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consumption in some areas of the world by contrasting the amount of irrigated land in Brazil (26,500 km3) with that in the D.R.C. (100 km2). This means that a huge amount of water is used in agriculture in Brazil, and this is reflected in the figures for water consumption per person: 359 m3 compared with only 8 m3 in the Congo. With a population of 176 million, the figures for Brazil indicate how high agriculture water consumption can be in some countries. (180 words)
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The three graphs of wheat exports each show a quite different pattern between 1985 and 1990. Exports from Australia declined over the five-year period, while the Canadian market fluctuated considerably, and the European Community showed an increase.
In 1985, Australia exported about 15 millions of tonnes of wheat and the following year the number increased by one million tonnes to 16 million. After that, however, there was a gradual decline until 1989 and
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1990 when it stabilised at about 11 million tonnes. Over the same period, the amount of Canadian exports varied greatly. It started at 19 million tonnes in 1985, reached a peak in 1988 of 24 million, dropped dramatically in 1989 to 14 million tonnes and then climbed back to 19 million in 1990. Seventeen million tonnes were exported from the European Community in 1985, but this decreased to 14 million tonnes in 1986 and then rose to 15 million in 1987 and 1988 before increasing once more to 20 million in 1990. (165 words)
第三篇 流程图 写作要点： 1流程图基本不会出现数据，文字信息占主要地位； 2流程图以描述为主，比较的机会比图表题少； 3流程图中出现的信息都需要描述，而普通图表则不需要描述每一个数据；
4流程图的时态多比较单一，主要用一般现在时； 5流程图的分段比较灵活，只要不同阶段之间的差距很明显，就可以另起一段。 描述流程五大步： 1首先说明该过程是做什么工作的，目的是什么。
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2准备工作。
3按时间／过程先后描述。 4对比。
5简单总结(可有可无)。 阶段间进行比较： 例1：In two weeks，the fry will grow up to two inches long． 解析：原句过于简单，可以增加鱼苗和前一阶段的比较。
改正：In two weeks, the fry will grow up to two inches long, more than twice longer than it was when hatched．在两周时间内，鱼苗长到了两英寸，比刚孵化时长两倍还要多。
例2：In the second step，workers will rinse bottle glass of any colour．
解析：原句过于简单，可以增加一点说明，譬如说关于第二阶段产生的变化和结果。
改正：In the second step，workers will rinse bottle glass of any colour．While the glass in the first phase is possibly life-threatening and contaminated，the glass is now hygeian and ready
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for the next stage of the recycling process．大意：在第二步，工作人员会清洗各种颜色的玻璃。第一阶段的玻璃可能是危害健康并被污染的，而这一阶段的玻璃是卫生的，可以为循环过程的下一步做准备。
例3：In the second phase of urban sprawl，land developers start to build a residential area．解析：原句过于简单，可以增加一点说明，譬如说关于第二阶段的功能和目的。 改正： In the second phase of urban sprawl，land developers start to build a residential area．It is to serve the needs of those people working in those office blocks and factories built in the first phase．大意：在城市扩张的第二阶段，土地开发商开始建造居民区。这是为了满足在第一阶段所建办公楼和工厂里工作的人们的需要。
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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the
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