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Dear Mom，may you be happy every day! Yours sincerely， Li Yue
二轮专题强化练答案精析
强化练(二十五) 短文改错(4)
1
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into the street， the woman told the child to go home and have a happy holiday.The little boy looked at her
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2
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our school’s activities.Secondly，we should respect the old and love the young， our parents and
includingteachers.We should also unite the
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around us and help each other.Above all，we must be and
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1
I always wanted to be great scientist. I had these dreams of inventing a new drug that would save the life of hundreds of people. Unfortunate, I was never very good at chemistry at school and the teacher used to getting very angry with me. After a while, I decided I would become an inventor and designed an amazing new product would become a household name. My parents were quite encouraged, but told me to be a little more realistic. A few weeks late, I had a clever idea for a pen that would write with upside down. To my disappointment, a friend of me pointed out it was not a new discovery. 2
Like many teenagers in China, most of my spare time was spent doing my homework. As a result, I don’t have enough time to do what I'm interested in even on weekends or at holiday. The first thing I enjoy it when I have a few spare minutes is to listen to music. It's the best way for me to release stress of my study. When I listen to music, it is like go into another world. Sometimes, the word of the songs seem to express exact how I'm feeling. However, I'm also interested in fashion and I'm always looking for something special can reflect my personality. What I want most is to be giving more free time to develop my interests and hobbies. 3
When I firstly learned to write in English, I ran into many mistakes. The main problem was in that 1 always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.
My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and read one to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. 4.
Mr. Green was inviting to give lectures all over the United States as soon as he becomes famous. So he got famiIiar on his driver. One day, his driver asked Mr. Green let him give the lecture instead of Mr. Green. Mr. Green agreed because nobody there had been seen him before. When the driver appeared on the platform, he accepted a warm welcome. The driver performed wonderful. But when the drive, was about to leave, the young man asked him a very difficult question. The driver was very clever. He smiled at Mr. Green or said it was such easy that his driver could answer it. 5
A vacation is a time when families had much time off from work and school and can spend time with each another. There are many vacation ideas to choose from. Visit Disneyland or a famous city. So why not spend time in a special place with no one surrounding you and nothing is getting in your way ? Camping is a great way to he on your family. Rather than being surrounded by traffic, hundred of people and tall buildings, you can enjoy beauty of nature around you in a warm place. The birds, trees, rivers or plants are beautiful during the night time of the year and can make you feel comfortably and relaxed. So, why not to prepare such a special vacation with your family during this summer vacation? 6
Most students study English hardly at school hut they only use the time study the ruIes of the language and new words. They spend a lot of time on exercise. They don't like reading EngIish much. Actually, reading for pleasure is the easier way to learn English well. Many experts say reading for pleasure help students to learn from many important things about English. For example, students can learn more about the cultures of the English-spoken countries. However, they can learn what to use English more properly. 7
One night, whiJe Xiao Ming and his father were sleeping. a thief which face was covered with a piece of cloth entered into the room quietly, held a knife in his hand. Although he tried to walk as quietIy as possibly, Xiao Ming and his father were woken up. Realizing what had happened. they fight braveIy against the thief. Suddenly Xiao Ming came up an idea. He threw a drawing pin on the floor where the thief might pass. Like expected, the thief
stepped on a pin and was badly hurt. Screaming in great pain, the thieves fell down. Xiao Ming and his father took the chance to tie the thief up. With Xiao Ming's clever, they finally won the unexpected battle. 8
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn't believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a Iesson to us that is was possible give without expect anything in return. 9
The day before yesterday, I went to the bookstore which is near our school to buy the reference book. It was Saturday, so there was many people. With the helps of the shop assistant, I quickly got the book I needed. I was about to leave while I found someone trying to steal a man's money. Although I was nervous, but I tried to think of a way to help. Suddenly, a good idea occurred me. I stepped on the man’s foot deliberate. As expected, the man's scream gives the thief a fright, who quickly walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation, the man smiled and showed great gratitude to her. 10
Sometimes you feel stressed because of frequently exams, Right? But don't worry about the problem. Here are some advice on how to deal with it.
First of all, you should have confidences and hold on to your dreams. It's important to make a good study plan and carry them out. To stay healthy and energetic, you'd better to do some sports after school, such as playing basketball, swimming and running. Besides, balanced diet is helpful.
