【其他成分】But if robots are to reach the next stage of laborsaving utility状语;with less human supervision状语;at least状语;goals that pose a real challenge整个句子的同位语。 【微观解析】同位语goals 被定语从句修饰;
【难点揭秘】动词的并列,状语的隔离;同位语的识别需要关注。
【译文赏析】但是如果机器人能在下一个阶段达到节省人工的运用,它们将必须在更少的人力监督之下工作,而且还要至少能够自己做出几个决定--这些目标才会带来真的挑战。
【翻译点拨】对于the next stage of laborsaving utility的处理,如果直译就是:如果机器人要达到节省人工的运用的下一个阶段在,这样的表达不仅拗口而且难懂,就是典型的死译,所以把定语转译为状语。 15. But the human mind can glimpse a rapidly changing scene and immediately disregard the 98 percent that is irrelevant, instantaneously focusing on the monkey at the side of a winding forest road or the single suspicious face in a big crowd.
【词汇突破】glimpse 快速的看一眼; disregard 抛弃,丢弃 irrelevant 不相干 instantaneously 立即 winding 蜿蜒曲折的 suspicious 可疑的
【主干识别】the human mind can glimpse a rapidly changing scene and immediately disregard the 98 percent并列的两个动词glimpse和disregard
【其他成分】that is irrelevant 修饰 the 98percent; focusing on the monkey at the side of a winding forest road or the single suspicious face in a big crowd. 现在分词短语作状语,focus 的动作发出者就是句子主语human mind。 【微观解析】the monkey or the single suspicious face 为focus on 的并列宾语 【难点揭秘】动词的并列在主句中出现;而在现在分词短语中出现并列宾语;
【译文赏析】但是人类的大脑可以只迅速地瞟一眼一个快速改变的场面,然后立刻放弃98%的不相关信息,而马上聚焦于一条崎岖森林道路边的一只猴子,或者在茫茫人海中的一张可疑的脸。
16.A comparison of British geological publications over the last century and a half reveals not simply an increasing emphasis on the primacy of research, but also a changing definition of what constitutes an acceptable research paper.,
【词汇突破】reveal 揭露 constitutes 包含
primacy 重要性,首要地位
【主干识别】A comparison reveals not?but also ?主谓宾结构 【其他成分】of British geological publications定语修饰comparison, over the last century and a half定语修饰publications,an increasing emphasis on the primacy of research宾语,a changing definition of what constitutes an acceptable research paper并列宾语 【微观解析】an increasing emphasis on the primacy of research其中on the primacy of research修饰emphasis; research修饰definition ; what 引导一个宾语从句作of 的宾语,what为宾语从句中的主语。
【难点揭秘】出现并列的宾语并且在宾语中的定语又出现一个宾语从句,这样就增加了句子的复杂性,并且在句中出现了好几个动态名词。
【译文赏析】将过去一个半世纪英国地质学领域的出版物做一下比较,(我们)就会发现不仅对科研的主导地位的强调不断攀升,而且一篇可接受的科研论文所包含的内容的定义也有所变化。
【翻译点拨】在这个句中有两个动态名词一个是comparison,还有一个为emphasis,其中还有一个动态形容词changing;在翻译的处理上都翻译为动词,并增加概说的主语“我们”。
17. I believe that the most important forces behind the massive M&A wave are the same that underlie the globalization process: falling transportation and communication costs, lower trade and investment barriers and
enlarged markets that require enlarged operations capable of meeting customers demands.
