琳姐杰作之小作文透析
考研英语小作文
一． 分值：小作文 （100字）10分
二． 小作文类型：感谢信(thanks)，祝贺信(congratulation)，道歉信(apology)，邀请信(invitation) 倡导信（建议信）
(suggestion); 投诉信（complaint），询问信（inquiry）请求信（require）婉拒信(decline)，求职信（application），推荐信(recommendation)，公告（notice）备忘（memo）,
三． 小作文格式：三三原则1.三个逗号；2.三个段落；3.三个永恒
1. 三永恒：Jan.9th, 2011, Dear XX, Yours, 2. 三逗号：日期中，称呼后，署名后
3. 三段式：首段说明写信意愿和目的+第二段展开内容+末端呼应首段，再一次强调写信用意，并表达祝愿。
四． 小作文格式注意事项：
1.日期的格式和位置；-----Jan.9th,2011 在右上角
2.称呼的格式：Dear Sir, Dear Madam Helen, Dear John, Dear Professor Smith, 男士：Mr. 女士：Mrs./ Ms./Miss 教授、博士：Prof./Dr. 市长，法官，议员，其他高官：Hon.(Honorable,尊敬的) 编辑：Editor
不清楚对方姓名：Dear Sir/Sirs, Dear Madam/Madams, Dear Sir or Madam, To Whom It May Concern, 3. 署名的格式：右下角，Yours sincerely, Sincerely yours, Sincerely, 4.正文开头空四格
A letter of Congratulations
Jan.10th, 2011
Dear Jack,
I am so delighted to hear that you have just been admitted into the prestigious Peking University. Please accept my heartiest congratulations to you!
This is a special moment for you and all the friends as well as relatives, and I do want to share the happiness with you. After years of hard and creative work and study, you have finally got what you really deserve. I’m convinced that this will be a new beginning, a chance for you to embrace a broader future.
I wish you good luck and keep pursuing a brighter future.
Sincerely yours, Li Ming
五． 小作文内容注意事项：
1. 娓娓道来+洗耳恭听 2. 晓之以理+声泪俱下 3. 画龙点睛+无路可退 例子1：
一. I’m writing to ask you to marry me. Will you marry me?
二. These days, I have been thinking about the beautiful memories we have created together. One idea comes into my mind, maybe it’s time we made commitments to our everlasting love. Would I be lucky enough to get the “yes” from you?
琳姐杰作之小作文透析
例子2：
一. 我真的不舍得和你说再见， 我已经很依赖你了。
二. 如果我不会总缠着你，请不要以为我舍得和你说再见了 你不懂我那一瞬间的失落，是多么想伸出手去抓住你 你要明白正是为了爱，才悄悄的收起对你的依赖
例子3：见下面的一封情书
Jan.9th, 2011
Dear Teacher Zhang,
I’m one of your millions of students, I came to attend your English class last week, in which I acquired much information about writing skills. In the meantime, I learned another more important thing by accident. I may be shot by a magic arrow.
I can’t help recalling the beautiful moment at which you came into my sight. You were wearing a gracious dress, which brought me the feeling of elegance immediately; the attempting smile on your charming face attracted me deeply. Walking in the sun, you seemed to me like an angle from the paradise. It was more of your inner beauty that drew my attention irresistibly, the humorous way you taught English as well as the broad knowledge of English you accumulated inspired my zeal for English right away.
