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(2) 比较级
--和英语相比我更擅长物理。
(3) 固定句型： A： “越…越…”
--他越忙越感到快乐。
--你越努力取得的进步越大。
B: 句子主要成分+比较级+and+比较级 --假期航班越来越不贵了。
--在这上面花的时间越来越多。
C：句子的主要成分+the+比较级+of the two --这是两个问题中比较简单的一个。
D：句子成分+more than +…
--He is more than a singer; he is a famous composer.
--A science is more than a large amount of information on some subjects.
--I am more than sad to hear that.
--More than 70% of people are men.
(4) 选择比较：
--与其说他聪明，不如说他幸运。
--在春节，人们宁愿在家一起看电视，也不要出去旅游。
四 因果结构 (1) 原因类
——My secretary didn’t attend the meeting because he was ill.
——I won’t tell you about it since you have not interested.
——We went without him as he was not ready in time.
——In that he is very busy, he feels unable to do it.
——She did not get the job on the ground that she was young.
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——Not that I don’t like the novel, but that I have no time for it.
(2) 结果类
——Everyone work hard, so that the work was finished ahead of schedule.
——I was asleep, with the result that I did not hear the telephone.
——He studied hard, so he passed the exam.
(3) 动词短语 ——前因后果
——前果后因
——混合因果
五 目的结构
——我们采取这样的措施是为了解决这个问题。
——为了使每个人都理解， 请大声的把它说出来。
——我记下他的地址，以免忘记。
六 条件结构
——如果不努力学习是永远不会成功的。
——如果措施可以及时采取的话，问题就会被解决的。
七 并列结构
—— Winter had gone and spring is here.
——Not only is he himself interested in the subject but also his son is beginning to show an interest in it.
—— We had to cope with the action from the enemy as well as the shortage of food, clothing, and almost everything.
八 It 句型结构
（1）It + be + 名词/形容词+ (for + 名词/代词) + 动词不定式 ——保护环境是我们的责任。
——我来参加这个演讲是很荣幸的。
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YY8640 写作 老师王菲
（2）It + be +形容词 +of +名词/代词+动词不定式 ——她连母亲的生日都忘记，实在是太粗心了。
——你们考虑真周到，为我们做好一切必要的准备。
（3）It + be +被强调部分+that
——这就是我生病住院照顾我的那个护士。 九 简单句和复合句间的转换 主语+ 谓语
主语+ 谓语+宾语 主语+ 系动词+表语
主语+ 谓语+直接宾语+间接宾语 主语+ 谓语+宾语+宾语补足语
十 主动和被动之间的转换 Every time when Mary goes to journey, she does not know what clothes she should take. Every time when Mary goes to journey, she does not know what clothes should be taken. We should pay more attention to the elderly who devoted their youth and energy to our country.
More attention should be paid to the elderly who devoted their youth and energy to our country. 四级写作语言质量提升 1.
(1) 在小山顶上有一座古庙。
(2) 只有这样你才能把它做好。
(3) 窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。 2.
我喜欢看书，而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。 3.
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(1) 他可能很忙，要是这样，我以后再来拜访。要是不忙，我现在可以见他吗?
(2) 如果天气好，我们就去；如果天气不好，我们就不去了。
(3) 她本可申请这份工作的，但她没有。
4.
(1) 听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。
(2) 由于不知道她的地址，我没法和她联系。
(3) 他出生农民家庭，只上过两年学。
5. 中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后，我们唱的唱歌，跳的跳舞，还有的讲笑话、下棋，大家玩得很开心。 6.
(1) 他已决定长大了当老师。
(2) 他不大喜欢音乐。 7.
(1) 他太累了，不能再往前走了。
(2) 这电影很有趣，学生和老师都很喜欢。 四级写作常见错误小结 1 Misuse of Parts of Speech
——Charities can’t relief poor people from poverty. They can only help them avoid hunger.
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——Peoples’ attitudes towards it various greatly.
2 Ambiguous References of Pronouns
——She told her mother that her dress needed washing.
——More and more Chinese people can afford private cars. But the increase of them produces unfavorable effects in many aspects. 3 Disagreements
—— He along with his parents take exercises regularly. —— As a university student, we should study hard.
—— He said he didn’t mean you and you are too sensitive.
4 Wrong Form of Nouns
—— Both my parents have received good educations.
5 Redundancy
——She is a pretty and smart woman.
——History is boring. Not many people like history class. Most people think history is boring too. Because it is so boring. Lots of people think history is boring. History is one of the most boring classes in school. That is why I think history is boring.
常见错误小结： 1 语法:
时态, 语态, 虚拟语气, 一致关系(主谓一致,单复数一致,代词一致,平行结构中的成分一致）从句的错误.
2 词汇:
(1) 固定搭配错误___熟练掌握常见搭配.
介词短语,形容词短语以及固定句型中的词汇搭配.
(2) 单词使用不当___熟悉常见形容词或副词的用法;词汇辨析 在形式上或意义上与正确的单词相似的单词. (3) 连接词的错误 (4) 指代关系的错误 (5) 单词词性的错误
错误详解 1 时态错误
时态是一个语法范畴，是用以表示各种时间和动作方面的动词形式。 时间有四个部分，即 现在，过去，将来和过去将来。 动作有四个部分，即 一般，现在，进行和完成进行。
1 常见时态及对应的时间状语
（1）every, often, usually, sometimes等
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