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YY8640 写作 老师王菲
四级考试作文的结构要求 1引言段：表明文章话题，吸引读者兴趣，暗示正文内容 ? 用数字：
Nowadays tens of thousands university students are graduated from school, and they all want to be successful in this modern world. ? 用问题：
Do you know any university students who does not want to succeed in the society? What does it take for them to succeed in the modern society? ? 用引语：
“Success comes not only from perspiration and inspiration, but also from sati factory performance in interview.” commented Dr Kenly in his book. ? 开门见山式
In the modern society, almost all university students look forward to success ? 驳论式
As the modern society puts more emphasis on personal difference and personal values, it provides more opportunities for students to seek success. However, the fact is that not everyone can succeed. Success calls for certain opportunities, but more importantly, it calls for many personal qualities.
2 正文段的写法： （1）第一部分： （2）第二部分： （3）第三部分：
3 结论段的写法 （1）总结的写法 （2）评论的写法
四级写作构思文章 （一） （二）
1 expert testimony
2 statistics 3 example
4 personal experience
5 logic and reasoning
6 known facts
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7 analogy
例1主题句：Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation . 1 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.
Dr. David from Harvard university declared after a nation wide survey “Americans get less sleep than they used to.”
2 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.
When in college, I used to sleep about nine hours every day, but now I can sleep for six hours if I want to finish my job on time, I usually feel tired at work.
3 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.
It’s well known that people around us consider sleep the least important item on their list if they faced with heavy pressure from work, family or friends.
4 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.
From the poll of 18th and 19th ,sleep scientists have concluded that the average person used to sleep about 9.5 hours at night, By 1950s and 1960s , sleep schedule had been reduced dramatically, to between 7.5 and 8 hours ,and most people had to wake to an alarm clock.
5 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.
The president, for example, used to admit that he found his job hard to deal with, because among other things, he could only sleep for four to five hours a day. Besides , many
employers complain that their staff can’t work efficiently in the afternoon, for they can’t get enough time for sleep the day before. And the police also reports more traffic accidents because many drivers concentrate on the problem of lack f sleep.
6 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation
We may have found that in spring when trees and bushes come in full blossom, bees usually spend less time in their hive. Because they have more honey-making jobs to do. Similarly, when people have more work to do, they tend to sleep less, and this has come true for us.
7 lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.
Nowadays, the step of life has become increasingly fast, and people are expected to shoulder more responsibilities at work. Besides, as social interactions become more convenient and broader, people have to spend more time keeping friends and other acquaints in frequent contact. As they can’t find more time in one day, all they can do is to borrow the sleeping time.
例2：主题句：Education is also very important for elderly people. 1 Education is also very important for elderly people.
Prof. Wang from Beijing university reported in his study that many elderly people attend various trainings after their retirement, and this is not only helps them improve their skills in these fields, but also provides them with an opportunity to communicate with other elderly people, making their free time more interesting.
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2 Education is also very important for elderly people.
A recent study by the municipal government reveals that more than 88 percent of the retired people attend different kinds of training programs provided by the elderly university. This study also shows that 92.5 percent of these elderly university students agree that these training classes not only teach them useful skills, but also help them to kill their free time more easily.
3 Education is also very important for elderly people.
According to our school newspaper, most old people in the residential area near our university attend many kinds of training classes such as painting and singing. This helps them to spend a richer and more meaningful life. Mr. Ma even comments that his retired life is better than his working life before.
4 Education is also very important for elderly people.
Both my grandparents are active participants in the elderly university in my hometown. My grandpa learns how to paint Chinese painting, and my grandma learns how to cook. The
study keeps them busy and happy, and they used to tell me that this study experience is very important for them.
5 Education is also very important for elderly people.
Usually old people have more time to deal with because they have to quit working. Attending different kinds of trainings can first of all engage their time so that they will not feel bored. Besides, these trainings can also help old people learn some useful knowledge which can help make their more colorful. Therefore, it is quite important for old people to seek a certain kind of education.
6 Education is also very important for elderly people.
We all know that there is a saying that “live and learn”. This means that we should keep learning no matter how old we are. This kind of learning can help the old to keep in pace with the society, and to acquire some useful knowledge to make their retied life more interesting.
7 Education is also very important for elderly people.
When a house is just finished, it does not need much maintenance, but when it becomes old, you have to do much repairing work if you still want it to be functional. When a machine is first made, it does not require much care to run smoothly, but when it turns old, you have to oil it more often and replace broken parts more often in order to keep it running. Similarly, when people become old, we also have to supply new information and ideas to their mind if we want to keep them mentally functional. Obviously, education is the solution. 四级英语句型解析： 一 there be 结构
(1) be动词变化
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There is a concert last night.
There are English book, a dictionary and some books on the desk.
(2) There are many people like to go to movies. There were many friends visited our school.
二 否定结构 2否定结构
(1) need和have 的否定
(2) 否定转移
(3) 部分否定 ——I don’t remember all the details. 全部否定 ——I have never seen such things before.
(4) 双重否定
She is too sensitive not to notice that.
(5) 具有否定意义的短语：
by no means in no way in no wise on no account ? The problems are by no means difficult to solve. ? On no account are you to cheat in the coming exams. ? The situation is serious in no wise.
(6) 常用语否定句的词组： at all by many means in any way in the least -- I am not tired in the least.
(7) 含有否定词不含否定意义 不含否定词但否定意义
三 比较结构
? The climate in Shen Yang is colder than other cities.
? Comparing with cars, the train runs much faster.
(1) 同级比较:
--我叔叔和你父亲一样高。
--这个杯子里的水和那个杯子里的水一样多。
--你的帽子和我的帽子一样。
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