You should eat more vegetables and fruit or avoid food with too much fat. It's a good idea to turn out to your parents and teachers for help when you get into trouble. They will sure help you out. Last but not least, listening to music also makes you feel relaxing.
高考短文改错 1(11浙江)
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
高考短文改错 2（11辽宁）
In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady , around three per weeks. When, however, on Monday, January 16, the science fiction film about visitors outer space was shown on television ,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer , Wayne Tyler ,who directly responsible for the study all such reports ,decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article , which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation , there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings ,because the rate remainded above the previous level.
高考短文改错3（11陕西）
Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camera with me at that time，but I rushed back home to get．Unfortunately，by the time I got back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building．He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him，but he signed his name on my shirt!
高考短文改错 4（11全国）
My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
高考短文改错 5(12浙江)
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and
hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil .As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.
高考短文改错 6（12辽宁）
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love
Fiona
高考短文改错7（12陕西）
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport .We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
高考短文改错8（12全国）
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, \lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.
高考短文改错 9（13四川）
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?
高考短文改错 10（13浙江）
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job and as Mom explained, ―He was lucky to find other
one.‖His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school, or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.
Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours, Rosemary
高考短文改错 11（13辽宁）
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. ―He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.‖ That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
高考短文改错 12（13陕西）
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
高考短文改错 13（13全国）
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
高考短文改错 14（13全国）
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
高考短文改错 15（14辽宁）
Dear Jeremy and Alice,
Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.
We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as wc arc often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us. considering how closely the houses are.
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.
高考短文改错 16（14陕西）
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows
was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
高考短文改错 17（14四川）
Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.
高考短文改错 18（14全国）
Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes
（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!
高考短文改错 19（14浙江）
I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.
高考短文改错 20（15陕西）
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, ―I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.‖
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
高考短文改错 21（15四川）
Hi, Janice,
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays
now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
高考短文改错 22（15浙江）
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
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【答案】【小题1】while改为when 【小题2】heavy改为heavily 【小题3】and改为or 【小题4】see改为saw 【小题5】must后加have 【小题6】and后加got / was
【小题7】which改为where 或前加in 【小题8】in—at 【小题9】an 【小题10】go—went
高考新编
(一)
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willso
be happy there.Now I am living in a city， I wouldbut
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seriouslyhave
breath∧
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(二)
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downsuch
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aretakingUnless dying out.Measures should be to protect our environment. we fail istakenIf
(三)
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crowd
.Tony saw a toy in a shop crowded
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to do so，we’ll live to regret it.
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youever were terribly worried.” Tony promised her that this would Inever
二轮专题强化练答案精析
强化练(二十二) 短文改错(1)
1
Nothing is impossible！If you have a dream，your dream will must\\ come true as long as you always work that∧
hard.To tell you the truth，my dream is common.I want to be a doctor.There was a time I was in hospital.I
whensaw with my own eyes that a doctor
fightskindly
all night to save a baby’s life.I was touched by the behavior foughtkind
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of the doctor.I think doctors are the greatest. can make patients recover from a disease.，I am
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whomever
suffers from illnesses.I hope that I am able to help people keep
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treat
patients.In a word，if I become a doctor in the future，
treating
subjects
so that I can go
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healthy.At the same time，I will devote myself to
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2
Dear Mr.Green， I’m very
exciting∧
to learn that you will start a magazine together.That sounds great and I definitely agree with
excited
mentiongive
in the letter are really my cup of tea.“Cultural Express” us a
mentionedgives
part
of the world have different values，it’s parts
you on that.
Some of the columns that you
better understanding of the world.Since people from different necessary to learn from each English idioms and
another
.Apart from that，“Blurt Out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn other
improvingor
oral English.“Entertainment” is also cool！The popular singers，actors improveand
celebrities are so
attractively
that you absolutely can’t miss this part.Teenagers are to\\ fond of popular things，
attractive
too.
