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I think the picture is reminding us that it is important to consider possible results before making a decision.
As is shown in the picture, the man is trying to cut off a branch. However, he ignores the fact that he himself is sitting on the branch. Once he makes it, he is sure to fall off together with the branch and get hurt. If the man took this into consideration, he would easily find a solution, for example, using a ladder as an aid. Thus he wouldn't risk the danger at all. The devil is in the detail. Similarly, we often need to take a closer and more comprehensive look at what we are doing. If we keep that in mind, we are more likely to stay away from dangers and achieve our goals.
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