I would really like to invite you to have a meaningful date with me, I’m convinced that spending a day with you would surly exceed the meaning of reading books for a whole week for me. Please do give me this chance to get close to English. I would appreciate it with my whole heart.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
经典句子，开启走向成功作文的大门。
If I had a single flower for every time I think about you, I could walk forever in my garden. 假如每次想起你我都会得到一朵鲜花，那么我将永远在花丛中徜徉。 Within you I lose myself, without you I find myself wanting to be lost again. 有了你，我迷失了自我。失去你，我多么希望自己再度迷失。
琳姐杰作之小作文透析
小作文分类模版：
感谢信（表达感谢并说明原因---说明自己曾受到对方的帮助---再次感谢并表达回报愿望）tip:信的末尾尽量表达希望回
报对方。
I’m writing to extend my gratitude to you for your charming hospitality.我写信来表达我对你的盛情款待的感激之情。 I take this opportunity to express to you my deep appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.我借此机会对您给予
我的帮助表示深深地感谢。
It is my great honor/pleasure to show my hearty thanks to you for…很荣幸能借此机会向你表达我衷心的感谢。
In this letter I would like to convey my heartiest thanks to you for your kindness and hospitality. 我想通过这封信表达感谢，
感谢您对我的热情招待。
Your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first XX trip into a beautiful memory. 你们的慷慨和对我的关心使我此行非常愉快，而我的第一次XX也因此变成了美好的回忆。 I feel obliged to thank you. 非常感谢你们。
Thank you again for your kindness and I hope that I will have the opportunity to return your charming hospitality. 再次感
谢您的友好，希望有机会回报您的款待。
祝贺信（说明事由并表达衷心的祝贺---评论实践，赞扬收信人----再次表达良好愿望）tip:第二段赞扬对方的优秀能力和
取得成功的原因，并展望他将来美好的发展前景） I am much delighted to learn that… 我很高兴听说…
This is a special and happy moment for you and I am proud of your achievement.这是一个特殊的时刻，一个高兴地时刻，我为
你的成就感到自豪。
XX will not only pose a great challenge to you, but also fundamentally enhance your ability comprehensively. XX不仅给了
你一个很大的挑战，同时也将综合地提高你的能力。
I believe this position will be a new beginning, and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a brilliant future career. 我相信这是一个新的开始，这个机会将使你拥有一个更加充实的生活，并为你灿烂的将来打下基础。 Please accept my most sincere congratulations! 请接受我最诚挚的祝福。 My excitement is beyond any word.兴奋之情无以言喻 It’s so great to be informed of the news that…很高兴得知… Congratulations to you on your latest prize.祝贺你最近取得的奖
You are always the greatest pride of we Chinese.你一直是我们中国人的骄傲。
Edison once said: “Genius is 1% inspiration and 99% perspiration.”爱迪生曾说过：天才是1%的灵感加上99%的汗水
道歉信 （表达歉意---说明具体原因，提出补救办法---再次道歉，希望得到原谅）tips：犯错理由必须合理；解释完理
由后尽量提供一个合适的补救办法。
I sincerely apologize for my careless mistake, as well as for any inconvenience thus caused to you.我真诚的为我的失误和因此
给你带来的不便向你道歉。
The pity is that I can’t do sth…很遗憾我不能做.
I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of… 错过…我很遗憾
Please do accept my deep apology to you.请一定要接受我对你深深地抱歉。 Much to my regret that I am unable to attend your party.很遗憾我不能去.
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t do… due to X.我很遗憾地告知您，因为…我不能…
琳姐杰作之小作文透析
I really hope that you can understand that I didn’t mean it.我真的和你希望你能理解我并不是有意要做这件事情的。 I would be very much obliged if you could grant me another chance. 要是你能再给我一次机会我会不胜感激。 I really hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.我真的希望你能理解我的处境并接受我的道歉。 I assure you that such matter will never happen again.我保证这样的事以后不会再发生了。 Is it possible for me to make up my fault to you? 我可以弥补我的过错吗？ Will you kindly excuse me for not being able to do sth. 你能原谅我不能做某事吗？ Please do allow me to say sorry again. 请允许我再次道歉。
邀请信 （说明邀请目的----说明活动安排----期待尽早回复）tips： 要说明活动的详细信息，包括时间，地点，内容，
有哪些人参加。语气要诚挚。
I have the honor to invite you to… 邀请您参加…，我感到很荣幸。
We would be particularly honored by your distinguished presence. 如果您能出席，我们将十分荣幸。 We would like to extend to you an invitation to… 我们很高兴地邀请您… I wonder if there is any chance for you to come to… 不知道你能否来…
You are sincerely invited to attend the XX as our honored guest. 我们衷心邀请您最为贵宾。
It would be my great pleasure for me to share important moment with you.我非常想和你分享那些重要的时光。 We will cover all the expenses involved. 我们将承担所有相关费用。