【词汇突破】M&A 为mergers and acquisitions 的缩写表示合并和兼并的意思为经济术语。 underlie 构成?的基础;导致?发生。例如:The social problems underlying these crises remain unsolved.(引起这些危机的社会问题尚未解决。) trade and investment barriers 贸易和投资壁垒 globalization process 全球化进程(可以作为写作词汇使用) 【主干识别】I believe that+宾语从句
【其他成分】the most important forces behind the massive M&A wave are the same 为宾语从句主干;that underlie the globalization process为定语从句;“:”后为对forces的解释;
【微观解析】三种力量的并列为falling transportation and communication costs,以及lower trade and investment barriers 和 enlarged markets后面接一个定语从句 that require enlarged operations和后置定语形容词短语:capable of meeting customers demands
【难点揭秘】并列的三种力量,由于修饰语比较长和并列连词较多使其解析较难;
【译文赏析】我认为巨大的并购浪潮背后的最重要的推动力和促进全球化进程的力量是一样的:即降低交通运输成本,逐渐减少贸易投资壁垒,以及为能满足消费者需求而大幅度拓展得市场。
18. It is entirely reasonable for auditors to believe that scientists who know exactly where they are going and how they will get there should not be distracted by the necessity of keeping one eye on the cash register while the other eye is on the microscope. 【词汇突破】auditors 审计人员 distract 分散注意力
【主干识别】It is entirely reasonable to believe that +宾语从句. 形式主语从句
【其他成分】for auditors 状语;scientists who know exactly where they are going and how they will get there should not be distracted by the necessity of keeping one eye on the cash register while the other eye is on the microscope.宾语从句。
【微观解析】scientists should not be distracted 宾语从句主干;who know exactly where they are going and how they will get there 定语从句修饰scientist;where they are going and how they will get there定语从句中know的宾语从句;by the necessity of keeping one eye on the cash register while the other eye is on the microscope.状语;of keeping one eye on the cash register修饰the necessity 作定语。while the other eye is on the microscope状语修饰keeping。
【难点揭秘】主语从句中出现定语从句,定语从句中出现并列的宾语这样隔离的障碍就更为显著了。 【译文赏析】审查者完全有理由相信,知道自己准备做什么、怎么做的科学家不应该因为必须一只眼盯着收银机,另一只眼盯着显微镜而分散了注意力。
【翻译点拨】by短语在句子中是充当状语,翻译为原因,where they are going and how they will get there处理为知道做什么,知道怎么做,这样的表达符合中文的习惯。如果直接翻译为:知道他们要去哪里和怎么去,就是对于字面含义的翻译。属于死译。
19. Instead, we are treated to fine hypocritical spectacles, which now more than ever seem in ample supply: the critic of American materialism with a Southampton summer home; the publisher of radical books who takes his meals in three-star restaurants; the journalist advocating participatory democracy in all phases of life, whose own children are enrolled in private schools. 【词汇突破】hypocritical 虚伪的; spectacles 景象 ample 充足的
radical 激进的,根本的
journalist 记者,新闻工作者 advocate 支持
participatory democracy 参与制民主 enrolled in 注册入学,入伍
【主干识别】we are treated to fine hypocritical spectacles 主谓结构的被动态
【其他成分】 which now more than ever seem in ample supply 定语从句修饰spectacles;“:”之后列出三种虚伪的景象的代表人物,举例说明。
【微观解析】定语从句还原为一个完整的句子:The spectacles now more than ever seem in ample supply.其主干为:The spectacles seem in ample supply;now more than ever为状语。代表人物一 the critic of American materialism(美国物质主义的批评者) with a Southampton summer home;(其拥有南安普顿的避暑山庄);代表人物二 the publisher of radical books(激进书刊的出版者)who takes his meals in three-star restaurants,定语从句讲他们却在三星级酒店就餐(因为激进主义者往往是最求生活极简的);代表人物三 the journalist advocating participatory democracy in all phases of life(支持在人生的各个阶段推崇参与制民主的记者)whose own children are enrolled in private schools定语从句讲他们自己的孩子却在私立学校上学(私立学校的教育是精英制的,而参与制民主是需要和大众贴近的)。
【难点揭秘】冒号后并列的三个部分就是三个名词后面接上比较长的定语修饰,这样就造成了阅读的困难;
【译文赏析】相反,我们看到了这些非常虚伪的景象,他们似乎比以前的任何时候都更多见:批判美国式物质主义的人却拥有位于南安普顿的避暑山庄:激进书籍的出版商却在三星级餐厅享用一日三餐;倡导在人生各个阶段实施参与式民主的记者,他的子女却就读于私立学校。
【翻译点拨】we are treated to fine hypocritical spectacles如果直接翻译那就是:我们被招待了很好的虚伪景象;这样的说法并不符合中文的习惯,中文是多主动,英语多被动,因此句子转译为:我们看到了这些非常虚伪的景象fine 处理为非常。
20.But it is a little upsetting to read in the explanatory notes that a certain line describes a fight between a Turkish and a Bulgarian officer on a bridge off which they both fall into the river—and then to find that the line consists of the noise of their falling and the weights of the officers, \Pluff! A hundred and eighty-five kilograms.\