Well，I can’t list more.I really can’t wait to read this magazine. Yours， Li Ming
3
Dear Mandy，
especial
I’m not doing well in my lessons at school， in maths.My dad says I must try hard because he wants
especiallystudy∧
me to go to university.He thinks I’m lazy，but it’s not true.I work really hard，often late into the
studyingnight！I’ve tried to talk to my mother，but she always
saidlike
I have to work as hard my brother does.My saysas
and
brother doesn’t study very hard， he always gets excellent grades.It’s not fair!
butThe only thing I like it\\ is art.My teacher says I’m the best student she’s had for all he said was，“You mustn’t waste your time I’m feeling quite Thanks a lot! Yours sincerely， Lisa
4
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I’m sorry to occupy your precious time，
andanything I really want to tell you about the problem of some butsomething
year
.When I told my dad，years
in
art.You must focus your mind on your lessons！”
on/over
puzzling
what to do now.Would you please help me out?
puzzled
people keeping too many pets nowadays.I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reasontrouble∧
.First of all，as it\\ is known to people，pets make so much noise that they或 residents a reasonstroubleslot.What’s more，it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment，uncomfortable.Many owners like taking their pets to public people.The
where
makes people quite which
place
where they may frighten children or even bite places
mostlyTake
important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. mostTaking
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all these factors into consideration，I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to/will do something for this. Yours truly， Wang Lin
二轮专题强化练答案精析
强化练(二十三) 短文改错(2)
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3
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二轮专题强化练答案精析
强化练(二十四) 短文改错(3)
1
causes∧
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firstly
in our daily life. first
measure
which can solve this problem.Firstly，our students should realize
measures
or
traffic rules，and pay attention to food safety，because many incidents happen just and
you
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wewith conflicts.Thirdly，our government and schools should provide surroundings themselves in their studies.
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on campus safe and sound.
everyone
2
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3
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2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(浙江卷)
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
第一节（10分，每小题1分）
1.cousin – cousin’s 2. rich – richer 3.on --- in 4.put ---put it/that 5. enjoy to --- enjoy 6.faced --- face 7. Late --- Later 8.slow --- slowly 9. knows --- knew 10. ever --- never
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)
In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady ,around three per
week. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors outer space was shown on
television ,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer ,Wayne Tyler ,who directly responsible for the study all such reports ,decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article ,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation ,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings ,because the rate remainded above the previous level. 第1个考查 主谓一致，were—was; 第2个考查 名词单复数 weeks--week 第3个考查 介词从外面来，介词应该用from. 第4个考查冠词 the--a
第5个考查非限制性定语从句 注意be responsible for 表示对什么负责。who后加 was或is 第6个考查非谓语 decide to do sth. making—make 第7个考查代词 指代前面Wayne Tyler，因此用They--He。 第8个考查动词explain是及物动词，不需要介词。去掉for 第9个考查非谓语做状语用follow---following.
第10个考查连词 because 表示原因，根据上文应该是表示转折关系的连词。 because---although/though/but/yet
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(陕西卷)
Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camera making actors
with me at that time，but I rushed back home to get?．Unfortunately，by the time I got so／and it
back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was really had anywhere disappointing and about to leave when he walked out?a building．He was right there in disappointed of
the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him， have but he signed his name on my shirt! 2011高考英语试题（新课标卷） 答案：
My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a buying Ticket to HangZhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to there
Xiamen for ∧long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag a and
from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very in were
strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my fiend he lent luggage friend’s to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last. Felt
2012年浙江高考英语试题
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and
ago 去掉 Unfortunately hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did weeks but not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I
would me was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them far interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew∧ truth. I still think that interesting the it was the right thing to do.
2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as a car drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love
Fiona
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring had of Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had Unfortunately been a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a long line of as
traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there miles
unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as ∧ car
until/till there a drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ We and made our own way to home. 去掉
2012全国英语高考真题 陕西卷
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport .We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
答案：1.visit----visited 2.but----so/and 3.go to---to去掉 4.comfortably----comfortable 5.were---was 6.for---with 7.taking---take 8.dish---dishes 9.such后加a 10.me---mine.
2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标)
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, \make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on. 答案：
第一行：因为与more patient对应，little要改为less 第二行：each of 后面要用可数名词复数toy要改为toys
第三行：do sb. Wrong意思为冤枉某人，不符合句意。改为go wrong或过去时went wrong意思是“出问题”，“出毛病”符
合句意。
第四行：与toys对应，故it要改为复数them。Parents指代不明，所以要加上my。
第五行：由句意“发生了什么事”，可知which哪个不对，应该为what。由后文said可知tear要用过去式tore。 第六行：为某人买玩具应该用for而不是to。
第七行：由found out that with patience可知must语气太强，应该为could或might。
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（四川卷）
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?
