高三一轮复习话题写作四 感谢信
出题人 袁兵艳 审题人 邓翠焕 写作五步走： 1. 审题-----忌跑题 2. 列提纲/要点----忌漏点 3. 造句-----句型结构成分要完整,忌表达单一, 忌冗言或逐句硬译，字词堆砌 4. 连句成文------添加过渡词, 忌句子松散 5. 检查---查主谓、查搭配、查拼写 感谢信：是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。 【感谢信三要素】1. 提出感谢，感谢原因（别人做了什么事让你感谢）；
2. 细述并赞赏对方给予的帮助；
3. 再次感谢，如何回报（好好学习，继续努力等）
【感谢信注意事项】 灵活把握时态：通常，在提到对方曾给予帮助时，用过去时态；在提到
对方的帮助所产生的实际效果时，可用现在完成时；涉及到现状，可用一般现在时；在表达祝愿或希望时，可用将来时。
常用词汇和写作模式
动词 thank, appreciate; owe(欠债，感激) 名词 thanks, gratitude, appreciation; 形容词 thankful, grateful, appreciative 第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因
1. I am writing to express my sincere thanks (to you) for… 2. I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude (to you) for
3. I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt(衷心的)thanks to you for…
4. I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance. 第二段：细述并赞赏对方给予的帮助 1. It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to….
2. Thank you very much for your kind hospitality(好客) and the honor you showed me during my visit… 3. It was your kind help that….（强调句）
4. But for/Without your help, I wouldn’t/couldn’t have done…（含蓄虚拟）
5. If it had not been for your help/assistance, I wouldn't/couldn’t have…（虚拟语气） 第三段：再次感谢，如何回报。 1. Thanks again for your generous help. 2. I appreciate it more than I can say.
3. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget. 句式操练
1. 我写这封信是为了表达我对你帮我提高英语口语的谢意，你的帮助对我而言意义重大。
2. 你太好了，假期照顾我弟弟。
3. 正是你的善良和热心帮助我克服了我的思乡之情。(强调句/虚拟语气)
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感谢信模板 dear ________， ① I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ________(感谢的原因)． ② if it had not been for/had it not been for/ without your assistance in ________(对方给你的具体帮助)， I would (not) have been ________(没有对方帮助的后果). ③ everyone agrees that it was you who ________ (给出细节)． ④ Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! ⑤ please accept my gratitude.
yours sincerely, Li Hua dear____, ①I am now writing to express my sincere thanks for____ . ②I would like you to know how much your _____ meant to me. ③you have a positive genius for ______. ④I not only enjoyed_____ , but also___. ⑤I shall ever remember _____ as one of the most _____ in my life. ⑥I _____. ⑦I hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating. ⑧ would you kindly let me know _____.⑨I will feel very honored and pleased if you have time to _____. ⑩ how nice it would be to see you again and I am looking forwards to seeing you next time! I repeat my thanks again for your_____. please give my kind regards to your_____ . yours truly, Li Hua 小小建议：基础薄弱或者表达能力有限的同学，不妨每一类作文背诵一个模板和几个常用短语与句型，然后灵活套用。 欣赏范文技巧
1. 列出优美的可用于自己写作中的词和短语，加深记忆；
2. 列出优美的可用于自己写作中的句型结构，从中挑选三个就某一写作话题模仿写作，争取写出和例句一样正确且优美的句子；
3. 列出范文的篇章结构，掌握篇章布局技巧。 根据范文欣赏技巧完成任务。 I am a senior student that has experienced a great 优美的词和短语： earthquake. I wrote to you to express my thanks to those who helped us when we suffered the disaster. During that time, I witnessed many strangers devoted their efforts to saving lives, providing food and clothes regardless of their own safety. Without their help, I couldn’t have found my parents in such a short time, which makes me excited. 优美的句型： Besides, only few days passed before the students returned to classrooms to have classes. As a result, we all treasure the opportunity of studying in the classroom. The help from others taught us how to respect others and take others into consideration. It was also the help from strangers that made us realize the importance of helping and caring for each other when facing disaster. Now, I think what we should do is to study harder and help more people in return.
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请挑选三个优美句型以感谢信为话题造句。
1. ______________________________________________________________________________ 2. ______________________________________________________________________________ 3. ______________________________________________________________________________ 在空格内填入适当的词句。
假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr. Brown的资助，可以重返校园。你给Mr. Brown写了一封信，内容如下： ★ 收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；
★ 在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励； ★ 决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；
★ 盼望见到Mr. Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。
注意：1. 书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 词数：100左右 Dear Mr. Brown，
I am writing to _______________________________ (表达我最深的谢意) the money and books you sent me. I __________________________________________ (我不可能重返校园) without your help. Thank you so much.
I ______________________ (一直努力学习) since I went back to school. I ____________ _____________________ (我已经取得很大的进步) my studies with the help of my teachers. They often praise me and encourage me. ______________________ (要不是你的帮助), I might have left school and _________________________________ (不可能获得这样好的教育). I have made up my mind to ___________________________________________ (更加勤奋并取得更大进步). How are you getting on with your life and work? I would like to meet you __________ (亲自), but I ______________________ (没有机会) do so. Would you please send me a photo of yourself? ________________________________________ (再次感谢你慷慨的帮助) and best wishes!
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
巩固与提高
假如你是李华，暑假你参加了澳大利亚游学活动，回国后给host family写一封信表示感谢。要点如下：
1. 感谢他们一家的照顾； 2. 分享游学体会；
3. 询问你寄的礼物（汉语词典）是否收到； 4. 邀请他们一家来中国游览。 注意：1. 次数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Helen,
____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
Yours, Li Hua
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_______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1. 内容：题材(跑题与否)与体裁(文体); 要点(齐全与否) 2. 语言：地道、标准；高级词汇和丰富句式；拼写和语法错误 3. 段落层次(清晰与否)；内在逻辑与过渡 总分______________ 请把字写工整
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参考答案
句式操练
1. 我写这封信是为了表达我对你帮我提高英语口语的谢意，你的帮助对我而言意义重大。 I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude/appreciation for your helping me improve my spoken English, which means a lot to me. 2. 你太好了，假期照顾我弟弟。
It was really kind of you to take care of my brother in the holiday.
3. 正是你的善良和热心帮助我克服了我的思乡之情。(强调句/虚拟语气) It was your kindness and warm heart that helped me overcome my homesickness.
But for/Without your kindness and warm heart, I couldn’t have overcome my homesickness. If it had not been for your kindness and warm heart, I couldn’t have overcome my homesickness. Had it not been for your kindness and warm heart, I couldn’t have overcome my homesickness. 在空格内填入适当的词句。
假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr. Brown的资助，可以重返校园。你给Mr. Brown写了一封信，内容如下： ★ 收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；
★ 在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励； ★ 决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；
★ 盼望见到Mr. Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。
注意：1. 书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 词数：100左右 Dear Mr. Brown，
I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me. I could not have returned to school without your help. Thank you so much.
I have been working hard since I went back to school. I have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers. They often praise me and encourage me. But for your help, I might have left school and couldn’t have got such a good education. I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.
How are you getting on with your life and work? I would like to meet you in person, but I have no opportunity to do so. Would you please send me a photo of yourself? Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!
Yours sincerely, Li Hua 巩固与提高
假如你是李华，暑假你参加了澳大利亚游学活动，回国后给host family写一封信表示感谢。要点如下：
1. 感谢他们一家的照顾； 2. 分享游学体会；
3. 询问你寄的礼物（汉语词典）是否收到； 4. 邀请他们一家来中国游览。 注意：1. 次数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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