【词汇突破】explanatory 解释性的 upsetting 不安 consists of 包含
【主干识别】 it is a little upsetting to read that+宾语从句and then to find that+宾语从句;形式主语句,句子主语为 to read and to find.在主语中带有两个动词不定式中的宾语从句;
【其他成分】 in the explanatory notes 状语;a certain line describes a fight between a Turkish and a Bulgarian officer on a bridge宾语从句主干;off which they both fall into the river起连接句子作用的定语从句;the line consists of the noise of their falling and the weights of the officers宾语从句主干;\eighty-five kilograms.\是Line的同位语。
【微观解析】off which they both fall into the river还原为一个句子就是:they both fall into the river off the bridge. 【难点揭秘】主语是两个并列的成分识别并列主语是一大难点;
【译文赏析】但当我们先是从解释性注释中得知某诗行讲述了一个土耳其军官和一个保加利亚军官在桥上格斗并双双掉进河里,而后又发现该行诗中只充斥着\扑通,扑通,185公斤重\这类对他们落水时的声音以及对军官们体重的描写时,我们不免感到困惑不安。
【翻译点拨】先把两个比较长的主语单独译成两个句子,再翻译剩下的部分,打破英语中的句子限定,单独成句是很重要的翻译技巧,简单讲就是哪个部分太长就尽量的单独翻译。
21. The examples of Virtual Vineyards, Amazon.com, and other pioneers show that a Web site selling the right kind of products with the right mix of interactivity, hospitality, and security will attract online customers. 【词汇突破】interactivity 互动性 hospitality 友好性
security 安全性
【主干识别】The examples show that?+宾语从句;主谓宾结构
【其他成分】of Virtual Vineyards, Amazon.com, and other pioneers作example的同位语;我们把其看作为:A of B 的结构,A为上义词,B 为下义词,这样在翻译的处理中我们不需要生硬的翻译为“??的例子”;a Web site selling the right kind of products with the right mix of interactivity, hospitality, and security will attract online customers.宾语从句
【微观解析】 selling the right kind of products with the right mix of interactivity, hospitality, and security现在分词短语修饰a web site; 宾语从句主干为:a Web site will attract online customers.
【难点揭秘】由于出现并列使得主语和谓语之间出现了较长的修饰,产生隔离,在宾语从句的后置定语中也出现并列产生隔离,这样了产生了隔离。
【译文赏析】像Virtual Vineyards,Amazon.com这样的先驱网站表明,一个将交互性、服务性和安全性合理结合,且销售正确产品的网站是可以吸引来网上客户的。 【翻译点拨】宾语从句单独成句; 在翻译example of?的时候翻译为“像??”。
22.They gather all the data they can, not just performance statistics and biographical details but also the results of their own laboratory experiments with high achievers. 【词汇突破】statistics 数据
写作过程中可以使用固定词组:statistics and details achievers获得成功的人
【主干识别】They gather all the data. 主谓宾结构。
【其他成分】they can 的完整表达为:that they can gather ; 出于简洁的考虑省掉了that 和gather;not just performance statistics and biographical details but also the results of their own laboratory experiments with high achievers整个部分是data 的同位语。 【微观解析】同位语中第一部分是performance statistics and biographical details;第二个部分为the results of their own laboratory experiments with high achievers,其中with high achievers为定语修饰experiments. 【难点揭秘】同位语部分出现并列现象造成比较冗长产生阅读难点。
【译文赏析】他们尽其所能收集了一切数据,这些数据不仅包括表现数据和传记式资料,而且也包括了那些取得了表现优异者在实验室实验中的实验结果。 补充一些心理学术语:
biographical characteristics 传记特点biographical data 传记式资料biographical inventory 传记式量表Biographical Inventory for R & T Talent 科研人才甄选传记式量表biographical inventory tests 传记式问卷测验biographical method 传记法biographical study 传记研究biographical?type case study 传记式个案研究23.During the discussion of rock singing verses at last month’s stockholders meeting, Levin asserted that \’s ills \who uses rap to communicate with students. 【词汇突破】verse 歌词,诗句 stockholder 股东
assert 声称,认为,宣称 social ill 社会问题
【主干识别】Levin asserted that +宾语从句and even cited his son. 主谓宾结构
【其他成分】During the discussion of rock singing verses at last month’s stockholders meeting状语;music is not the cause of society’s ills 宾语从句主系表结构;a teacher in the Bronx, New York同位语;who uses rap to communicate with students.定语从句修饰a teacher。 【难点揭秘】并列的动词和同位语构成一定的阅读难点
【译文赏析】在上个月的股东大会上关于摇滚歌词的讨论中,莱文宣称说:\音乐不是社会问题的原因\,他甚至还以他的儿子为例。他的儿子是纽约州布朗克斯的一个教师,他儿子正在用说唱音乐与学生们进行沟通。
【翻译点拨】将同位语单独翻译为一个句子是在翻译中的常用手法。
24. Although it ruled that there is no constitutional right to physician-assisted suicide, the Court in effect supported the medical principle of \two effects—a good one that is intended and a harmful one that is foreseen—is permissible if the actor intends only the good effect.