答案：1.difficult----difficulty.2.hardly---hard 3.asking---asked 4.to copy 去掉to 5.think---thinking 6.all---both 7.same前加the 8.tests---test 9.so---or 10.does---did 2013年浙江省高考英语试卷真题 答案： Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job and as Mom explained, ―He was lucky to find other
moved another one.‖ His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school, or just everything else classmates and
I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister,
worse
Maggie. Tomorrow is∧ first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep. the/my tired asleep are
Yours, Rosemary
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. ―He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.‖ That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
答案：1.with—on 2.so去掉 3.have—has 4.healthy—health 5.which---what 6.visit前加a 7.her---his 8.step—stepped 9.picture---pictures 10.many—much
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（陕西）
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and went our
headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water.
Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted After impatient
to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a but was sudden pull at the pole and ∧fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my a minutes grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and feeling
barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅱ卷)
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late agternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cupswithout handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
答案：1.of去掉 2.Have—Having 3.that---which 4.becomes---become 5.day
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅰ卷)
前加the
6.Interesting---Interestingly 7.by---with/to 8.drank—drunk 9.cup—cups 10.grow—growth
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only
hold
four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. passed
well / clearly
shoulders
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town,∧he was
to / into
him and \\ strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do
when
homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. ever
高考短文改错 15（14辽宁）
Dear Jeremy and Alice,
Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.
We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as wc arc often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us. considering how closely the houses are.
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter. 【答案】去掉us前面的to
【试题解析】动词bother困扰，麻烦；这是一个及物动词，后面直接加宾语，不需要使用介词to。 2. 【答案】time改为times
【试题解析】本句中的time表示―次数‖，是一个可数名词，前面有several修饰，说明使用复数形式。 3. 【答案】understanding改为understand
【试题解析】本句中的it是一个形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式结构to understand why….；不定式结构中to后面要接动词原形。
4. 【答案】have改为has
【试题解析】本句的主语是单个的动名词短语the early morning barking，做主语时，谓语动词要使用单数形式。 5. 【答案】beside改为beside
