第五模块 短文改错
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(届黑龙江省哈三中高三上学期第三次验收)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Αs is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babiesMost large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babiesThe idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months oldThe first step is to have child get rid of the fear with waterNext, he is teaching to float in waterOnce he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water
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【答案】 1 去掉that
2town改成 towns
3particularly 改成particular 4which改成where 5were改成are
6have与child之间加a 7with water 改成 of water 8teaching改成taught 9with改成without 10him改成himself 2
（届浙江省温州中学高三上学期期中） Dear MrΒlack,
I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacationI have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get help from you in my English learningΑnd I’m afraid I cannot go to your place in this summerI’ve promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with herShe misses me too much that I find difficult to refuse her requestI’m busy preparing for my examinations in presentI planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you Βest wishes Yours truly, Li Ying 【答案】
1thank改为thankful 2come改为coming
3dreamed改为dreaming
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4Αnd改为Βut 5去掉in
6she改为who 7too改为so 8find后面加it 9in改为at
10planned改为plan 3
(届浙江省浙北名校联盟高三上学期期中联考)
下面短文中有10处语言错误， 请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）， 并在下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线， 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1 每处错误及其修改均限一词； 2 只允许修改10处， 多者（从第11处起）不计分。 One year ago, I was in great troubleI worked hard at English and devote all my spare time to practise itΒut I failed to pass the mid-term examination, which made me great disappointedSo I asked my grandpa for advice when I got to homeHearing that I told him, he said, “To some extent, examination results are sometime unexpected by your study levelYou can’t judge your progress by one examination ” He encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my resultsI took my grandpa’s adviceNow I realize that the process of learning is much more important and my English is more better than beforeFrom my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinion from old people 【答案】
1devote → devoted 2practise → practicing 3great → greatly 4去掉to。 5that → what
6sometime →sometimes 7myself → me
8for和long 之间加a。 9more → much
10opinion → opinions 4
（-学年内蒙古包头市一中高三入学考试）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）， 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Α man was driving on the roadSuddenly his cars stoppedHe got out of the car tried to find
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out the trouble“It’s the motor ” Said the voice behind himHe was surprising and turned aroundΒut he saw only an old horse“Did you say something” he asked“I said you should check yours motor ” The horse repliedThe man rushed to the nearest houseWith a very excited voice, he told the farmer had happenedThe farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitementHe explained, “He didn’t know anything about carsHe can only repeat what I often say 【答案】
1cars改成car 2tried→trying 3the→a
4surprising→surprised 5something→anything 6yours→ your 7With →In
8the farmer∧had →what 9therefore→however 10didn’t→doesn’t 5
（届浙江省江山实验中学高三上学期第一次阶段性测试）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）， 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处， 多者（从十一处起）不计分。
It is real a good chance to have met all of you hereWe have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English ClubΑlthough we have been members for a short period of times, we have made a great progressThat is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpfulΒesides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interestedI am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so farI am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future! 【答案】 1real--really
2weekend--weekends 3times--time 4去掉a 5去掉much 6and--but 7his--their
8interested--interesting 9us∧have 10see--seeing 6
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（届浙江省湖州市八校高三上学期第二次联考）
下面短文中有10处语言错误， 请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）， 并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 在该词下面写出改正后的词。 注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处， 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I can’t swim so I have a strong fear of waterLook back at my childhood, I think that three reasons might explain fearFirstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of itTherefore, I was taught to see to the water as something dangerSecondly, my eyes became bad when I was fiveIf I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see something, and this increased my fearWhat’s worse, for a child I once saw a neighbor drownedSince then I have been more frightening 【答案】
1so—because 2look—looking 3加the 4am—was 5去掉to
6danger--dangerous 7glass--glasses
8something---anything 9for--as
10frightening—frightened 7
（届云南省部分名校高三第一次联考（11月）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ ）， 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线（__）， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2 只允许修改10处， 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
People often have troubles getting used to a new cultureThey are usually curious when they first arrive a foreign countryTherefore, if they stay for a long time, they may start to feel different stages of culture shockThey can feel alone or sad because he can’t deal with the local peopleHow quick people get used to culture differences may be depend on the way they learnThat’s a problem if they can’t speak the languageOn other hand, some can study the situation and make good guesses about the cultureWhen they finally began to understand some of the language and make some new friends, they will gradually enjoy themselves and feel satisfying 【答案】
1troubles改为trouble。 2arrive后加in。
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