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In this analysis we will examine three pie
charts. The first one is headed ?World Spending.? The second is ?World Population? and the third is ?Consumption of Resources.?
In the first chart we can see that people spend most of their income (24%) on food. In some countries this percentage would obviously be much higher. Transport and then housing are the next major expenses at 18% and 12% respectively. Only 6% of income is spent on clothing.
In the second chart entitled ?World Population?,
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it is not surprising to find that 57% of people live in Asia. In fact China and India are two of the most populated countries in the world and they are both situated on this continent. Europe and the Americans account for nearly 30% of the total, whilst 10% of people live in Africa.
Finally, the third chart reveals that the USA and Europe consume a huge 60% of the world?s resource. To sum up, the major expenditure is on food, the population figures are the highest for Asia and the major consumers are the USA and Europe. (182 words)
参看考官范文，研习遣词造句
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The two graphs show that oil was the major energy source in the USA in both 1980 and 1990 and that coal, natural gas and hydroelectric power remained in much the same proportions. On the other hand, there was a dramatic rise in nuclear power, which doubled its percentage over the ten years.
Oil supplied the largest percentage of energy, although the percentage decreased from 42% in 1980 to 33% in 1990. Coal in 1990 was the second largest source of energy, increasing its proportion to 27% from 22% in the previous decade. Natural gas, the second largest source in 1980 at 26%, decreased its share very slightly to provide 25% of America?s energy ten years later. There was no change in the percentage supplied by hydroelectric power which remained at 5% of the total energy used. Nuclear power the greatest change: in 1990 it was 10%, twice that of the 1980s. (152 words)
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1．曲线图和柱状图都是动态图，解题的切入点在于描述趋势。
2．在第二段的开头部分对整个曲线进行一个阶段式的总分类，使写作层次清晰，同时也方便考官阅卷。接下来再分类描述每个阶段的specific trend，同时导入数据作为分类的依据。
3．趋势说明。即，对曲线的连续变化进行说明，如上升、下降、波动、持平。以时间为比较基础的应抓住“变化”：上升、下降、或是波动。题中对两个或两个以上的变量进行描述时应在此基础上进行比较，如变量多于两个应进行分类或有侧重的比较。
4．极点说明。即对图表中最高的、最低的点单独进行说明。不以时间为比较基础的应注意对极点的描述。
5．交点说明。即对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明。
6．不要不做任何说明就机械地导入数据，这不符合雅思的考试目的。 动词—九大运动趋势 1.表示向上：increase，rise，improve，grow，ascend，mount，aggrandize，go up，climb， take off， jump，shoot up暴涨，soar， skyrocket
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2.表示上升后保持平稳：flatten out(下降或升高后变平)， level off
举例：人口上升后保持平稳：the number of population mounted and leveled off. 3.表示复苏（下降后再上升）：recover，bounce back
举例：人口下降后复苏：the number of population decreased and recovered. 4.表示下降：decrease，decline，descend，drop， fall，go down，come down，collapse， crash， fall off， slump， plummet， plunge， slide，shrink, dwindle, diminish
5.表示下降后保持平稳：bottom out，flatten out(下降或升高后变平)
举例：人口下降后保持平稳：the number of population decreased and bottomed out.
6.表示稳定或水平：remain steady/constant，stay stable, stabilize，flatten out(下降或升高后变平)， level off， stay at the same level， be similar to， there is little／hardly any／no change
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