine that if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round, furry creatures kept waking you, how angry you would be. So as for me, it is necessary to prevent the tourists being taken photos with animals. They are also creatures and they also need rest.
Give them some spare time and let them sleep! 点评：
作者对短文的概括能够抓住主题，简明扼要。文章先是分析游客喜欢抱动物拍照的原因，紧接着阐述此举对动物的危害。层次深入，以情动人，为最终提出禁止与动物拍照的观点做好情感上的铺垫。行文中，作者准确使用感叹句，强调句和祈使句，增添语言的表达力度，富有感召力。总之，本文无论是从形式上还是从内容上皆可堪称上乘之作，值得广大中学生学习借鉴。
2009年满分作文2：
Koalas at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia are repeatedly awoken up to be photographed with tourists. This practice does affect Koalas’ rest, which make them unhappy and even annoyed. Animals are cute and they are different from human beings. When tourists visit the zoo, they always want to make their trips special, so they hug animals and are photoed with animals. But they never think of the animals feelings. Once I was in a zoo, I saw a tourist hug a monkey and the monkey seemed unwilling to be hug. I aksed the tourist whether she thought about the animal’s feelings, and she said, “I don't think it has its own feelings.”
They think animals’ existence is only to satisfy our need or desire. How terrible it is! They should exchange their position with animals. In this case, they can find animals’ normal life is
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terrible and their health is in danger. In my opinion, that the department makes the practice illegal is reasonable and understandable. Animals also need to live a normal life, and human beings shouldn’t be allowed to bother them. 点评：
作者在概括部分提纲挈领。对游人与动物拍照原因分析细致入微。以自己亲身经历的一件事进行剖析，以情动人，以理服人。难能可贵的是作者以人性化的词语feeling来描些动物，显示对动物的尊重和关爱。总之，本文无论从语言，从写作技巧还是从思想高度，都无愧为一片满分作文。
第二节 读写任务 (共1小题,满分25分)（2008年广东高考）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment.1 went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills. such as balancing a check—book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.
Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it—good facilities, helpful instructors. and a good library. The Students’ Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.
One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way ··· it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground. [写作内容]
学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”，内容要点包括：
1. 以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点；
2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受； (2) 理想的大学生活；
(3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。 [写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但
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不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯
2008年满分作文1：
It was hard for Mike to accomplish the general adjustment but he began to enjoy himself after that owing to different activities. In his opinion, freshmen should be active in order to make new friends.
Personally, I’m preparing to enter a university and leaving the high school where I’ve been studying for three years. I really had a fabulous time in this school where I grew from a lovely child to an adult. I think I will considrately miss my life here and every sngle person I met here. Meanwhile, I am looking forward to my new college life. I sometimes daydream that maybe I’ll have friendly roomates and be taught by a group of warm-hearted and excellent teachers. It will be wonderful if this ideal daydream come into reality! However, life is not always all roses and you’ll never know what you will meet in your school. But I’am an active girl and I will do what Mike taught us to---take part in various activities. I’m sure I’ll make a lot of new friends and with them I will be abosolutely able to adjust the differences in a short time!
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专项模拟（1）
阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
London is quickly becoming a major cycling(骑自行车) city after the terrorist(恐怖分子) bombings on London’s subway and bus system on July 7, which killed 52 people. London Mayor Ken Livingstone wants to increase cycling 80% by 2010.
“Cycling is the fastest,cheapest, most healthy and environmentally friendly way to get around London, and more and more people are taking it up,” Livingstone said. “The number of cyclists has doubled over the last five years, while those killed or seriously injured has fallen by 40%.”
Under the London Cycling Action Plan, Livingstone hopes to make London a world-class cycling city to reduce congestion(交通堵塞) and pollution. London now has 273 miles of bike roads, half built since 2000. The goal is 560 miles by 2010. [写作内容]
假设你和同学在英语口语课讨论有关“交通工具对生活的影响”的话题。你准备发言稿，内容至少包括：
1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点；
2. 然后以约120个词表达你对“交通工具对生活的影响”这一话题，并包括如下要点：
（1）以你了解的背景材料为例，说明交通工具对生活的影响； （2）你如何评价伦敦市民使用自行车这种行为； （3）你对中国的汽车业的发展有何看法； （4）你认为中学生骑自行车上学有何好处。
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（2）
阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Australia is not an old country. But before the white came to this land, aboriginal have lived there more than 42000 years. When the white came to Ausrralia, aboriginals’ painful memory began. In early Ausralia, Aboriginals were very misery. Their life is change when the white came. The white brought death, illness, displacement and dispossession disrupted traditional lifestyles and practices, The aboriginal were ruled by the white, they had no righe. And the white wanted to break the aboriginals’ own life. The white wanted to cut the aboriginals’ culture and let them become white. Then aboriginals would become white, and they would lose their culture. Aboriginals would disappear from the earth. We can know this from the film named”Rabbit Proof Fence” Now the plan is stopped, aboriginal can live their life . Until 1967, Australia people voted pass the law, which protects Aboriginals. From that time on, Aboriginals have their righe.
In a word, Australia is a young country with animation and youth; we should spend time to
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