The child should come from a poor family who‘s unable to complete his or her primary or middle school education because of financial difficulties. Moreover, if possible, I‘d prefer the candidate to be a girl, for, as I know, more girls in the remote areas of China are now in great need of such assistance. If such a candidate is available, I plan to help pay the tuition fee and provide necessary living expenses each month until the child‘s graduation from middle school.
I should be very grateful if you could kindly furnish me with the information concerning such a child and am looking forward to you early reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming
5讲 2008真题作文
Directions:
You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to 1) make an apology, and 2) suggest a solution.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use ―Li Ming‖ instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
Letters of apology 说明:你刚刚从加拿大回来,在你的行李包里你发现了你忘记还给Bob—你的房东的音乐光盘。给他写一封信:
向他道歉 并且 2)提出一个解决问题的建议
范文1. Dear Bob,
I am writing to express my apology to you.
Two weeks ago, I bought your music CD when I lived in your house. Unfortunately, I found the CD in my luggage after I came back to Shanghai. I was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you. I told myself to give it back to you even while I was packing! I am awfully sorry for this terrible mistake and any possible inconveniences incurred by it. I will send it to you by EMS as soon as possible.
Please forgive me for making such a mistake. Sincerely yours, Li Ming
范文2
Dear Mr. Bob:
I am writing these lines to inform you of my safe arrival in Beijing and a minor mistake. After the homecoming excitement cooled down, I am awfully sorry to find your music CD in my luggage. I wonder if I should send it to you by EMS right now or later by air mail, together with some souvenirs of Beijing Olympiad.
The music CD reminds me of my happy time and so much fun in Canada. You were so kind to me during my stay at your house. I miss you and my Canadian friends there a lot. If there is anything I can do for you here please don‘t hesitate to contact me.
Forgive me for any inconvenience caused. And I am looking forward to seeing you and your family in Beijing.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming 分析:致歉信
结构:向对方表达歉意内疚;说明原因;提出补救方法;再次道歉
形式分为熟人间的私人致歉信和事务往来需要向对方道歉的信函,此类信件要求语气严肃态度诚恳,用词谦逊原因属实。
范文3 Directions
Anlin, an employee in your store, had treated a foreign customer, Mr. Schultz, very badly. Write a letter to express your personal apology as the manager, telling him measures to compensate and to improve service and expressing hope for understanding. Dear Mr. Schultz:
I wish to personally apologize for(我希忚以私人名义对。。。表示歉意) your unfortunate treatment by our employee, Anlin, last Friday. Her actions toward you were totally inappropriate. Because of this occurrence, we have relieved Ms. Anlin of her position. We would also like to offer you a gift certificate for 50 Yuan worth of merchandise at our store. We value our customers and hope that this token will help compensate for the embarrassment you felt. We are increasing our training in customer relations for all of our employees to avoid just such a problem in the future.
Thank you for your business and understanding. (感谢惠顾和理解)We hope that this is a satisfactory solution to the problem. Sincerely yours,
Li Ming 道歉信模板 Dear ---,
I am wiring this letter to express my regret/apology that /for
The main cause is that___. I am very/ awfully sorry that I was fully occupied by---, which is quite out of my control, so I couldn‘t have made my presence on your ___ on time.
I want to suggest ___.(补救措施) to make up for/ compensate for----. I shall be obliged if you could accept my apologies. Looking forward to your reply. 开头
I‘m writing to apologize for/ say sorry for /apologize to you for Please forgive me for
I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to I must beg your forgiveness for Here is my deepest apology for I am terribly/awfully sorry 结尾
I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Please allow me to say sorry again.
I hope you can accept my apologies.
I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position/understanding/ and accept my apologies.
练习
Directions;
You lost the book you borrowed from your friend Vincent. Write a letter to make an apology and state your intention to buy him a new one
Dear Vincent,
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you were so kind to lend me last month. I read it every day and intended to finish it next week, but unfortunately, now it was nowhere to be found.