There are arrangements for…， which I am sure you will thoroughly enjoy. 我还安排了…相信你一定会玩的很开心。 The dinner starts at… so that we can have a nice and long evening.晚饭将于…开始，这样我们就能享受一个漫长且愉快的晚上。 I would love for you to attend, so please let me know your decision. 我非常希望你能来，请告诉我你的决定。 The favor of a reply is requested. 等待回信。
Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience. 请早日告知能否参加。
建议信 （自我介绍，说明目的----委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告---礼貌地总结或期盼回复）tips: 建议信语
言一定要委婉，礼貌。在提出缺点之前先肯定其优点。
Consequently, I feel it urgent to bring forward effective solutions to tackle the problem.因此，我觉得已经刻不容缓地需要提出
这个难题的解决方案了。
I’m writing to advise you of the pressing situation we are facing currently. 写信是想就我们当前面临的紧急情况提出一些建议。 To my humble opinion, to save the situation from future aggravating, measures should be taken immediately. 就我看来，为
了扭转情况继续恶化，我们应该立即采取措施。
I hope that you will find my recommendations/suggestions useful in our collective/joint efforts to… 我希望我的建议能在我
们公共努力…中起作用。
I would like to take the opportunity to express my opinions about sth. 我想利用这个机会来表达我对某事的看法。 I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning sth. 我想就某事提出我的观点，这对某事有帮助。 I feel it’s my obligation to make some suggestions with regard to/regarding sth. 我觉得就某事提出一些建议是我的责任。 I will try to give some constructive advice on sth.我试着就某事给一些有建设性的建议
I would be more than happy if my proposal could be considered and positive changes take place in these regards.如果您能
够考虑我的这些建议并使学校在以上方面做出改进，我将感激不尽。
To solve the problem, in my mind, we should…为了解决这一问题，我的看法是…
I would really appreciate your kindness if you could take my advice/application into consideration. 要是您能好好考虑我的
琳姐杰作之小作文透析
建议/申请，我一定会非常感谢您的。
投诉信 （说明投诉问题---描述具体情况---期待解决方案）tips: 语气要冷静，郑重，不必过于礼貌，但不能进行人身攻
击；在描述问题时尽量采用被动句式，使描述更加客观合理。 I venture to write to complain about… 我冒昧写信来投诉… I’m writing to make a complaint about…我写信是为了投诉…
It is a great pity that we find there is something wrong with…很遗憾，我们发现..有问题 I would like to draw your attention to the problem that…我想让你知道…问题
I have been pleased with your services for years, but now I feel very disappointed. 我一直对你们的服务很满意，但是如今我很
失望。
One annoying aspect of your service is… 你的服务中一个令人不满的地方是… I hope you will give due attention to this matter.希望对此您能给予足够的重视。
I hope you can make an investigation into this matter as soon as possible. 我希望你能尽快调查此事。
I would appreciate it very much if you could get this problem settled as soon as possible. 要是你能尽早的解决这个问题，我将
非常感激。
Would you please let me know whether or not you can solve the problem as soon as possible? 你能尽快告诉我是否可以解决
这个问题。
I hope you can take my complaints seriously. 我希望你认真对待我的投诉。
询问信 （自我介绍，说明目的---具体询问事宜---表达感谢，期盼回复） tips： 语气比较正式，表达感激之情。
I am writing to ask for information about… 我写信来询问…的信息
It would be greatly appreciated if you could provide us with… 如果你能提供…我将不胜感激 I would be grateful to receive a prompt reply. 希望您能尽快回信。
Would you please let me know whether such… is available? 你能告诉我有这样的…吗？
I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning… 如果您能为我提供有关…的信息，我将不
胜感激。
Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. 希望您能及时关注此信，将不胜感激。
I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the related information. 如果你能告诉我相关信息，我将很感激。
请求信 （介绍自己，提出请求---说明原因及其他事项---表达谢意，期盼答复）tips:由于是给不熟悉的人写信，所
以有必要适当的自我介绍一下；由于需要提出请求，一定要表达感谢之情
I am writing in the hope of your assistance to do sth. 我写信希望你能帮我做某事。 Thank you for your time. 谢谢你抽出时间。
I wonder if you could spare some time to help me with sth. 不知道可不可以占用您的一点时间帮我做某事。 Could you please do me the favor of doing sth? 你能不能帮我做某事？
I would like to pay for the relevant expense by cash or credit card. 我愿意通过现金或者信用卡支付相关费用。 I am looking forward to a prompt reply from you. 希望尽快得到你的答复。
辞职信 （提出辞职---说明原因，表示遗憾或感谢---期盼回复）tips: 语气一定要诚恳，尤其是要表达遗憾的心情，同时
对原雇主曾给自己这份工作机会表达感激之情。
I am writing to inform you of my intention of withdrawing from my current position. 我写信是想辞去我目前的工作。 I am sorry to inform you by this letter that I plan to resign my present job. 我很遗憾地告诉你我将辞去目前的工作。