【词汇突破】constitutional 宪法的
physician-assisted suicide 医生帮助下的自杀 permissible 可以被允许的
【主干识别】the Court supported the medical principle of \主谓宾结构
【其他成分】Although it ruled that there is no constitutional right to physician-assisted suicide状语从句;in effect作状语;a centuries-old moral principle holding that an action having two effects—a good one that is intended and a harmful one that is foreseen—is permissible if the actor intends only the good effect整个都是the medical principle of \的同位语。
【微观解析】a centuries-old moral principle其后被 holding that an action having two effects—a good one that is intended and a harmful one that is foreseen--is permissible if the actor intends only the good effect. 所修饰。holding that +宾语从句,其中主干为:an action is permissible;having two effects修饰 an action;a good one and a harmful one为two effects的同位语,被that is intended和that is foreseen两个定语从句所修饰;if the actor intends only the good effect为宾语从句的状语。
【难点揭秘】这个句子的复杂就在于同位语的复杂,同位语中有现在分词短语带上宾语从句,在宾语从句中又出现同位语,同位语中又出现定语从句。这样的句子虽然复杂但是还是从最简单的结构一步步搭建出来的。the Court supported the medical principle of \解释什么叫double effect;“holding that+宾语从句”修饰 double effect;an action having two effects is permissible为宾语从句的主干;a good one that is intended and a harmful one that is foreseen 解释什么是two effects;if the actor intends only the good effect 为状语从句。
【译文赏析】尽管最高法院已经裁定出医生帮助下的自杀行为并不受宪法的支持,但最高法院实际上支持了被称为\双重效果\的医疗原则;这个已有几个世纪历史的道德原则认为一个行为可能会有两个效果——— 一个想要达到的好的效果和一个已经预见到的有害的效果。如果行为的实施者想要的只是要好的效果的话,这个行为是被允许的 【翻译点拨】对于同位语的处理我们还是采取了惯用的单独成句的方法,也用到了破折号解释的方法。
25.The overall result has been to make entrance to professional geological journals harder for amateurs, a result that has been reinforced by the widespread introduction of refereeing, first by national journals in the 19th century and then by several local geological journals in the 20th century. 【词汇突破】reinforced 加强
introduction 引入和制定 refereeing 推荐制度 journal 期刊
【主干识别】The overall result has been to make entrance harder.主谓宾宾补的结构;entrance to professional geological journals宾语, harder for amateurs 宾补.
【其他成分】to professional geological journals定语修饰entrance;for amateurs状语;a result that has been reinforced by the widespread introduction of refereeing, first by national journals in the 19th century and then by several local geological journals in the 20th century作主语result的同位语。
【微观解析】that has been reinforced by the widespread introduction of refereeing 定语从句修饰a result, by the widespread introduction of refereeing ,为状语by national journals in the 19th century and then by several local geological journals in the 20th century 为定语修饰introduction; 【难点揭秘】同位语后面定语从句中状语by和后面定语by的区别。