I will try to recover it as soon as possible. If I fail to find it, I will get a new book for you. But I am afraid that it can never take the place of the old one. Old books are like old friends, once lost, they can never be replaced. So for this irrecoverable loss , I am to blame. I was so careless with the things, this is a warning to me to be careful in the future.
please allow me to say sorry again, and I hope you can accept my apologies. Yours Li Ming
改错: 同学习作1 Dear Sir and Madam,
After reading the news concerning Project Hope . I want to contribute to Hope Project by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area and I‘m writing this letter for you to help me find such a child .
The child can come from a very poor family who‘s unable offer all the tuition . Because the study financial is quite high. (First, I can offer him or her the school tuition. ) In addition, I can teach him or her knowledge of middle school and senior high school. Give him or her huge of useful books so that he or she can learn very well . I can provide necessary (help )outlay until (his or her graduating )the child graduated from the senior high school .
I should be very grateful if you could kindly furnish me with the information concerning. I
will return the favor when I receive the letter from you.
Yours sincerely
同学习作2
To whom it may concern:
I am a student of college. I 'm writing to see if it is possible to provide me with information regarding the candidate of Project Hope.
I want to help the girl in a remote area who (is) be good at studying and has difficult in financial. For one thing ,I would give money to the child every month until her graduation from the primary school. For another , I would send my old clothes and books to her .Last but not the least ,I could communicate her with the experience of studying and living .If such a candidate is available ,I would try my best to help her.
I appreciate any information concerning such a child and I'm anticipating a favorable response.
Sincerely yours LiMing
2005年考研真题作文 Directions:
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use ―Li Ming‖ instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)
2005 年真题作文
范文1: Oct, 28th, 2006 Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing this letter to inform you of my decision to resign from my current position. There are a few factors (involved) as follows.
First of all, the salary has proved to be much lower than you originally promised. It‘s very difficult for me to support a large family. In addition, the office is located in the downtown area, yet I live in the suburbs, so it is exhausting for me to spend over three hours commuting every day. Most importantly, I feel rather disappointed and left out on the job itself as in the past two months I was never given any really important responsibility.
Please consider of my resignation .I am sorry for any inconvenience caused to you . Yours sincerely, Li Ming
范文2.
Dear Mr. Wang,
After serious consideration, I decide to submit my resignation as the editor of our Designs&Fashions. And I would appreciate it very much if you would accept my resignation.
What makes me come to this decision is that I find myself not suited to the job of sitting all day in the office. And besides, I plan to attend the National Entrance Examination for Masters‘
Programs in January, which means that I have to devote a lot of time to the preparation for the exams.
I am really sorry to submit my resignation at this busiest time of our agency, but I will stay through the summer and help you find a replacement for my position. Yours faithfully, Li Ming Letter of Resignation 提出辞职决定。
陈述辞职主要原因。 道歉并感谢以前的帮助。 开头:
I am writing this letter to inform you of my decision to resign from my current position./give up my position as…
(After serious consideration), I decide to submit my resignation as …
I am writing these lines to inform you of my decision to quit my present job. I am sure it will come as no surprise意料之中,不会感到意外that I wish to resign my position as
I feel reluctant to give up my present job, but I have to inform you of my resignation.
I am writing to inform you of my intention of withdrawing from my current position in the company. 结尾
I am very sorry to submit my resignation at this time.
I highly appreciate the invaluable experience and happy days working here. Thank you for your patience, understanding, and trust.
If there should be any inconvenience and trouble caused by my resignation, I am sorry indeed. I would appreciate it very much if you would accept my resignation.
Please let me to take this chance to thank you for the rewarding experience I have enjoyed during my employment.
I have enjoyed working with you and the staff in … company in the … years. My best wishes for the company‘s continued growth. 祝公司生意兴隆,蒸蒸日上。
辞职信模板 Dear ---,
I am wiring this letter to inform you about my decision to resign from my____.
The reasons for my resignation lie upon two points as follows: first of all, my primary interest is in ____ rather than ____, so I find it is not suitable to me. In addition/And besides, there are few other factors also involved such as______, although I have enjoyed working with you and the staff in the company in the____ years.
I would appreciate it very much if you would accept my resignation. Sorry for any inconvenience caused by me. 范文解析:
Directions:
You have worked in a Non-Governmental Organization for several years, but now you need to quit