【试题解析】介词beside以为―在…旁边‖；本句中的besides是一个副词―而且‖，单独使用，表示递进关系。 6. 【答案】bark后面的a改为an
【试题解析】名词average是以元音开始的单词，所以使用an修饰average of…。 7. 【答案】starts改为started
【试题解析】本句叙述的是具体早晨发生的事情，也就是过去所发生的事情，所以使用一般过去时started。 8. 【答案】closely改为close
【试题解析】本句how close the houses are中的close本应该是在系动词are的后面，构成系表结构are close。Closely是一个副词，副词通常不能和许系动词连用构成系表结构的。 9. 【答案】our改为your
【试题解析】句义：我们很欣赏你的歉意。根据后面的you可知对方是来道歉的。 10. 【答案】figure后面加out
【试题解析】固定搭配figure out找到，算出。我们希望你能够找到一个解决问题的好方法。
高考短文改错 16（14陕西）
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity! 1.【答案】wanted后面加to
【试题解析】固定搭配want to do sth想要做某事；to是不能省略的，不定式to do sth作为want的宾语。 2. 【答案】come改为came
【试题解析】根据本文第一句可知讲述的是过去发生的事情，所以使用一般过去时，所以使用came。 3. 【答案】have改为having
【试题解析】本句中动词have与句子主语we构成逻辑上的主动关系，所以使用现在分词在句中做状语。 4. 【答案】immediate改为immediately
【试题解析】本句中应该使用副词immeately来修饰谓语动词jumped，在句中做状语。形容词immediate不能做状语。 5. 【答案】on改为at
【试题解析】固定搭配shoot..at…不能使用介词on。At表示瞄准的对方或者方向。 6. 【答案】Neither改为none
【试题解析】代词neither表示两者都不…；而本句中没有提及两者，应该是有很多的鸟。故使用none表示三者或者三者以上的全部否定。
7. 【答案】was改为were
【试题解析】本句的主语是复数名词arrows，所以谓语动词使用复数形式were。 8 【答案】去掉were或者looked
【试题解析】本句是指箭如雨下，要么使用look like看起来像..；要么使用be like…像…一样。 9. 【答案】but改为and
【试题解析】我们四处逃跑，很幸运的是没有人受伤。根据上下文语境可知表示并列关系。 10. 【答案】a改为an
【试题解析】后面的形容词impressive是以元音开始的，所以使用an。
高考短文改错 17（14四川）
Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately. 1. 【答案】with改为about
【试题解析】固定搭配talk about something谈论关于某事。 2. 【答案】go改为goes
【试题解析】本句的主语a fire alarm为单数，谓语动词使用第三人称单数形式goes。 3. 【答案】wait后加for
【试题解析】此处wait为不及物动词，后接宾语时需加上介词for，构成wait for…等待…。 4. 【答案】classmate改为classmates
【试题解析】此处表达同班同学应为复数形式，因为同伴同学应该有多人，而不会只是一个。 5. 【答案】trying改为try
【试题解析】此处为祈使句，因为连词and连接的是两个同样性质的内容，前面是一个祈使句Don't panic or get out of line，后面也应该是一个祈使句。故使用try，而不是trying。 6. 【答案】calm改为calmly
【试题解析】此句remain为系动词，后接形容词作表语构成系表结构。 7. 【答案】a改为the
【试题解析】当文章中第二次提到前面的某一名词时，需使用the表示特指。 8. 【答案】us改为you
【试题解析】根据句子的主语your teacher可知你的老师会带你们回教室。 9. 【答案】去掉when
【试题解析】根据句意，如果你注意到有人失踪或受伤……，可知此处是that引导的宾语从句表陈述，故when多余。 10. 【答案】and改为or
【试题解析】根据句意―有人不见或者受伤‖可知Or表示的是选择的关系。
高考短文改错 18（14全国）
Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost! 1. 【答案】before改为ago
【试题解析】一段时间和before连用的时候常常和完成时连用。一段时间和age连用，常常和过去时连用。句义：大约5年前，在父亲的帮助下，妹妹和我种了一些圣女果。 2. 【答案】by改为of
【试题解析】考察固定搭配with the help of…在…的帮助下。 3. 【答案】year改为years
【试题解析】本句前面的形容词these常常修饰可数名词复数形式，所以使用名词years。 4. 【答案】had改为have
【试题解析】本句的时间状语是all these years，通常和现在完成进行时连用。所以使用have been doing的形式。 5. 【答案】As后面加a
【试题解析】考察固定搭配as a result结果是；句义：结果，圣女果长得到处都是。 6. 【答案】somewhere改为everywhere
【试题解析】根据上下文可知我们让圣女果自己繁殖，所以到处长得都是圣女果。 7. 【答案】taste改为tasty
【试题解析】本句中的形容词juicy和tasty都是形容词和前面的small一样都和系动词are构成系表结构。这些水果很小，但是多汁而且味道很好。
8. 【答案】much改为many
【试题解析】本句中的many指代可数名词cherry tomatoes的复数形式，所以不能使用much修饰。 9. 【答案】but改为yet或者去掉but
【试题解析】连词although不能和but连用，因为这两个词都是连词，不能一起连用。可以把but改为副词yet。 10. 【答案】wonderfully改为形容词wonderful
【试题解析】本句中使用形容词wonderful做定语来修饰后面的名词tomatoes。
高考短文改错 19（14浙江）
I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.
