One possible version: A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday. Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qinhuai River when a little boy went to play nearby. Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help. He looked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water. It was very dangerous. Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river. At that time other people came to offer help. Finally, the boy was saved and he was very grateful. People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful. We should learn from him. 书面表达评分标准：
第五档：（13-15分）能写明全部要点，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，行文流畅，表达清楚；
第四档：（10-12分）能写明大部分要点，语言有一些错误，但行文基本流畅，表达基本清楚；
第三档：（7-9分）能写明一些要点，语言错误较多，但意思基本连贯，表达基本清楚；
第二档：（4-6分）能写明少数要点，语言错误多，意思不连贯，影响意思表达； 第一档：（1-3分）只能写出若干单词，无可读的句子。
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