新东方老师精析历年高考英语写作(3)

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a. Waiting for your good news,

b. Looking forward to your early reply, c. Hoping to hear from you soon,

d. Hoping you are enjoying good health,

e. Regretting that I can?t give you a more favorite reply, f. Regretting the trouble I?m causing you, g. Wishing you every success, h. Wishing you a pleasant journey, i. Wishing you a happy New Year,

②采用介词短语,句末用逗号,不用句号,例如: a. With best regards,

b. With kind regards to your family, c. With best wishes to you and yours,

d. With best wishes for your success and happiness,

e. With best wishes for your success in your new field of work, f. With best regards and wishing you all success, g. With warmest regards,

h. With best regards to you and your family, i. With the season?s greetings,

③ 采用完整句子,句末用句号,例如: a. We are waiting for your good news. b. I hope to receive your early reply.

c. We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

d. I thank you very much for your services, and wish your continued success. (5) 结束语(Complimentary Close)

①结束语的一般写法如下: Yours truly, Truly yours, Sincerely yours, Yours sincerely, ②公函常用: Yours faithfully, Faithfully yours, Yours respectfully, Respectfully yours, ③私人书信常用: Sincerely yours, Yours very sincerely, Yours affectionately, Yours ever,

④给亲戚朋友的信常用: Love, Love from, All my love,

Your (ever) loving son/daughter/cousin, etc. Your affectionate nephew, Yours lovingly, Lovingly yours, (6) 署名(Signature)

下面是署名的例子: ①个人署名:

Yours truly,

W. J. Watson

②公司署名:

Yours faithfully,

Lenovo Computer Company

Wang Lin

Sales Manager

附录二:

2000年高考书面表达

假设你是李华,在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨,你目击一起交通事故。警察居让你写一份材料,报告当时所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。

注意:

1. 目击者应该准确报告事实; 2. 词数100左右; 3. 结尾已为你写好。

About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua

一、评分原则

1. 本题总分为30分,其中内容和语言占29分,词数占1分。按7个档次给分。

2. 评分时,现根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。词数在

90-110之间的,加1分。

二、内容要点

1. 时间:2000年2月8日早晨7点15分; 2. 地点:公园路公园门前; 3. 我正沿公路向东走;

4. 一辆汽车从第3街向右拐,驶入公园路时撞倒了一位过街的老人; 5. 汽车未停,沿公园路向西开走;

6. 汽车是黄色的,车牌号是AC864,司机是一位女性。 三、说明

1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达。 2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 四、One possible version

It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn?t stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped

a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.

Li Hua

实际满分作文

At 7:15 on the morning of Feb.8.2000, I was footing eastward along the Park Road. I was about to reach the T-crossing near the City Park when I noticed an old man coming out of the City Park and was trying to cross the street. Suddenly, a yellow car, which had come down the 3rd Street, turned sharply right at the corner. It was driving so fast that neither the driver nor the old man was able to react effectively. Regretfully, the woman driver did not stop to look after him but fled as quickly as possible. Badly injured as he was, the old man tried to take down the car's number. However I managed it, which was AC864. Li Hua

1993年书面表达(共1题,计分15%)

为了配合国际爱护动物周活动,一家英文杂志邀请各国学生提供有关动物的故事。请根据下列6幅图画,用英语为该杂志写一篇故事。

注意:

(1) 故事须包括所有图画的内容,可以适当增加细节,使故事连贯。 (2) 词数100左右。

内容要点:

(1) 父母住在农村;

(2) 家里有一条狗,名叫阿福; (3) 父母带妹妹和阿福去田间劳动; (4) 妹妹走向河边,阿福跟随; (5) 妹妹摘花,失足落水; (6) 阿福边叫边跳下河;

(7) 父母跑过来,看见阿福救妹妹; (8) 妹妹得救,阿福受到称赞。

One possible version:

Ah Fu—a Dog

My parents live in the country. They keep a dog called Ah Fu. One day my parents went to work in the fields taking my little sister and Ah Fu along. While they were working, my sister walked to a river nearby. Ah Fu followed her there. She was trying to pick a flower when she fell into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped into the water immediately. When my parents heard Ah Fu barking they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carrying my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.

1997年书面表达(满分30分)

下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历,请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。

注意:

(1) 短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使其连贯、完整; (2) 叙述必须用第一人称; (3) 词数:100左右。 生词: 违章者 offender n. 十字路口crossroads n.

内容要点

(1) 我哥哥骑车带我去电影院 (2) 在十字路口被两人拦住 (3) 他们因骑车带人被罚

(4) 警察罚他们抓住下一个违章者 (5) 我们于是照样被罚,接他们的班 1. 首先仔细观察,读懂题意

叙述我和哥哥在看电影的路上违章被罚的经过抓住要点,依图编拟提纲 (1) 哥哥骑车带我去电影院 (2) 在十字路口被两人拦住

(3) 半小时前他们因骑车带人被警察拦住 (4) 警察罚他们抓住下一个违章者 (5) 我们于是照样被罚,接他们的班 将要点用重点词和短语列出

(1) go to the cinema by bicycle

(2) come to the crossroads/at the crossroads, stop (3) be stopped by a policeman, half an hour ago (4) make them catch the next offender

(5) We had to stand here and waited to catch another offender. 最后用适当的关联词,过渡句把扩展的句子组合成文。

对扩展的句子可做适当的调整和修改,使文章内容自然连贯,层次清楚。成篇后此文答案如下: One possible version:

The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. ”We?ve found you at long last.” they said. But we didn?t know them. Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, “He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. Hope you don?t have to wait as long as we did. Good luck.”

附录三: 高考英语作文模版 现象说明文

Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.

There are many reasons explaining_______________________.The main reason is____________________.what is more_____________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.Considering all there,_______________________.For one thing_____________________,for another_____ ____.

In Conclusion____________________.

My dear xxx,

. As to , I really suppose it is beneficial to . The reasons are as follows. ( There are a couple of reasons as follows.) To begin with, we and by because it . In addition, enables us to and . For example, we may . Last but not least, From my perspective\\ As far as I'm concerned, . Apart from this, we can

I do believe this will be of great benefit to us and

对比观点题型

(1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1. 有一些人认为。。。 2. 另一些人认为。。。 3. 我的看法。。。

The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

(2) 给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).

In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二).

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).


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