1.去掉had 本文叙述的是过去发生的一件事情，不需要使用过去完成时，因为过去完成时表示的是过去的过去的事情。句意：我注意到车厢里很吵闹都是人。
2.noise改为noisy 本句中应该使用形容词noisy和系动词was构成系表结构，修饰车里当时的情况。同时noisy与后面的形容词短语filled with…构成并列关系。
3.comes改为came 因为本文讲述的是过去发生的事情，所以使用一般过去时的时态。列车员过来检票。
4.but改为and 句意：一位乘客找不到自己的票，很难受。上下文之间是顺接关系，所以使用and。But表示上下文之间的转折关系。
5.searching后面加for 根据句意可知每个人都帮助他找票。固定搭配search for sth寻找sth；
6.his改为its/the 句意：这张票最终是在它的主人几排后面的座位下面被找到的。Its指代the ticket。 7.a改为the 使用定冠词the特指上文提及的同一事物，本文中特指前面提及的那张票。
8.previoes改为previously 本句中应该使用副词previously作状语，修饰谓语动词。形容词previous通常作为定语或者表语，不能做状语。
9.strangers改为stranger 句意：他们如此迅速地给与陌生人他们的帮助。本句中的陌生人就是指那张票的主人，是一个单数形式。
10.on改为in 固定搭配in need需要。句意：如果我们向那些需要帮助的人表示关心，这个世界就会变得更美好。
高考短文改错 20（15陕西）
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the
better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, ―I might have to retire again
next year just get some more of these biscuits.‖
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
【答案】 76.去掉in
77.anything 改为something 78.better改成best 79.decide改成decided 80.step 改为steps 81.well改成good 82.after改成when/while 83.a改为the 84.just后加to
85.enjoy改为enjoying
高考短文改错 21（15四川）
Hi, Janice,
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays
now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
【答案】 61.加上to 62. tell--told 63. friend--friends 64.sing--singing 65. many--much 66.so--but 67. How--What 68. are--were 69. him--them 70. 去掉with
高考短文改错 22（15浙江）
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students
exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it. 【答案】
side-sides from-to sit-sitting easy-easily is-was them-it not 删除 in hurry- in a hurry felt-feel
If-Although/Though
高考短文改错 23（15全国）
One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,―How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ‖ Tony promised her that this would never happen again. 【答案】
71. parent改为parents 72. on改为in 73. very去掉 74. looks改为looking
75. where改为that 或者去掉 where 76. begun改为began 77. telling改为told 78. a改为the 79. saw后加his 80. terrible改为terribly
高考短文改错 24（15全国）
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it . 【答案】 76. think –thought 77. countryside前加the 78. or—and 79. on—with 80. been去掉 81. seriously—serious 82. airs—air 83. much—many 84. found—find 85. your—our
【解析】1
【答案】【小题1】but→and 【小题2】otherwise→however 【小题3】after→before 【小题4】the→a
【小题5】mushroom-mushrooms 【小题6】bring→brought 【小题7】she→he
【小题8】 something→anything 【小题9】unusual→usual 【小题10】show→showing 【解析】2
【答案】【小题1】graduate改为graduated 【小题2】on改为in 【小题3】time后面加to 【小题4】去掉the 【小题5】Well改为good
【小题6】Remember改为remembering 【小题7】They改为we 【小题8】Which改为that 【小题9】Calls改为called 【小题10】Card改为cards 【解析】3
【答案】【小题1】while改为when 【小题2】heavy改为heavily 【小题3】and改为or 【小题4】see改为saw 【小题5】must后加have 【小题6】and后加got / was
【小题7】which改为where 或前加in 【小题8】in—at 【小题9】an 【小题10】go—went 【解析】4
【答案】【小题1】child前加a 【小题2】but-and 【小题3】from-for
【小题4】differently-different. 【小题5】it去掉 【小题6】such-so 【小题7】itself-myself 【小题8】see-saw 【小题9】whom-who 【小题10】happy-happiness 【解析】5
【答案】【小题1】how- what; 【小题2】去掉a plenty of 中的a; 【小题3】comes-came; 【小题4】said-saying; 【小题5】they-we; 【小题6】such-so;
【小题7】obvious-obviously;
【小题8】pay attention 后加to; 【小题9】works-work; 【小题10】but-and 【解析】6
【答案】【小题1】Real改为really 【小题2】Weekend改为weekends 【小题3】Had改为have 【小题4】去掉a 【小题5】but改为and 【小题6】Beside改为Besides 【小题7】Interested改为interesting 【小题8】Say前面加to 【小题9】Speaking改为spoken 【小题10】See改为seeing 【解析】7
【答案】【小题1】come---came 【小题2】he—him 【小题3】in---on 【小题4】many-much 【小题5】fun—funny 【小题6】too—so/very/quite 【小题7】animal—animals 【小题8】the----a 【小题9】tiring—tired 【小题10】but---\\ 【解析】8
【答案】【小题1】the need 【小题2】 althoughàbecause 【小题3】lesson àlessons 【小题4】takeàspend 【小题5】 Ourà We 【小题6】 that àwhat 【小题7】haveàbe 【小题8】 manyà much 【小题9】 we∧often: are 【小题10】go ∧university: to 【解析】9
【答案】【小题1】got a good →去掉a 【小题2】win→won 【小题3】pleasing→pleased 【小题4】staying→stay 【小题5】place→places 【小题6】written→writing 【小题7】talk→talking 【小题8】at→on 【小题9】you →we 【小题10】go out∧ do→to 【解析】10
【答案】【小题1】invited后面加to 【小题2】surprising改成 surprised 【小题3】month改成 months