But everything can be divided into two. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________ (主题的缺点1). To make matters worse, __________________________ (主题的缺点2).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________ (主题) itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.
(2)模版二
With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality. Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful. The phenomenon of ___________ (主题现象) is an example of the former / latter one.
There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects. To start with, __________________ (原因1). Furthermore, ______________________ (原因2). Eventually, ________________________________ (原因3).
Good as ____________ (主题现象) is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages. The apparent example is that ______________ (缺点例子1). In addition, _____________________ (缺点例子2).
On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society. There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________ (主题现象) and make our life more comfortable.
综合运用篇
Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....
随着社会的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是____________。 As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.
然而,对于此类问题,人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
As society develops, people are attaching much importance to.... 随着社会的发展,人们开始关注............
People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting
求职的过程中,人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。
As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.
关于是否值得___________的问题,一直以来争论不休。当然,不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。
In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma. 在都市的发展中,我们往往会陷入困境。
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....
最近,这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注,有人开始担心______________。
The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.
人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段,经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快,随之给我们带来了很多问题。
...... plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?\ _______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题,这是无可厚非的。不过,问题是:\我们该如何抉择?\
Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges, 现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。
第一段
1、There is a prevalent phenomenon that _____________ There is a universal acknowlegement that______________ A standpoint which is frequently mentioned not only by___but by___as well is that______________.
2、 And there is no consensus of opinions among all the individuals as to the view of the case.
3、some individuals would maintian the tentativeness that______________, while others can’t find their agreement to it.
4、the following pasages will show the arguements with the tentativeness of mine.来源:www.examda.com
第二段 主题句:
For those who lend their support to the positive trend, their reasons are in varied forms. 1、To begin with, ________ is of extreme significance in the whole view. A prominent example is that__________.
2、Additionally, ________ is so indispensable that most individuals would consider it as the major cause of the issue. we can easily notice the fact that________ . 第三段 主题句:
For those who tend to terminate the issue, they come up with some novel ideas to counter the discussion above.
1、first of all, ________ is always top of their arguments list. Take myself as an example, __________.
2、furthurmore, ___________provides adequet justifications for the continuence of the issue.
For instance, ______________
结论段
As can be concluded from the arguments above. Personally, facing with this conflict matter, what we must insure is that the essence must be absorbed. I sincerely wish that some combinations should be suggested. If it could be realized, our life would be flooded with harmony.
1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法, 适用于有争议性的主题. e.g
[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently. 在谈到.....,广大/绝大多数人的要求说.......但我觉得/观点有点不同。 [2]. When it comes to .... , some people believe that ....... Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements , but (I tend to the previous/latter ) 当涉及到....有些人认为.......一些人则认为/声称,相反/恰恰相反。可能有一些在两个参数真理/报表,但(我更倾向于前/后
[3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They claim/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether...... 现在,它通常是/一般/普遍认为/月/承认,....他们声称/相信/认为...不过,我怀疑/怀疑..... 1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 . e.g
[1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern. 最近上升的问题/(现象)...已造成/引起公众/流行/宽
/举世关注
[2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention) 最近,问题的问题/ ...的现象已成为注意的焦点。 (已经被brouth公众的注意)
[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.
----- To be continued !! 通货膨胀/贪污/社会不平等...又是新的和痛苦的真理,我们必须学会面对的/不断另一个。
1-3 观点法 ----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法. e.g:
[1]. Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ... Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. be more visible/popular than... 历史上从未有改变的..被明显的,因为...在世界任何地方/中国有问题/思想的..更可见/受欢迎的程度...
[2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that... 现在越来越多的人/大量开始/来实现/接受/(知道)的...
[3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognition ot the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ...... 现在,人们日益认识/认识到有必要逾......现在,人们越来越认识到/的重要性的认识......
[4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that....... 也许现在是有一个重新审视的态度/想法.......
1-4 引用法 ----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点! e.g:
[1]. \by more and more people . “知识就是力量。”这就是由培根说了。这句话也有同样的越来越多的人。
\is not complete with graduation.\Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion. “教育是不完整的毕业。”这就是一个伟大的美国哲学家的意见。现在,越来越多的人分享他的意见。
[2].\如何我们经常听到这样的声明/放入系统一样的话/本。
In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this \在我们自己的日子,我们都已经习惯听到这样的传统抱怨,因为这\
1-5 比较法 ------ 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点. e.g:
[1]. For years, ...had been viewed as ... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ... , people ....... . 多年来,...已被视为...但是,人们正在以新面貌了。随着越来越多... ,人....... 。
[2]. People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now share this new. 人们曾经以为... (过去,....)但是,人们现在这个新的共享。
1-6 故事法 ---- 先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣, 引出文章的主题. e.g:
[1]. Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt .... The phenomenon of ... has aroused public concern. 一旦(报纸),我阅读/学习....的现象...引起市民关注
[2]. I have a friend who ... Should he .... ? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life. 我有一个朋友谁...如果他.... ?这样的困境,我们常常遇到在我们的日常生活的。 [3]. Once upon a time , there lived a man who ... This story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now. 从前,有一位男子谁...这个故事可能是(难以置信),但它仍然有现实意义现在
1-7 问题法 ----- 先用讨论或解答的设问, 引出自己观点, 适用于有争议性的话题. e.g:
Should/What ...... ? Options of ... vary greatly , some ..., others ...
But in my opinion , ...... . 应/什么...... ?的选项...差别很大,有些...,有的...但我认为,...... 。
原因结果分析
2-1-1. 基本原因 --- 分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因. e.g:
[1]. Why ... ? For one thing.. For another ... 为什么... ?一件事..另一...
[2]. The answer to this problem involves many factors. For one thing... For another...... Still another ... 对这个问题的答案涉及很多因素。一件事...另......还有一个
[3]. A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect .... /both individual and social contribute to .... 许多因素,包括身体和心理的影响.... /个人和社会的贡献....
2-1-2 另一原因 --------> 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用! e.g:
[1]. Another important factor is .... 另一个重要因素是....
[2]. ... is also responsible for the change/problem. ...还负责更改/问题
[3]. Certainly , the ... is not the sole reason for ..... 当然,...是不是唯一的理由..... 2-1-3 后果影响 --------- 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响 . e.g:
[1]. It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on.... 这将会产生深远/深远的影响/对....的影响[2]. In involves some serious consequence for ........ 在涉及一些严重的后果........
比较对照句型
2-2-1. 两者比较 ---> 比较两事物, 要说出其一超过另一个, 或肯定一事物的优点, 也肯定其缺点的时候用 ! e.g:
[1]. The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages we gain from B. 的优势获得了从A,更远远低于我们的优势从B取得更大
[2]. Indeed, A carries much weight when compared with B. 事实上,进行大的比重较二 [3]. There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effects. 毫无疑问,它有它的消极影响以及积极的作用。
2-2-2 . 两者相同/相似 ------> 比较两事物共同都有或者共同都没有的特点时用! e.g:
[1]. A and B have several thing in common. They are similar in that..... A和B有几个共同的东西。它们是相似的.....