孔子与苏格拉底道德教育思想之比较研究
故整个句子应改为They both produced some profound and rich 故整个句子应改为 thought of education in ethics . Although they lived in different cultural and social situations and held different values, methods and rules, they had many similarities in their theory and practice. (2)thought应改为 应改为thoughts,当thought用来指 product of thinking 用来指a 应改为 当 用来指 idea, opinion ,etc 时是可数名词 而且有 时是可数名词,而且有 而且有some 修饰 故应用复数 修饰,故应用复数 故应用复数. (3) cultural and social situations 应改为 应改为cultural and social backgrounds. situation是指形势 情况 状况等 而中文摘要中是 是指形势,情况 状况等,而中文摘要中是 是指形势 情况,状况等 说文化和社会背景,故用 故用background比较合适 比较合适. 说文化和社会背景 故用 比较合适 (4) theory 应改为复数 应改为复数theories 完全修改后的整个句子为: They both produced some profound and rich thoughts of education in ethics. Although they lived in different cultural and social backgrounds and held different values, methods and rules, they had many similarities in their theories and practice. 返回
孔子与苏格拉底道德教育思想之比较研究
4 It will be of great importance for us to understand traditional Chinese and western Culture by comparing their similarities and differences and critically assimilating the positive factors in the west so as to promote the construction of contemporary education in ethics in China.
和这句英文摘要对应的中文摘要是:比较 和这句英文摘要对应的中文摘要是 比较、反思孔子和苏格 拉底道德教育思想的异同,对于深入了解中西文化传统 对于深入了解中西文化传统,批判 拉底道德教育思想的异同 对于深入了解中西文化传统 批判 性地吸收西方道德教育中的积极因素,推进当前我国的道德 性地吸收西方道德教育中的积极因素 推进当前我国的道德 教育建设无疑具有重要作用.可以看出这句英文摘要并不能 教育建设无疑具有重要作用 可以看出这句英文摘要并不能 准确译出作者要表达的意思,所以我认为应做如下修改 准确译出作者要表达的意思 所以我认为应做如下修改 (1) The comparison of similarities and differences of education
in ethics between Confucius and Socrates will be of great importance to understand traditional Chinese and western Culture ,critically assimilate the positive factors in the west , and promote the construction of contemporary education in ethics in China.
孔子与苏格拉底道德教育思想之比较研究
(2)will be 表示对将来的展望 而此处则表示是讨论后的既定事 表示对将来的展望,而此处则表示是讨论后的既定事 实的意思,所以应改为 所以应改为is 实的意思 所以应改为 (3) traditional Chinese and western Culture 是“传统中西方 文化” 而不是 中西文化传统” 所以应改为 而不是“ 所以应改为Chinese and 文化”,而不是“中西文化传统”,所以应改为 western Cultural tradition (4) in the west 是”在西方的 西部的”意思 故positive 在西方的,西部的 意思,故 西部的” factors in the west 不能正确译出”西方道德教育中的积极因 不能正确译出” 这一意思,所以应改为 所以应改为positive factors of western 素”这一意思 所以应改为 education in ethics 所以,最后一句应改为 所以 最后一句应改为: The comparison of similarities and 最后一句应改为 differences of education in ethics between Confucius and Socrates is of great importance to understand Chinese and western Cultural tradition, critically assimilate the positive factors of western ethical education ,and promote the construction of contemporary education in ethics in China.
孔子与苏格拉底道德教育思想之比较研究
三 修改后的英文摘要
The Comparison between Confucius’ Thoughts of Ethical Education and That of Socrates Both Confucius and Socrates were important figures in the history of early human ideology. They both produced some profound and rich thoughts of education in ethics. Although they lived in different cultural and social backgrounds and held different values, methods and rules, they had many similarities in their theories and practice.
孔子与苏格拉底道德教育思想之比较研究
The comparison of similarities and differences of education in ethics between Confucius and Socrates is of great importance to understand Chinese and western Cultural tradition, critically assimilate the positive factors of western education in ethics ,and promote the construction of contemporary ethical education in China Key words : Confucius Socrates education in ethics
孔子与苏格拉底道德教育思想之比较研究
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