2017高考英语作文考前复习串讲
Ⅰ. NMET书面表达第五项要求
1. 覆盖所有的语言要点。 内容要点可用不同方式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
2. 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性。值得注意的是语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致; 具备较强的语言运用能力。 3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。 Ⅱ. 常见的不足
1.汉语式英语 2.无过渡语 3.句式单一,平铺直叙 Ⅲ. 如何增强书面表达效果 1.使用较高级的词汇 2.使用恰当的连接词 3.使用较丰富的句式 一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 2. We all think he is a great man. 3. Suddenly I thought out a good idea. 4. The students there needn’t pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure. 6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. 7. She went to Austria in order to study music. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. 9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. 10. You can find my house easily. 二、怎样使用恰当的连接词
连接词使文章语意通顺，前后衔接紧密，可采用以下方法： 提示1：恰当使用关联词，如when，so，if，because，so that等。
提示2：巧妙使用意思有联系的词或短语，如First, Second, Third, Soon, What’s more, As a result等。
提示3：适当使用过渡性语句，如The reasons are as follows./Every coin has two sides./On the other hand,/On the contrary, Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. ( 2007全国I)
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First, she can make some pocket money to meet pet daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. Second, she can learn how to deal with various problems in the workplace. Third, she can build up new friendships and improve bet social skills. (2007陕西)
In my opinion, learning English is a step-by-step process. (2007浙江) 连接词、句型的选择 1、递进关系
（肯定）Besides / What’s more / Also /In addition/Furthermore
（否定）What’s worse / Even worse / Worse still /To make matters worse 2、时间
一…就…：The moment / On doing / as soon as /immediately / directly 不久：It was not long before … / After a while / Soon 然后：After that / Then / So / Next 同时： At the same time / Meanwhile
3、转折：however , / but / on the contrary / On the other hand / yet / although 4、顺序：First / Second / Third / Last / Next/Then
5、条件：If / As long as / So long as /on condition that / unless
6、强调：It was …that / who … / So she did . /I do hope … / She did help me. /It really worked./ besides/ furthermore/moreover/what’s more/ certainly/ actually/ in fact 7、其它：
不得不做某事：have to do sth./have no choice but to do sth./have nothing to do but do sth. 有必要做某事：There is no need (for sb.) to do sth./It is necessary (for sb.)to do … 最好 做某 事：You’d better do sth. / It’s better to do sth.
做某事没困难：have no difficulty in doing sth. / have no trouble in doing sth.
感 谢 某 人：thank sb. / be thankful to sb./ express one’s thanks to sb. /be grateful to sb. / Thanks to … 求 助 某 人：turn to sb. for help / ask sb. for help / with the help of / with one’s help 惊 奇：To one’s surprise / In surprise / Surprisingly / only +不定式（表意外结果） 结 果：As a result / Therefore / Thus / So
总 结：In a word / In short / Above all / After all/ generally speaking/ to sum up/ in all/altogether / as is known to all 表 达 观 点：In my opinion / I think / I believe / I’m sure / I guess 原因如下（很多）：he reasons are as follows. /here are many reasons for it. 浪费金钱（时间）：It’s a waste of money / time …
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Task: 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。 1、 Yao Ming was walking in the street___________ he heard someone cry for help. 2、 He advised that I hire a car ___________ I could travel around in the west . 3、 It was not long___________the police came.
4、 ___________he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl. 5、 Do you agree with my arrangement ? ___________,do write to me soon.
6、 We can go downtown and do some shopping.___________ , we can pay a visit to some places of interest. 7、I shared the cost of the gas with my friends . ___________ , I saved $80. 8、Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. ___________ , it may make us fat. Task: Writing Practice
请你给《中国日报》写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。 原因：
1、家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱养家。 2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。 3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。 看法：
1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。
2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。 要求：
1、不要逐字逐句翻译。 2、语句要连贯通顺。 3、字数100个左右。
Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. Most families are poor and can’t afford their education. They have to stay at home and make money. Some parents think daughters needn’t go to school. They don’t let them go to school. Some children are not interested in their studies and wouldn’t like to go to school.
All the children including girls should be educated. The whole society should pay attention to it. They’ll play an important part in the future of our country. 诊断：
[优点] 1、词能达意； 2、语句表达基本正确。 [缺点] 语句不够连贯 [药方] 1、使用常见句型；
2、每两个句子之间使用关联词或过渡词。
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Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school.▁▁▁▁▁▁▁▁。▁▁▁，most families are too poor to send their children to school . ▁▁▁▁,they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. ▁▁▁,some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. ▁▁▁▁,they don’t let them go to school. ▁▁▁,some children are not interested in their studies. ▁▁▁▁▁▁,some wouldn’t like to go to school.
▁▁▁▁▁▁,all the children including girls should be educated . ▁▁▁▁▁▁,the whole society should pay attention to it ▁▁▁they’ll play an important part in the future of our country one day. 三、怎样使用较丰富的句式
方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 Rewrite the sentences
1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard.
4 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）. Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动词) 5. 听到这个消息, 他们变的很激动。 _________the news, they got excited. 6. 尽管被告知许多遍, 他仍然重复这个错。
__________________many times, he still repeated the mistake. 7. 除非被邀请发言, 你应该在会议上保持沉默。
Unless ________to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting. Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非谓语动词) 8. 面对困难时，他从不放弃。 9. 引入市场后，该产品大获成功。 10. 做完作业后，他回家了。
方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力 Complete the sentences
1. He didn’t realize his foolishness until he returned home. Not until____________________________________. 2. We can save the earth by changing the way we live. Only ____________________________________ . 3. He is clever but he does not work hard.
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_________________as / though ____________________________________. 4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street.
On the other side of the street ____________________________________. Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒装句) 5. 他从不说关于他家庭的事。
6. 只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性, 我们才能生活得更好。 7. 只有用这种方式, 我们才能有足够的精力好好学习。
8. Describe the character（济公） by using Inverted Sentence(倒装句) 9. 他是个孩子，却知道很多。
10. 墙上有个通知，上面写着“请节约用水”。 方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式
1、感叹句 e.g. 1) How happy I was when I received your letter. 2） What a kind boy he is! 3）How disappointed he was ! 2、强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. 3、倒装句 e.g. 1) Only in this way can you solve this problem. 2) There comes the police car. 3) Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. 4、省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. 5、with短语 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand. 6、定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. 7、各种名词性从句 e.g. That’s what I should do. 8、各种状语从句 e.g. Use ifferent ways to describe the picture （连战的破冰之旅）一…就受到欢迎 a. As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed. b. On arriving at the airport, Lien Chan and his wife…
c. Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport. d. No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were … e. Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were … ……
Task: 按要求改写下列句子,使其更具文采。
1. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (强调句型)
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