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MBA作文讲义
考试流程
Section Ⅰ Use of English (20题)10points (20题)40points Section Ⅱ Reading Comprehension (5题)10points Section Ⅲ Section Ⅳ Translation Writing 15points 10+15=25points 30mins 15+35mins 80mins 20mins
2010—2014年作文回顾
写作 25%分数
小作文 2010—2014年 99%信件 10分/15mins
2010 感谢信 ［邀请］中美文化项目刚回国 ①感谢 ②邀请来中国玩 2011 恭喜信 ［建议］表弟考上大学 ①恭喜 ②给些建议
2012 投诉信 ［解决方案］电子词典坏了 ①投诉 ②给出解决方案 2013 邀请信 我们班举行一个慈善义卖 ①邀请
2014 询问信 出国与室友居住 ①你的生活习惯 ②给出建议
大作文 议论文 15分/35mins (??数据图表 连续5年 硬币原理 看图说话/坏现象) 提出问题／分析问题／总结
作文注意：
一个中心，两个基本点（以阅卷老师为中心；风险最小化，得分最大化） 卷面：字数 +20（恰当字数）小 100+20 大150+20 段落3段式（4段式） 格式 空行，空格
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泰祺教育 www.tqedu.net 字句，行距
杂项 改错不改好(Fudan University is an old school; it is very famous.) 书写规范cannot can’t
基本要求：涂改 拼写 语法
高分作文标志：
1、是否长短句交叉；习惯使用被动we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.
2、是否会使用插入语；如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；
The apartment is very close to your school. = The apartment is within a stone’s throw of your school. 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；
Internet=cyber-space/ the Web/ world/ community
people= individuals/citizens/ netizens/ residents/ working-age adults more and more= growing/increasing… 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
A: Hi John! You’re up early!
B: Yes, the early bird catches the worm! A: Hi John! You’re up early!
B: Well, you know what they say about the early bird! 有关当局要采取更好的措施
The relevant authorities have to make better rules and regulations. The authorities concerned
小 作 文
一．六种头：
1. I am writing this letter to tell you that _____________
I am happy to learn/ hear that ____________ I am sorry to say/ tell you that ____________
2. It is believed/ said/ hoped/ known/ assumed/ acknowledged (by many people) that ____________ 3. 众所周知 As we all know, ___________/ As is known to all, ____________ 4. 我认为： We/ I come to realize/ believe that ____________
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I am firmly convinced that____________ As far as I am concerned, ____________ In the eyes of most people, ____________ I strongly feel/do suggest that____________ I have reasons to believe that____________
5. Everyone (in business/ in the world) has been told that __________
6. I hope this letter can find you in a good mood. / This letter is expected to find you in a good mood.
二．3→30
长句=头+身体+尾巴+垃圾
以复旦很有名为例：Fudan University is famous. 如何变长句 头: As is known to all, ___________________________________ 身体：Fudan University enjoys great reputation and popularity –主句 垃圾：all over the world –介词结构
尾巴 so, I am proud that you become a part of it.---从句 推荐使用从句:
When/if----假设逻辑关系 because/so—因果 but, 转折
，which_____________ ，who_____________
三．静态----动态语言 （be 动词的转化问题）
be popular/ famous: enjoy great reputation and popularity all over the world be cheap: enjoy a low and competitive price in the market. be important: play a crucial role in doing something
eg. Quality plays a crucial role in boosting a company’s popularity and reputation in the modern market.
四：主体部分万能句（2句话）
1. 因果关系
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因果关系几种表达法：
(1) A depend(s) [in large measure] on B.
Success depends [in large measure] on one’s hard work and dedication/ diligence/ great efforts. (2) A give(s) rise to B.
Lack of communication is likely to give rise to social conflicts and disputes. can → be able to may → be likely to should → be supposed to (3) A is a significant cause of B.
The low price, good quality and superior service are significant causes of the popularity of domestic cars in the modern market.
(4) A is supposed to contribute to B.
Lack of environmental conservation awareness is supposed to contribute to global warming.
2010年
第一步：定位-----感谢信
第二步：归纳要求----1.感谢 2. 邀请
第三步：模具对号入座 1.开门见山就说事-----感谢
2.过渡---夸项目，为彼此骄傲/ 或回顾很开心 3.主体（2个万能句）--沟通促成交流 4.结束语------------------邀请来中国玩 Dear Tom,
I am writing to express my sincere thanks for your warm reception, when I joined the Sino-American cultural exchange program. / when I was the member of the Sino-American cultural exchange program. / which made my journey/travel / stay in the US impressive and pleasant/ interesting and meaningful/ colorful.
As is known to all, this program enjoys great popularity and reputation all over the world, so I am proud that we could become a part of it. / I am firmly convinced that when I was the member of the Sino-American exchange program, I had a wonderful time with you guys in the US.
主体万能句：沟通促成交流
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It is believed by many people that communication between China and America is a significant cause of cultural development. I strongly feel that when I return home, the top priority should be given to bring the best part of your culture to our land, which makes it easier for Chinese people to understand the western world.
I hold an expectation that you will pay a visit to China soon. I am looking forward to hearing form you/ your reply/ seeing you.
Yours Sincerely, Zhang Wei
2011年
第一步：定位-----恭喜信
第二步：归纳要求----1.恭喜 2. 建议和指导 第三步：模具对号入座 1.开门见山就说事-----恭喜
2.过渡---------------------夸复旦，为你骄傲 40-50字 3.主体（2个万能句）--建议指导：好好学习 50-60字 4.结束语------------------祝福前程似锦 10-20字
Dear Li Ming,
I am happy to hear that you will go to Fudan University. As we all know, Fudan University enjoys great reputation and popularity all over the world, so I am proud that you become a part of it.
It is believed that one’s success depends [in large measure] on his hard work and dedication. I do suggest that your top priority should be given to learn useful and helpful knowledge in college, which makes it easier for you to become an excellent candidate after graduation.
I hold an expectation that you will have a bright future. ＝You will have a great prospect in the future.
Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei
求职信：复旦MBA院校刚刚毕业，求biz-manager 工作---无经验类型
第一步：定位-----求职信
第二步：归纳要求----1.求工作 2. 原因 3. 面试机会 第三步：模具对号入座 1.开门见山就说事-----求工作
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