【小题2】luckily—lucky 考查形容词用法。此句考查形容词担当表语，故把luckily改成lucky。句意为：我很幸运能够成为来自不同国家去参观英国的学生中的一个。
【小题3】student—students 考查名词。本句考查one of加名词这一结构，此时名词需要用复数。故把student改成students。
【小题4】or—and 考查连词。根据句意可知，此时是举例说明去过哪些地方，并不是选择关系而是并列关系，故把or改成and。
【小题5】where—which 考查定语从句。本句考查定语从句连接词的选择，先行词为London，在定语从句中担当主语，故用把where改成which，因为where担当地点状语。句意为：在伦敦我了解了很多关于英国的文化和历史，伦敦是我的最爱。
【小题6】much—many 考查形容词。本句考查修饰可数名词用many，故把much改成many。句意为：在那儿，我看到了很多古老的建筑物。
【小题7】加上a 考查冠词。单词pity表示遗憾的事时，常用it is a pity，表示非常遗憾的是，…。故在pity前加上冠词a。句意为：但是，遗憾的是，那天当我们在那儿时，雨下得很大。
【小题8】they—we 考查代词。根据上文可知，是作者及其他学生在英国。故用代词we，而非they。
【小题9】excited—exciting 考查形容词。形容词exciting表示令人兴奋的；而excited表示感到兴奋的。根据句意以及其后的thing可知，此处表示令人兴奋的事情，故把excited改成exciting。
【小题10】去掉the 考查冠词。国名前不需要加冠词，故去掉冠词the。句意为：对我来说在英国最令人兴奋的就是我在那儿交了许多朋友。 六、书面表达
1.请写一封email给你在英国的笔友。 要求内容包括：
1．你最喜欢的音乐……(favourite music)
2．解释你为什么对某些音乐不太感兴趣。(many types of music, not interested in) 3．阐明一、两点音乐在你生活中的重要性。(the importance of music to your life) 文章开头和结尾已给出。 Dear Lucy，
Thanks for your letter. You asked me something about the music in my life. Let me tell you briefly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________ How about you? Write to me to tell me about music in your life. I am looking forward to it. Yours， Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lucy，
Thanks for your letter. You asked me something about the music in my life. Let me tell you briefly. Music is an important part in my life. I even can't live without music. Actually, I like many kinds of music. Well, my favourite music is American country music, such as CountryRoad. It mixes some modern melodies; it sounds very nice and pure and can bring me into dreamland. Whenever I am in trouble, I will turn on the MP5 or tape recorder and the soft melody will make me relax; the familiar songs will put me in high spirits all day long and make me forget all the problems. I'm not interested in rock music. I think it is too loud and very difficult for me to understand! The melody is not soft and nice at all! I can't stand the strong beat, which nearly makes me fainted! In a word, music has a very important place in my life. As for the importance of music to my life, I think you can guess, it is just like meals and sleeping, and I can't live without it.
How about you? Write to me to tell me about music in your life. I am looking forward to it. Yours， Li Hua
【解析】请在此填写本题解析!
本文属于提纲式作文。写提纲式作文主要包括以下三个步骤。
1、审题。审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。 2、进行构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架。文章布局要做好几件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。
3、扩展成文。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，扩展成文时还需注意以下方面问题：灵活运用各种句式，注意使用高级框架结构的句子，让文章的结构错落有致；用连接词使所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，让前后表达浑然一体。 亮点分析：
本文是一封邮件，涵盖了所有的要点。文中使用了多种句式。并列句如It mixes some modern melodies; it sounds very nice and pure and can bring me into dreamland.。由whenever引导的状语从句如：Whenever I am in trouble, I will turn on the MP5 or tape recorder。复杂句：
Whenever I am in trouble, I will turn on the MP5 or tape recorder and the soft melody will make me relax; the familiar songs will put me in high spirits all day long and make me forget all the
problems。宾语从句： I think it is too loud and very difficult for me to understand! 定语从句如：I can't stand the strong beat, which nearly makes me fainted!
同时使用了一些连词如;Actually, In a word；固定搭配如; ha奶a very important place in； as for 等，让文章更有可读性。文章要点齐全，结构完整，句式多样化，增加文章的可读性。能正确恰当地运用连词，让文章流畅自然。