【31-65天】雅思大作文开头、主体、结尾攻略(3)

2019-03-22 09:27

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题目 2:政府应该提高公众的环保意识,以此来促进可持续发展并且创造一个更适合人类生 存的环境.

范文 2:The government should raise the public awareness of environmental preservation, thereby promoting sustainable development and creating a more livable environment.

模板 3: 0

lead to ? (从句) 0

give rise to ? (从句) 0

contribute to ? (从句) 0

result in ? (从句)

题目 3:Many people use distance-learning programs (study material post, TV, Internet, etc) to study at home, but some think that it cannot bring as benefits as attending college or university. To what extent to you agree or disagree with this opinion?

解析:属于半支持半反对类型:

主体段一:提出反对理由 写 distance learning 的好处(Benefits) 主体段二:提出支持理由 写 distance learning 的坏处之一(Problem1) 主体段三:提出支持理由 写 distance learning 的坏处之二(Problem2) 范文 3:(主体段二)

【主题句】Despite the convenience and relatively low cost of distance learning, it would be wise for us to consider it downside.【支持 1】One of the biggest problems is that it cannot create an environment that is conducive to the students’ learning process, especially the much-needed interaction with their professors and classmates.【支持 2】This may result in a terrible sense of disconnection and even social isolation among the learners.【支持 3】In comparison, attending college or university is a more pleasant and exciting experience for young students as they can combine academic learning with a wide variety of social and extracurricular activities. 备注: 本段写作模式为“1+3”,即一个主题句+三个支持句。【主题句】以 despite 为引导

的让步状语从句开始,总结主体段一中分析的好处,可视为“转折法; 支持 1】为 “递 进法”;【支持 2】为“指代法”+“因果法”;【支持 3】采用了“对比法”。

(六)、指代法

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思路:用词出现 this, that, these, those, it, they, such 等代词,与其他方法配合应用 模板 1:This is clearly shown in the following example: ?.(从句) +举例法

题目 1:淡新闻报纸对人们思想的巨大影响→适用于传媒/网络类话题

范文 1:When it comes to how public opinion is formed, newspapers are unquestionably one of the strongest powers. This is clearly shown in the following example: many high school students in America who take the SAT are in the habit of citing articles from a wide variety of influential newspapers in their writing. 模板 2:This has already been proved by the case of ? +举例法

题目 2:谈越来越多年轻人失业的社会问题

范文 2:There is no denying that chronic youth joblessness is a contributing factor of social instability. This has already been proved by the case of increased criminal activities among unemployed or underemployed urban youngsters, many of whom even regard these wrongdoings as a way to make a living.

(七)、转折法

套路: 0

However, ?. 从句 0

Yet, ? 从句 0

Nevertheless, ? 从句 0

Nonetheless,? 从句 0

In spite of,?.

(八)、小结法 思路:在其他方法无法使用或很难使用的时候,可以考虑用“小结法”来凑数 注意:无论多少个主体段,但“小结法”只可用在其他一个,不可多用。

构成:①归纳句(归纳主体段的主要论点);②收尾句(以下四法)

三、结尾段四法

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词汇: 0

in general 0

on the whole 0

generally 0

in summary 0

in conclusion 0

to summarize 0

to conclude 0

to sum up

归纳观点: 0

From the above comparison and contrast, anyone can safely conclude

that… 0

When the advantages and disadvantages are carefully compared, the

most striking conclusion is self-evident. 0

Judging from all evidence offered, we may reasonably come to/draw the

conclusion that… 0

From what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the

conclusion that…

通用句型: 0

It is true that to do… brings about both positive and negative results. 0

But we can try our best to reduce the negative influence to the least extent. Besides, compared with the positives effects, the disadvantages would not so much. 0

What we must do is make sure that the positive ones are encouragedand the negative ones are eliminated as far as possible. 0

All these opinions make sense, and consequently it is hard to choose the best of them. In my opinion, such matters must be left to individual’s conscience.

(一)、建议法

思路:针对一个问题提出自己的建议或提出一种妥善的解决之道

模板: 0

Therefore, it is (strongly) suggested that … (从句) 0

It is urgent (necessary) that appropriate (effective/proper) actions ??? (measures/steps/method) should be taken to correct (improve) … 0

Both government and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this 0

world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves, but also for 0

future generations.

题目:Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their children’ studies. On the contrary, those online games have produced a lot of negative on their mental and physical development. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

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结尾段范文:In summary, from both physiological and psychological points of view, computer games are indeed valueless and may exert negative impact on the development of young children. Therefore, it highly recommended that parents and schools should be alert to this problem, and restrict children’s access to those computer games.

(二)、未来法

思路:对事物将来的发展前景(正面/负面、积极/消极)做出合理预测,指出趋势 模板: 0

Therefore(Thus), it is projected(predicted) that …(从句) 0

With the advent/advantage of …, it is forecast that…(从句) 0

My prediction about … is that …(从句) 0

Personally speaking, I envision a future when …(从句)

题目 1:Some people think that visitors to other countries should respect the local customs and imitate the local behaviors. However, other people who disagree with them think that the host country should welcome different foreign cultures brought by these visitors. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

结构:(双边论证,观点讨论)

引言段:通过背景描写引出话题,并提出一个问题,即游客与东道国之间如何互动

主体段 1:同意意见一方的观点,即游客应该尊重当地习俗并加以模仿

主体段 2:反对意见的另一方观点,他们认为东道国应该对异族文化采取欢迎态度

结尾段范文 1:In conclusion, both sides of the argument contain the partial truth. If visitors and locals respect and learn from each other, it is projected that different customs, values and culture can enjoy a peaceful and harmonious coexistence.

题目 2:Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at the international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

结构:(单边论证)

结尾段范文 2:Given the above argument, it is reasonable to conclude

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that if every member of the society is aware of the relationship between humans and the nature and stops their destructive behavior; my prediction about the environment in the near future is that many ecological strains will be relieved to create long-term benefits for all countries on Earth.

题目 3:The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for poor, underdeveloped countries, but also for industrialized and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.

结构: (分析解决)

结尾段范文 3:To sum up, overpopulation exerts many negative influences on underdeveloped and industrialized nations. Personally speaking, if the current trend of population explosion is allowed to continue, I envision a future when many more people will die of starvation in poor countries and life in even affluent societies will become unbearably difficult.

(三)、本质法

思路:对某一话题或现象进行刨根问底式的探讨,试图透过表象看清事物的本质

模板:

? In fact, …

? In essence, …

?

As a matter of fact, …

高级句:

The crux of the matters seems to ? be …

? At the core of the issue is/are … ? Still, the bottom line is that …

crux 症结、关键 core 核心、本质

bottom line 底线、归根结底

题目:in modern education, computers are being widely used in almost every subject in schools and universities, so some people think that teachers are not playing an important role in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

结构:

主体段 1:某些科目是不能用电脑来教的,比如体育课

主体段 2:教学本身就是一件灵活和富有创造性的事情

主体段 3:教师能够给学生情感上的支持

结 尾 段 范 文 : To sum up, education, or the art of teaching, is not a


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