第五部分 写作 专题一 短文改错
Ⅰ.体验高考
(2014·浙江卷)I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in. 答案
I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I was
and filled with people.
to check our tickets.A passenger realized
noticed that the carriage
Before long，a train inspector he couldn't find his ticket began searching rows from
became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage
the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several owner.The person who found
ticket smiled with
pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had
spoken to or even noticed the
their help.If we
ticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the
could show concern to others in. Ⅱ.仿真、模拟
need，the world would be a better place to live
Passage 1
What Does a Credit Card Bring Us is written by Eillton Henley.It's a brief or excellent article about credit cards.The author explains what credit cards work.And he also points out the positive and negative aspect for having it.American consumers are mostly likely to use credit cards.However，the use of credit cards are expanding into almost every country in world.The key point making by the author is that users should pay for the amount in full when a bill is sent from the credit card company.This protected all the advantages and avoids all the disadvantages of using credit cards. 答案
What Does a Credit Card Bring Us is written by Eillton Henley.It's a brief
excellent article about credit cards.The author explains
cards work.And he also points out the positive and negative
.American consumers are use of credit cards key point
credit for having
likely to use credit cards.However，the
world.The
expanding into almost every country in
by the author is that users should pay the amount in full
all the
when a bill is sent from the credit card company.This advantages and avoids all the disadvantages of using credit cards.
Passage 2
After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning，I phoned to my classmate and told him to go to see a film in the afternoon.Before the film was over，we returned to school to do our lessons.While we are having a rest in the corridor，I saw Mr Liu，my China teacher.He told me that we had made some progresses in English，but my
Chinese lagged behind，especially my Chinese composition.He suggested I should read more and keeping a diary every day.In the evening my father told me that
reading newspapers would do me well for improving composition writing.That was really good idea! What they said was quite right，and I should follow their advice. 答案
After “English TV” last Sunday morning，I phoned my the
classmate and told him to go to see a film in the afternoon. film was over，we returned to school to do our lessons.While we rest in the corridor，I saw Mr Liu，my made some
having a
teacher.He told me that we had I
in English，but my Chinese lagged behind，especially my
Chinese composition.He suggested I should read more and a diary every
day.In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me for improving composition writing.That was really was quite right，and I should follow their advice.
Passage 3
good idea! What they said
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two week ago.I have been thinking about a question you asked me.In my opinion，you should come back after finish your studies abroad.For one reason，that you are studying is bad needed nowadays in our country.It will be quite easy for you find a good job.In fact，I knew a few big companies in our city hope to hire people like you.For another one reason，I think it will be more convenient for you to look after your parents but they are getting old.But this is only my point of view.It is up for you to make a right choice.
答案
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two been thinking about
ago.I have
question you asked me.In my opinion，you should
come back after your studies abroad.For one reason， you are
studying is needed nowadays in our country.It will be quite easy for you
a few big companies in our city hope to hire reason，I think it will be more convenient for they are getting old.But this is only my point of
find a good job.In fact，I people like you.For another you to look after your parents view.It is up
you to make a right choice.
Passage 4
This morning I found red wallet on the campus.Girls usual like red，so I believed the wallet was belonged to a girl student.I opened it，try to find out whose it was.Therefore，I found nothing but 300 yuan in it.I was wondering what to do with it while suddenly my classmates Chen Yang passed by.She suggested she put up a Lost and Found notice and I did so.I wrote down my telephone number and ask the owner to call me after she saw it.Later，a girl came to claim it on 3 o'clock this afternoon. 答案
This morning I found I believed the wallet
red wallet on the campus.Girls belonged to a girl student.I opened it，
like red，so
to find
out whose it was. what to do with it
，I found nothing but 300 yuan in it.I was wondering suddenly my
Chen Yang passed by.She
suggested put up a Lost and Found notice and I did so.I wrote down my
the owner to call me after she saw it.Later，a girl
telephone number and came to claim it
3 o'clock this afternoon.
Passage 5
Last Saturday，our school had organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit the children at a local orphanage.We took many books that was popular among children，as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys，to children.They were delighted to receive these gift.We played some games together and give performances.Before leave the orphanage we took photos with them and gave them our contact details but we could keep in touch with one another.
That day，each one of us had an enjoyable time.We gave the children their care and help；for return，they gave us their smiles and love.These voluntary activities made a deeply impression on us. 答案
Last Saturday，our school
organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit
popular among children.They
the children at a local orphanage.We took many books that children，as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys，to
were delighted to receive these performances.Before them our contact details
.We played some games together and
the orphanage we took photos with them and gave we could keep in touch with one another.
That day，each one of us had an enjoyable time.We gave the children care and help；
return，they gave us their smiles and love.These voluntary
activities made a impression on us.
Passage 6
I as well as my family are going to New York City this weekend.I had been looking forward to go there for a long time.It is one of the modernest city in the world.
There have also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can't learn it in school.I'd also like to see the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building. Unfortunately，the twin towers destroyed on September 11th,2001 and I would have the chance to see them by myself.Now I am getting ready for the excited trip.I bet it will be a unforgettable experience. 答案
I as well as my family looking forward to in the world. There learn
also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can't
going to New York City this weekend.I there for a long time.It is one of the modernest
been
in school.I'd also like to see the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State
Building.
Unfortunately，the twin towers
destroyed on September 11th，2001
I would have the chance to see them by myself.Now I am getting ready for the
trip.I bet it will be
unforgettable experience.