2019最新高考英语语法要点细讲精练24—短文改错（详解）
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1.下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号【∧】，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线【﹨】划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。
【2018.02·桐乡模拟】ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andsoIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.Intheotherhand,Icouldmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow. 短文改错
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假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号〔︿〕，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。 注意：
1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者〔从第11处起〕不计分。 DearWeiFang,
ItsalongtimesinceIheardfromyouinlastlimE、NowI'dliketotellyouaimpressivestorythathappenedonthefirstdayofmyteachingcareer、
Aboy,LiMing,whomfatherdiedamonthago,waslateforschool、Hestoodoutsidetheclassroomsilent、IsmiledtohimandlethimcomE、
Afterawhile,hebegantocry、Seeingthis,IwalkedtohimandaskedwhathashappeneD、Hetoldmehismotherwasillbuthehadtogetsomemedicineforher、Atthesametime,heapologizedtomeforhislateness、Movedbyhisword,Ipraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosingasongwasnamed“Mother”forthestudents、Fromthenon,Ibegantorealizeweshouldrespectourparentsanddidourbesttohelpthem、Doyouthinkso?I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply、
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【2018·西安一次质检】 Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendslastsummer.Itwasgoodtripattebeginningandsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway.Oneofmyfriendsuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandbecouldn’tmoveanyfar.Nobodyknewwhattodoit.Onegirltriedtocallhermuminhermobilepone,buttherewasnosignalinthemountainarea.Luckywehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimrestedinit.Hetooksomemedicine.Thenhedrinksomewater,andatesomefood.Afterwhile,hefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedusonthetopofthemountain.
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【2018.02·桐乡模拟】你的同学刘芳乐于助人(helpful)，积极乐观(positive)。她在上星期日下午回校途中帮助了一位受伤的老人。请根据题示，用英语写一篇短文向英语报EnglishTimes投稿，简要表达她做好事的经过，并谈谈你的感想。
Whathappened ·anoldmanseriouslyhurtintheleg ·whatLiuFangdid ·misunderstandingoreventrouble,ortherightthing? ·… Youropinion Nowadays,alotofpeoplearereportedlyunwillingtohelpothers.However,LiuFangacteddifferently.____________________________________________________________________
Onepossibleversion:
Nowadays,alotofpeoplearereportedlyunwillingtohelpothers.However,LiuFangacteddifferently.
LastSundayafternoon,onherwaybacktoschool,LiuFangcameacrossanoldmanlyingontheground,seriouslyhurtintheleg.Sheimmediatelystopped,called120andpracticedfirstaid.Soon,theambulancecameandtookthemantohospital.WheneverythingwasOK,sheleftforschool.
SuchisLiuFang,ahelpful,positiveanddeterminedperson.Thoughtheremightbemisunderstandingoreventroublewhenwedogood,Istronglybelievethatshehasdonetherightthing.Asresponsiblecitizens,itisourdutytohelppeopleinneed.Also,ifyoudon’tofferyourhelpwhenothersareintrouble,howcanyouexpecthelpfromotherswhenyouareintrouble?Therefore,helpingothersmeanshelpingourselvesinasense,doesn’tit?
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【2018西安五校一模】Thewinterholidayiscoming,whichmademeexcited.Ihavebeenlookingforwardatrelaxingmyself.I’
dliketogoskating,climbmountainsandseeseveralmovie.IthinkIcanplaythebasketballwithmyclassmates.HowawonderfultimeI’llhaveduringthewinterholiday!However,myparentsthinkdifferent.Theydon’twantmegoout.TheyareafraidI’llbeknockeddownbyatruck,fallenoffatree,orfightwithothers.Besides,theyareafraidIwilllosemyway.Ihatebeingtreatedlikeabirdkeepinginacage.Togetmorefreedom,soIwilltrytopersuadethem.
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myway.Ihatebeingtreatedlikeabirdkeepinginacage.Togetmorefreedom,soIwilltryto keptso persuadethem.
7.【2018辽宁重点中学协作体期末】
OnSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfrom“GreenEyes”,washavingan environmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.They
pickeditoutandfounditwounded.Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookithome.Under
theirtreatmentandcare,theluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtoflythebird,they
feltabitofpitybutverydelightfulIthinkit’sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthe
publictoshowrespectsforthenature.Onlybychangingthewaywhichwetreattheenvironmentcanwe
getalongwellwithit. 【答案】
OnSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfrom“GreenEyes”,washavingan were
environmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.They caught
pickeditoutandfounditwounded.Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookithome.Under
upmight/could